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message 8201: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments A ghostly skiff, their
earth-bound hearse, who once boldly
trekked the universe.


message 8202: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments heaves a contented *sigh*


message 8203: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Ryan wrote: “A ghostly skiff . . .”

The boat transported
rubies, pearls, and green, dark-eyed
Orion slave girls.


message 8204: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments In the bow she mourns
many lost things, nights dancing
among Saturn’s rings


message 8205: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Wow, Ryan! What images! I think that’s great writing. How in the world to follow it?


message 8206: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments They reached an ancient,
ghostly pier. The underworld
had gathered to hear.


message 8207: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Gust-scattered ash leaves
struck the window, urging him
to run after her.


message 8208: by Ryan (last edited Dec 09, 2020 02:50AM) (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments M wrote: "They reached an ancient,
ghostly pier. The underworld
had gathered to hear."


Thanks, M :)

In ghostly script, carved
on the pier - “2020,
the devil woz ‘ere.”


message 8209: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Al wrote: "I wrote this yesterday, oddly, trying to get back into the groove of writing haiku. I haven't written it for a long time.

If the leaves settle
into place, comfortable,
then we are autumn."


Lovely, Al :)


message 8210: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments The brick path led him
to laughter of an evening
he had forgotten.


message 8211: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Very nice!


message 8212: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Their paths meet beneath
a lilac moon. Eyes linger
long, night ends too soon.


message 8213: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Through leaves the moon shone
like a wave-strewn piece of eight
in a reef’s shallows.


message 8214: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments M wrote: "Through leaves the moon shone
like a wave-strewn piece of eight
in a reef’s shallows."


I love this, M.


message 8215: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Milky Way above,
churning waves shatter the moon—
slivers of morning.


message 8216: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Thank you, Ryan!

The embroidered sails
she unfurls, their spun-gold sheen,
seem sewn from her curls.


message 8217: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments In all the seas, from
west to east, no jewels outshine
her tresses released.


message 8218: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Her crew were loyal,
her ship’s mice always on hand
to offer advice.


message 8219: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Well-dressed pirate mice
are very rare, the hot noon
sun soon makes them bare.


message 8220: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments “We’re well dressed, Malcolm,”
muttered Clyde. Earl sneezed: “That means
an in-law has died.”


message 8221: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments His trousers, once tight,
now were loose; nor did he have
such a big caboose.


message 8222: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Overhead, a flock
of geese; below them, a train
trailing three cabeese.


message 8223: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Steam train, thundering
into morning. Dream train, a
new day is dawning.


message 8224: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Melba drained her third
flagon, then slew the scaly,
steam-breathing dragon.


message 8225: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments She spoke of gold trays,
rubied delights, noon-parched days,
and unfaithful knights.


message 8226: by Ryan (last edited Dec 16, 2020 04:51AM) (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Sheathed by day, noon’s sun
too hot. In darkness cloaked, he
used his lance a lot.


message 8227: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Soon many damsels
were in distress. Lance rode free,
for none would confess.


message 8228: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments His glory ends, one
fatal slip—you just can’t joust
with a snapped lance tip.


message 8229: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Tired of lance, of sword,
of fray, he moved back to France
and ran a café.


message 8230: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Haha! Love it, M :)


message 8231: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Thank you! By the way, I liked the poem you posted in October (“He who fights monsters”). I read it right after you posted it, and I had intended to comment but got distracted.


message 8232: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Thanks, M. Very kind.


message 8233: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Demure, not the sort
to lecture, she leafed through books
on architecture.


message 8234: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments A page from one old
tome tore free, a seed which spawned
her family tree.


message 8235: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Hers was a volume
soaked with such sin, it could have
no ISBN.


message 8236: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Hers was a story
for the ages—knights, maidens,
dragons and mages.


message 8237: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Mae preferred not knight
but farmer: free of chain mail,
buckles, and armor.


message 8238: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Long, winter days pass
spinning yarn; warm summer nights
on hay in the barn.


message 8239: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Great images, Ryan!


message 8240: by C. J., Cool yet firm like ice (new)

C. J. Scurria (goodreadscomcj_scurria) | 4485 comments Creak of porch floorboards
Rid the serene summer morn
in my rocking chair


message 8241: by M (last edited Dec 22, 2020 05:15PM) (new)

M | 11617 comments Nice, CJ!

The shadows lengthened
like spilled wine, foretold the night
of the wild grapevine.


message 8242: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Thank you, Alex! I’ve revised it to tighten it up.


message 8243: by T (new)

T J (tjjaffe) | 119 comments Fingers pick out tunes
cold river smoothing through rocks
bluegrass tumbling down.


message 8244: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments She sang of ghost towns’
haunted saloons’ pianos
playing antique tunes.


message 8245: by C. J., Cool yet firm like ice (new)

C. J. Scurria (goodreadscomcj_scurria) | 4485 comments Walk dizzingly
between life and death; a call
of noises beckon.

Wow that was dark and from a pretty dark origin too. (I've gotten sick recently but I am staying positive. My dreaded "test" is Saturday!).


message 8246: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments The dust on Main Street
softly stirs, lost memories
grate like rusty spurs.


message 8247: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Beautiful haiku, Tamara (#8275).

Take care of yourself, CJ!

Ryan, you know how to write ’em! As usual, you’ve come up with a word sketch as graphic as if it were in charcoal or oils.


message 8248: by M (last edited Dec 26, 2020 07:01AM) (new)

M | 11617 comments Turned posts, board sidewalks:
midday heats the sagging walls,
a well choked with reeds.

Old panes: nothing stalks
the evening’s streets but shadows
of blown tumbleweeds.


message 8249: by C. J., Cool yet firm like ice (new)

C. J. Scurria (goodreadscomcj_scurria) | 4485 comments Thank you M. I appreciate it and I will!

Also great haikus, you guys!


message 8250: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments The sere stalks stand still,
a sill now silted with dust
are shadows no more.


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