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Feb 24, 2017 06:17AM

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writing with me,
My mind has gone blank.
The phantom of the haiku?
The mindless mind?
What sorcery is this!

[In many cases understanding is over rated, anyway. Something understood today will impede understanding something else tomorrow.]
To survive with will
Is Gloria's cry to arm
Our hearts and walk tall.

Of data, which, if exposed,
Would change everything.
Nurse Lee, hands shaking,
Lifted the scalpel; her eyes
Grazed the doctor's neck.

Nurse Lee pondered, “in the old
recorded data . . .”
Finding it, she played
a surgery conducted
by Zubin Mehta.

“It’s no good looking
at your watch, Lee,” said CJ.
“It’s just half past three.”

"Just found out I'm a doctor!"
Nurse Lee was surprised.
(That was more of an inside joke, hehe. Should I keep it there? Now I'm self-conscious about it. Lol).

she bit at her nails.
She looked at her watch."
I agree with M, this is excellent writing.
And what a great sequence, everyone, so much fun.

in the nursing home
brushing cobwebs and dust away .
She blew at the book,
Creating a world wind of dust
Yet, she didn't even care.
For writing haiku was a must
To push her senility away.
(I don't know if that's still a haiku)

colors and stories emerge
of forgotten hope
Out of the brown dust
a world of rainbow transforms
the old into new
Legends of princes
have long since been left behind
joy is in the dirt
Reality finds
itself as the hero now
out of dust comes hope.
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