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message 7801: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments He knew she would be
his wife - his chair spun, a voice
said, "This is your life!"


message 7802: by Lee (new)

Lee (lee-lette) | 1840 comments Confused, was what he was.
What just happened?
He stared up, motionless.


message 7803: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Pondering affairs
and wives, he found himself glad
that he had nine lives.


message 7804: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments All the town’s florists
had green thumbs, lazy fathers,
and beautiful mums.


message 7805: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Her flowery words
left no room for any words
except for their mum's.


message 7806: by Lee (new)

Lee (lee-lette) | 1840 comments Although in disagreement
he had no choice but
to listen to her voice.


message 7807: by M (last edited Oct 07, 2016 03:46AM) (new)

M | 11617 comments Nor was it just what
she’d said, whose poisonous tone
made him flinch with dread

of unslaked evening’s
sharpened claws, its drifting clouds
like a surgeon’s gauze.


message 7808: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments :-)
Interesting and clear imagery.


message 7809: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Thank you, Guy!


message 7810: by Lee (new)

Lee (lee-lette) | 1840 comments He was cut open
by her words, now
he just isn't the same.


message 7811: by M (last edited Oct 17, 2016 03:43AM) (new)

M | 11617 comments Madge lurked in Bellport’s
waterfront dives, her lacquered
nails like flensing knives.

Floyd, once calm, inner-
directed, screamed wide eyed, “I’ve
been vivisected!”


message 7812: by Lee (last edited Oct 17, 2016 09:11AM) (new)

Lee (lee-lette) | 1840 comments Good one M. I don't know how to follow that!


message 7813: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Thank you, Lee! I’m just doing my best to follow yours, which are fun to read. I think you and Guy are the only ones keeping the thread going.


message 7814: by Lee (last edited Oct 17, 2016 10:35AM) (new)

Lee (lee-lette) | 1840 comments Thanks M. I love this thread. Never knew what Haiku was before i joined this group. Yours, Guy's and Ryan's are fun to follow.


message 7815: by Lee (new)

Lee (lee-lette) | 1840 comments Even to this day, She
haunted his dreams, Many-a-nights
he woke with a scream.

For that reason he avoided
women, but Macy made
him rethink his decision.


message 7816: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments (I’d be ashamed of myself, but it isn’t one of my talents.)

Her glance stopped him dead
in his tracks when she emerged
from the clothing racks.

No sonnets, ballads,
or grooks could capture Macy’s
department-store looks.


message 7817: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments M's can be very hard to follow, Lee. You are doing very well! :-)

These are fun. I'll see what I can come up with when I get a chance to breathe.


message 7818: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments She left her fella
(a bloke named Finn) and hooked up
with a mannequin.


message 7819: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Perfect, Ryan!


message 7820: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments What he lacked in moves
and passion, he made up for
in posture and style,

in that suave, square-jawed,
GQ fashion, and possessed
of an ageless smile.


message 7821: by Lee (last edited Oct 21, 2016 01:05PM) (new)

Lee (lee-lette) | 1840 comments 'Dashing!' Many had called him
But in that heavy cloth,
He felt like falling.


message 7822: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments These are great, Lee and M :)


message 7823: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Her hair was tawny,
her skirts racy, like the tides
the Muzak’s rhythm

as long shifts dragged by.
He fell for Macy, and took
his chrome stand with him.


message 7824: by Mark (new)

Mark (crawdadddy) | 402 comments His hopes now are dashed
with lack of stagger-swagger.
Tawny rhythm scene.

Go get clean Benzine.
Posing, filling will, nilly,
broken fires begin.


message 7825: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Macy heard the crash
and found him; rumpled, his tie
that was made in France.

Oh, the mess that lay
around him! She righted him
and straightened his pants.


message 7826: by Lee (new)

Lee (lee-lette) | 1840 comments High pitched laughter sounded
Turning around Macy saw,
soon she joined in laughing

Noticing, she'd placed him in a bra!
What a sight, fitted dress
pants, bra and a tie.


message 7827: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments A small crowd gathered,
with “oohs” and “ahs.” Soon the store
had sold out of bras.


message 7828: by Lee (new)

Lee (lee-lette) | 1840 comments [Nice one M]

Macy wiped her brow,
sighing with relief
she still had her job.


message 7829: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments (Thank you, Lee! I predict that Macy will end up as the store manager.)


message 7830: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments And the promotion
that followed had her selling
to men black brassieres.


message 7831: by Lee (new)

Lee (lee-lette) | 1840 comments [Haha! Good for her, maybe she'll open Macy's!]

[Hey Guy!]

They had no idea what
to do but Macy made
them look so cool.


message 7832: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments His blue eyes wowed them,
his frozen smiles, and he kept
abreast of the styles.


message 7833: by Lee (new)

Lee (lee-lette) | 1840 comments Macy was promoted soon.
For keeping men stylish,
making women swoon.


message 7834: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments She dated awhile,
but tarried. In her spare time
she turned to writing

when her oldest friend,
now married, was no longer
very exciting.


message 7835: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments [Hey Lee! :-) I'm still alive, although barely eking out words anywhere.

Fun Haiku Lee and M! :-) ]


message 7836: by Lee (new)

Lee (lee-lette) | 1840 comments She left the business, now
getting old, her memory was
jagged by blue-eyes and frozen smiles.


message 7837: by M (last edited Nov 09, 2016 08:59AM) (new)

M | 11617 comments Gray haired, her eyes blear
with cataracts, she wandered
with the mannequin

in dreams, where gusts swirled
religious tracts, riffled books
by von Däniken.

In slums on Forty-
Second Street, they spied a tiled,
crumbling rondavel

immured in summer’s
listless heat, sprung from pages
of some old novel.

The mannequin spoke,
that look in his eyes. She scanned
the cracked avenue.

They talked of silk scarves,
splashy French ties, and dress shirts
of uncertain hue.

Among blown newsprint,
a crow dislodged a dog-stained,
scowling Dick Tracy.

A fading display
in a smudged window gazed out,
a younger Macy.

From a nearby shop
long shuttered came the pea-green
smell of something dead.

The crow, disgusted,
muttered, “It’s another day
in the haiku thread.”


message 7838: by Jane (new)

Jane Jago Only seventeen
Young and sweet as honeydew
Stung me like a wasp


message 7839: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments I thought, as I fled
in haste, “I should have guessed it
from her firm, wasp waist.”


message 7840: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Her good willed parents
Filled her with the wasp's sharp sting,
Unreflective truth.


Gil-or (readingbooksinisrael) (meirathefirst) The mirror showed her
a big, giant, fat, huge lie.
But she didn't know


message 7842: by Jane (new)

Jane Jago Only seventeen
That was fifty years ago
Will she crash and burn?


message 7843: by Lee (new)

Lee (lee-lette) | 1840 comments Oh how frustrating!
just watching life's turns,
having to just watch and wait.


message 7844: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Her prince, to keep her
in thrall, hung a large mirror
on her boudoir wall.


message 7845: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments She shook her booty
in her black boudoir with glee,
her mirror kept silent.


message 7846: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Her shaking booty
shocked the land. She played KC
and the Sunshine Band.


message 7847: by Haley (new)

Haley (goodreadscomhaleymariee) | 37 comments With shaking hands
the life of love was lost, again.
Just close the door.


message 7848: by Guy (last edited Nov 19, 2016 11:55PM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Her glass on the door
Quietly mocks all who pass
Love up to see me.


message 7849: by M (last edited Nov 20, 2016 05:28AM) (new)

M | 11617 comments The hanging ferns knew
why her mind’s dim, broken streets
remained unspoken.


message 7850: by Jane (new)

Jane Jago Only seventeen
The day her lover left her
Took her cherry too


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