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Hello Jessica! OMG, I was wondering just the other day if you would ever post here again. I re-read your opening haiku, and it is still stands up so well. And, I'm with Ryan. Your little idea is truly my favourite thread, it is so filled with diversity, wit, wisdom, imagery and very often brilliance.And your latest is beautiful and such a subtle continuation! Very nice.
No words did he have
to free him from the disgrace
of the ache he felt.
Dripping ambrosia,Her voice is moonlight dancing;
Night's bare flesh cooling.
This is my favorite thread, too. Hi, Jessica!
Dark heaven, bliss awaits!Ones' mouths drooling, ganache
sits in pan cooling.
Dark as the night yourdecadent temptation our
appetite sated.
What night was everquite so dark as the May Eve
we ran through the park?
What dawn was everquite so bright as the morning
after that May night?
It was come what maythat Mayday unbailing hay
in the dark cool barn.
He’d stolen the hay.There was no doubt. His lawyer,
though, soon baled him out.
His was free.Form the cells and chains.
All this trouble for a little hay.
It was May that dayThat made away with his hay
And left him un-maid.
Her hair smelled of hay,of summer and first kisses;
breathless, petrichor.
His fingers trembled
childhood's last tattoo, across
her pale, arching spine.
Beautiful imagery Ryan!Under the full moon
Breath now quiet and languid
Their skin now is one.
Thanks, Guy - fever dreams ;) I really like your continuation.
They writhed in the loft,flushed with desire, nor noticed
the barn was on fire.
Such fiery lashesthey’d never seen--the newest
line from Maybelline!
Thick and blackwere their lashes, heavy
laden with piles of ashes.
Thank you, Lee-lette!That blue-eyed, long-lashed,
mortal-sins day, Tuesday Weld
starred in Ash Wednesday,
leaving our bared souls
to yearn, who had sprung from dust
and must soon return.
From Julie:Ashes, there were two
Cigarettes in the ashtray.
She walked far away....
:-DWow, very good guys! Funny and beautiful at the same time. Well done.
ghost in the ashtrayher poem traced on my heart
in cigarette burns
Her stanzas’ blackened,curled edges left me craving
Benson & Hedges.
The still smoking ciggave the high-heeled gumshoe
a red-herring clue.
Well-smoked, the herringnamed Rueben, after a day
sucking a Cuban.
He swore off vodka,Cuban cigars, and women
in British sportscars.
Now he sits at abar, and drinks cheap beer until
his head is quite full.
As his heart longs for
the young girl, that's riding the
mechanical bull.
A faraway drumscored the night; nearby, the hum
of a bent streetlight.
the parabolic,cone of light, defines, and dulls,
the concept of night.
A hyperbolicparaboloid hulked in the weeds,
like shades of Pink Floyd.
much weed was needed,we both conceded, the song,
of pink deleted.
The mechanical-bull-riding girl fled the club
like a frightened squirrel.
[Mark, 8848 is very funny!]The running woman
caught a plane to Pamplona
to chase her bull dream.
(How can I let a girl riding a mechanical bull simply fade into the background?)
Poor Hubert nearlywore out his lips while kissing
Dora’s ample hips.
Hubert wasn’t fondof the Kinks, and he needed
more than forty winks.
She served chips and dips,With chains and whips, oh so hip,
Says do not sue me.
I have no shame.
[LOL! And I missed all the food references to go and have supper! ]'Ewey,' said Louie
When Huey asked for Dewey
to start to sue me.
'Before you can run that suit
Get all your ducks in a row.'
Shame knows not my name.
[LOL! And, oddly enough, I have peach pudding in the fridge!]
[LOL! As a matter of fact, I did and am waiting for that piece of peach delight - with freshly made whipped cream.]
... rump roast with gravy,the Yorkshire lass's pudding
with dark molasses.
[Now I'm the one who needs to apologize!][But won't, being shameless in my shamelessness.]
Whoa! It's just like the good old days in here ;) Nice work all, these are magic!
[ :-) Hello Ryan. Yes. Fun in the Haiku thread tonight.]
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And 'your little idea' is easily my favorite thread. So, thank you :)