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message 7201: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments A rusting, back-roads
filling station made that trip
their last vacation.


message 7202: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Anna, almost. 2nd line appears to be an iamb too long. But perfection is something best left to the gods and the rest to we mere mortals. :-)


message 7203: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments M, yes, a difficult combo. Once I am not on a stupid smart phone I might give it a go.


message 7204: by Ryan (last edited Jul 01, 2015 07:31PM) (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments He cut his locks while
smoking pot; his new hair-do
more a hair-do-not.


message 7205: by Anna (new)

Anna (annasweetrose) | 12 comments Drat I will eventually get there practice makes perfect right?


message 7206: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments @ 8659 -

Even sniffer dogs,
in days to come, shied away
from the petrol drum.


message 7207: by Anna (new)

Anna (annasweetrose) | 12 comments Four legs short stout drool


Bark wine, he is now hunting,

A basset hound run

Now did I get it right this time?


message 7208: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Yes! Perfect.


message 7209: by Anna (new)

Anna (annasweetrose) | 12 comments Finally I knew I would get it eventually


message 7210: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Horror precluded
discussion, for with the drum
came the percussion.


message 7211: by Connie (new)

Connie (conniefrazier) Amazed and dismayed
at complexity of life,
embracing stillness


message 7212: by Nadia (new)

Nadia | 690 comments While I remain still
the world runs in busy streams.
I'm waiting to join


message 7213: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments To be truly still
is to be dead. Yet a corpse
moves back to the earth.
This is the subtle stillness
Of the unchanging movement.

[Sorry about that! Too much Lao-Tzu, I guess.]


message 7214: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Death alone had calmed
his nerves; but, oh, how he missed
cocktails and hors d’oeuvres!


message 7215: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments :-D


message 7216: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments hahaha ;)


message 7217: by Paula Tohline (new)

Paula Tohline Calhoun (paulatohlinecalhoun) | 493 comments I've wanted so to win--
Have all who dismiss my work
hear and love my voice

to know some heart sings
my words that will be recalled
echoed back to me.

(Sorry, it has been a discoutaging day. . .)


message 7218: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments [Hello Paula! Sorry to hear you are feeling discouraged. Well, the Haiku is a great place to revitalize the heart, as there is much of it here and no discouragement! :-) Now to my yoga and meditation practice for the night. LOL!]


message 7219: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Many the beauties
who have lurked, all conspiring
to tarnish my name!

Countless, the duties
I have shirked just to avoid
the horrors of fame.


message 7220: by Anna (new)

Anna (annasweetrose) | 12 comments I love haiku's there so much fun to write


message 7221: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Anna wrote: "I love haiku's there so much fun to write"

LOL! I see we here in the WSS 'Haiku' thread have contaminated your understanding of the seriousness of this difficult and important art. ;-)


message 7222: by Julie (new)

Julie Grenness | 137 comments From Julie:
Duty calls, "What's for
Tea?" "Why ask me, that don't rate
As repartee, see!!"


message 7223: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments 'Wherefore art thou, M?'
came the cries. If fame cannot
tempt, maybe toned thighs?


message 7224: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Her beckoning arms,
her waiting thighs, left Norvell
neither rich nor wise.


message 7225: by Guy (last edited Jul 05, 2015 08:41PM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments With her cat-like grace
And purr-like sighs, poor Norvell
he groans, moans, then dies.


message 7226: by M (last edited Jul 05, 2015 05:27PM) (new)

M | 11617 comments She knew, when Norvell
made gasping sounds, he had fired
the last of his rounds.


message 7227: by M (last edited Jul 05, 2015 05:35PM) (new)

M | 11617 comments Sipping scotch, he tried
to decipher his desire
for Michelle Pfeiffer.


message 7228: by M (last edited Jul 06, 2015 05:17AM) (new)

M | 11617 comments In the oaks’ first buds
were her ways, and in leaf falls
that strewed the mowed grounds.

She had left herself
in noonday’s drink-spilled shadows,
and in the night’s sounds.


message 7229: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Twilight is trickling
between gnarled fingers of oak.
We should rake the leaves.


message 7230: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments (Beautiful, Ryan!)


message 7231: by M (last edited Jul 06, 2015 03:30PM) (new)

M | 11617 comments Soon the leaves we raked
were burned, their smoke vignetting
a blue afternoon

she wore a plaid scarf
in her chestnut hair and gazed
at the spectral moon.


message 7232: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments (Thanks, M. Lovely continuation.)


message 7233: by Ryan (last edited Jul 06, 2015 03:43PM) (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments In dancing leaf smoke,
by spectral moon, she glimpses
bright eyes, closed too soon.

Adoring moon lays
soft caress on drying tears;
over chestnut tress.


message 7234: by Nadia (last edited Jul 08, 2015 04:39AM) (new)

Nadia | 690 comments Silver glow surrounds
My love's angelic facade
A copper cascade

Enraptures my thoughts
I can't think, can't breathe without
My love near by me.


message 7235: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments That's very beautiful, Nadia :)


message 7236: by Nadia (new)

Nadia | 690 comments Thanks. It seems that I can only be a poet late at night.


message 7237: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Her tresses cascade,
Gracefully engulf her wings,
Consumed the young monk.


message 7238: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Within the tumble
of dark locks on pale skin, he
lost his religion


message 7239: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments [Lol!]


message 7240: by [deleted user] (new)

shutting his eyes, he
sighed; what he thought was dead had
been given a life.

a forgotten dream,
a stolen breath, he stabbed Truth
with a pocket knife.


message 7241: by [deleted user] (new)

Ryan wrote: "'Wherefore art thou, M?'
came the cries. If fame cannot
tempt, maybe toned thighs?"


Tsk, tsk, tsk! Lol!


message 7242: by Artsy (new)

Artsy Leslie wrote: "shutting his eyes, he
sighed; what he thought was dead had
been given a life.

a forgotten dream,
a stolen breath, he stabbed Truth
with a pocket knife."


an angry stabbing,
hidden by the dark of night,
silenced by shadows.


message 7243: by M (last edited Jul 08, 2015 08:49AM) (new)

M | 11617 comments (Following Guy’s 8695)


She showed him her wares,
heard a thunk, then saw the form
of the fainted monk.

Stella, a bishop’s
shapely daughter, liked her scotch
with holy water.


message 7244: by Julie (new)

Julie Grenness | 137 comments From Julie:

Shadows disappeared,
Tragic heroes and drama
Queen, eternal rest.


message 7245: by Nadia (new)

Nadia | 690 comments Who's to decide right?
What is right is not always,
Right is wrong sometimes


message 7246: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Milt stayed up drinking
half the night, torn between facts
and what was deemed right.


message 7247: by Lee (new)

Lee (lee-lette) | 1840 comments All her thinking brought tears
"So what if i'm wrong?
No one really cares"


message 7248: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Though she wrung her hands
and cried, just what should be done
she couldn’t decide.


message 7249: by Lee (new)

Lee (lee-lette) | 1840 comments 'You stupid fool'
she chastised herself
'stop moping around and stressing your head?'


message 7250: by Julie (new)

Julie Grenness | 137 comments From Julie:

Her head decided
to get a good night's sleep, so
She checked all her sheep.


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