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message 6901: by M (last edited Apr 10, 2015 04:06AM) (new)

M | 11617 comments Such reminiscence
gave her jitters, just the thought
of banana fritters,

of cocktailed midnights,
the jet set, and their nickname
for her: Crepes Suzette.


message 6902: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Thoughts of the past creep
Like the slow seep of rich cream
On crepes in my sleep.


message 6903: by Nadia (new)

Nadia | 690 comments Sweet creams fluffed over
Drizzled in decadent guilt
Cake melting in mouth

Only in my dreams
Can I partake in dessert
Can the diet end?


message 6904: by Julie (new)

Julie Grenness | 137 comments From Julie (wisdom of the aged):

Diet industry
Dropouts, all that winter warmth,
Spare tyres for us all.....

"One moment on your
Lips, a lifetime on your hips!"
Grandmas used to say!


message 6905: by M (last edited Apr 10, 2015 04:53PM) (new)

M | 11617 comments His shop’s out of tires.
His own need air. His wife, too,
is showing treadwear.


message 6906: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments (I admit, that was lame.)


message 6907: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments He retired tireless,
And with his tire or two,
Retreaded his wife.

[Seems I couldn't help but be lame too. :-( ]


message 6908: by Lee (new)

Lee (lee-lette) | 1840 comments Being retreaded, she sprung to life.
The tired man stared glee-fully at the sight.
She pointed her finger and winced at his slumped state,
"come on you hag, i'll brighten your day"


message 6909: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments [Lol!]


message 6910: by Jim (new)

Jim Agustin (jim_pascual_agustin) | 625 comments Wheel me in, she said.
I'm too tired, he said, but did.
Under the bridge. Rain.


message 6911: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Wheeling crows drove her
to distraction; soon retired
by her pump action.


message 6912: by Guy (last edited Apr 11, 2015 08:22PM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments [Very clever, Ryan! LOL!]


With deft hands and pluck
She took the dead crows in hand
And made the crows stew.


message 6913: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Thanks, Guy. Great continuation ;)


message 6914: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments [Thank you. :-) ]


message 6915: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Tears moistened crow's feet
as the un-handy chef saw
she'd murdered the stew.


message 6916: by Julie (new)

Julie Grenness | 137 comments From Julie (in the spirit):

Crows and blackbirds, all
Baked in a pie, doused in best
of chef's pesticides!


message 6917: by M (last edited Apr 12, 2015 05:40AM) (new)

M | 11617 comments Proven wrong, Morton
bought Tabasco; but nothing
helps when eating crow.


message 6918: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments [Lol! ]


message 6919: by Connie (new)

Connie D. | 656 comments Love in M!


message 6920: by Julie (new)

Julie Grenness | 137 comments From Julie: (Feeling punny!)

Morton's Tabasco
Crow Pie became fiasco,
Burning Rings of Fire!!!!


message 6921: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments [Lol!]

He dashed off the crow
Then burped red fire to show
How to make crow glow.


message 6922: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments The crows know the night
Is dark and full of terrors:
The Red Woman comes.


message 6923: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Haiku and GoT - what a perfect combination! Love it, Rachel.


message 6924: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments A half-burned-out sign:
“The Raven.” Notorious,
worst of the crow bars.


message 6925: by Julie (new)

Julie Grenness | 137 comments From Julie (in the scenic mood)

Rookie raven caws,
Yorick and Hamlet- now bats
in belfry spreading.


message 6926: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Bats with raven claws
Have ravens madly cawing
From their rookery.


message 6927: by M (last edited Apr 16, 2015 02:16PM) (new)

M | 11617 comments Having lost at Rook,
he sought the dark passages
of a worn, hubbed book.


message 6928: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Hahaha - crow bars - hahaha


message 6929: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments [Yes, that made me laugh, too. :-D ]


message 6930: by Mark (new)

Mark (crawdadddy) | 402 comments Burned all my bridges
Like water under the bridge
Like troubled water


message 6931: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments The face of summers
drier, hotter, smiled at him
from shadowed water.


message 6932: by Mark (last edited Apr 17, 2015 08:04PM) (new)

Mark (crawdadddy) | 402 comments Of olde Summers gone
Echo of a Piper's song
Shadows of your smile.


message 6933: by [deleted user] (new)

the smile disappeared
after the sun dried up the
puddle of water


message 6934: by Jim (new)

Jim Agustin (jim_pascual_agustin) | 625 comments puddle of water,
earth, sky, and my little eye
so little, so much


message 6935: by Jim (new)

Jim Agustin (jim_pascual_agustin) | 625 comments ooops... that's "little" twice... sorry...


message 6936: by [deleted user] (new)

The distance between
you and me? look at the sky,
tell me what you see.


message 6937: by Mark (last edited Apr 17, 2015 08:00PM) (new)

Mark (crawdadddy) | 402 comments Wonders from afar
Time is distance where you are
Twinkle little star.


message 6938: by Nadia (new)

Nadia | 690 comments Light breaks through the dark
Even night can"t cover hope
Stars watch over me.


message 6939: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Without any sight
The stars are given bright eyes
And omnivision.


message 6940: by Julie (new)

Julie Grenness | 137 comments From Julie (Cosmological)

Night has a thousand
Eyes, eternal universe,
Elliptical Eye.


message 6941: by M (last edited Apr 17, 2015 12:43PM) (new)

M | 11617 comments (I enjoyed the reference to The Sandpiper.)


He sighed, “Though the night
has a thousand ayes, the day
has as many nays.”


message 6942: by Mark (new)

Mark (crawdadddy) | 402 comments (I figured you would;)


message 6943: by Wordaholic (new)

Wordaholic (wordaholicme) Game of night and day
starts with first breath
ends with the last


message 6944: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments These are fantastic! So many great lines.


message 6945: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Soft opening moves
give rise to her midnight games;
morning finds him dazed.


message 6946: by Connie (new)

Connie D. | 656 comments In a tank I swim
searching a way out held by
invisible walls.


message 6947: by Connie (new)

Connie D. | 656 comments Ryan wrote: "These are fantastic! So many great lines."

Totally agree Ryan.


message 6948: by Julie (new)

Julie Grenness | 137 comments From Julie:

Nemo and friend, swim...
"You drive the tank!" Fishy chat,
"I'll shoot the damn cat!!!!"


message 6949: by [deleted user] (new)

Oh Julie! Lol!


message 6950: by Wordaholic (new)

Wordaholic (wordaholicme) shooting it down again
fighting my demons alone
my shadow rise again


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