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message 8401: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments The drain, circular
and symbolic of holeness,
The runoff sought it.


message 8402: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments M wrote: "The drain, circular
and symbolic of holeness,
The runoff sought it."


LoL! Wow, so clear. Excellent.


message 8403: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments A hole is useful
when it is wholly empty
around holy tears.


message 8404: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments (Thank you, Guy! I’ve been rereading Jung’s The Undiscovered Self. It remains one of the most insightful commentaries I’ve ever read.)

Numinous happen-
ings wrecked his attachment to
the ten thousand things.

Now, a transcendence
mounting, he was past doing
the firm’s accounting.


message 8405: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments M wrote: "(Thank you, Guy! I’ve been rereading Jung’s The Undiscovered Self. It remains one of the most insightful commentaries I’ve ever read.)

Numinous happen-
ings wrecked his attachment to
the ten thous..."


Love the Haiku.

Yes, The Undiscovered Self is a powerful and even transformative read for me. Great insight, as you say, and so helpful to find my feet and an orientation to this world of humans in a numinous universe.


message 8406: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Without accounting
Suns uncountable begin
in enlightenment.


message 8407: by Ryan (last edited Sep 09, 2022 05:43AM) (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Silent tears at dawn
My half-mast heart in tatters
London Bridge is down


message 8408: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Tears resound without.
Lightly, so softly, wending
Towards the river.


message 8409: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments When the bridge collapsed,
its submerged, rusting framework
attracted game fish.


message 8410: by Doug (new)

Doug | 89 comments What am I doing
I don't know where I'm headed
I guess I'll find out


message 8411: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Outside of the find
Where the river flows up stream
And the swallows swim.


message 8412: by Brett (new)

Brett Starr | 291 comments My favorite chair
Why is someone sitting there?
Where shall I sit? Where?


message 8413: by Doug (new)

Doug | 89 comments Nature made a place
To sit and watch the world pass
It stays behind me


message 8414: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Under the behind
nature rests in comfort; to
fart or not to fart.


message 8415: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Blackbeard at first taught
ethics, but wearied and took
a sabbatical

for research to write
a book, then wound up in do-
ings piratical.


message 8416: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments M wrote: "Blackbeard at first taught
ethics, but wearied and took
a sabbatical

for research to write
a book, then wound up in do-
ings piratical."


LOL. Gilbert and Sullivan beware; avast me hearties.


message 8417: by Guy (last edited Sep 16, 2022 07:39PM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments A perchance penzance,
And ethical conundrum:
What is the ship's shape?


message 8418: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments The curvaceous shape
of Spanish treasure galleons
anchored in lagoons.


message 8419: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments All eyes turned starboard
The pirate queen's long sabre
Called to adventure.


message 8420: by Brett (new)

Brett Starr | 291 comments Supersize
By Brett Starr on September 25, 2022

Cheeseburger and fries
It should come as no surprise
Adds size to my thighs


message 8421: by Brett (new)

Brett Starr | 291 comments Free Advice
By Brett A. Starr on September 28, 2022

A word to the wise
Good decisions - exercise
Don't rationalize

Footnote: There are two things to remember about "Free Advice:" 1. It's free, and 2. You don't have to take it. But, you may want to give it a thought before taking action.


message 8422: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Her mornings were marked
by fraught decisions; her nights
by verses Sapphic;

her days by screeching,
narrowly missed collisions
in noonday traffic.


message 8423: by Brett (new)

Brett Starr | 291 comments Morning Hair

By Brett A. Starr on September 29, 2022



Oh, my morning hair

What a mess – I do not care

A hat I will wear


Footnote: Ah, nothing like a good haiku about the good ole college days in the late 80's. I used to wake up 10 minutes before eight, throw on sweats and a hat, grab a pop-tart and head to class. For every problem, there is usually more than one solution. A hat seemed like the best at the time.


message 8424: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments The girl who’d helped him
choose a sink now peered at him
from depths of his drink.


message 8425: by Brett (new)

Brett Starr | 291 comments Dad joke humor brings
Crickets and one hand clapping
The sound of silence


message 8426: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Barb served the evening’s
libation. Crickets furnished
the orchestration.


message 8427: by Brett (new)

Brett Starr | 291 comments Very clever indeed, M.


message 8428: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Thank you, Brett!


message 8429: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments No awnings relieved
the wind’s whitish haze. He wore
a wide-brimmed straw hat,

followed board sidewalks
and worn stairs, the dog days
that Year of the Cat.


message 8430: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Poised to scare dawn’s crows
He stands watch in fields of night
Straw hat silhouette


message 8431: by C. J., Cool yet firm like ice (new)

C. J. Scurria (goodreadscomcj_scurria) | 4485 comments Straw hat, corn cob pipe
a man with upright bare feet
dreaming, rocked in chair

(I haven't done these in a while. Boy am I rusty lol!)


message 8432: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Hello Ryan, nice to see you here with a nice can of oil to help de-rust your words. Very nice.


The stoned rocker sat
Quiet in the still rocking chair.
The cat took his pipe.


message 8433: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Hello Ryan, C. J., and Guy!

Dusk’s full moon was signed
by Betty Crocker. Bart drawled,
“I’m off my rocker!”


message 8434: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments The styled signature
didn’t seem faked--not something
specious or half baked.


message 8435: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Cookie dough diets,
Raw, served with creamless ice-cream
FDA approved.


message 8436: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Wanda Lou’s bowel
removal now awaited
her aunt’s approval.


message 8437: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments M wrote: "Wanda Lou’s bowel
removal now awaited
her aunt’s approval."


LoL! Gracias. :-D


message 8438: by Guy (last edited Oct 27, 2022 08:44PM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments I wanda'd where
the bowers shower flowers
and the ants are few.


message 8439: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments The ant eater’s aunt
liked to devour salted ants
fresh showered in flour


message 8440: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments All the ant-ers worked
for Planters, brainwashed with schemes
of flour power.


message 8441: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Haha! Nice, M.


message 8442: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments The peanuts' nutters
Were avuncular hunters
Of antlers and mice.


message 8443: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments The nutters’ nieces’
uncles, thorn pricked, had swollen,
oozing carbuncles.


message 8444: by Nicky (new)

Nicky (soundgirl) | 1388 comments oozing carbuncles,
those swollen, nutty uncles
gulped down antifungals!


message 8445: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments The fun gals were swell
With lips red, white with stollen
Frowning and sullen.


message 8446: by Brett (new)

Brett Starr | 291 comments Frowning and sullen
Those doggies ain't a rollin'
Rawhide reigns pullin'


message 8447: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments The dry pond reeds reel
Above the dog fish swimming
Reading the real sun.


message 8448: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Her yacht, polished bronze
and teak, she sailed to Quebec
to fish for choupique.


message 8449: by Guy (last edited Aug 26, 2023 10:23AM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments And yet. And nyet
Was not brass clap trap enough
for nyuk nyuk?


message 8450: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments A head of knuckles
A buckler joyfully rides
The tall seas of grass.


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