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message 8151: by Lee (new)

Lee (lee-lette) | 1840 comments Hey M :)

She 'oohed' and 'aahed'
Leafing through the pages
Comparing fashion from the ages.


message 8152: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments So good Lee and M.
Hello! I'm still alive.

The mores of dress
Left her naked and alone
A past to atone.


message 8153: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Paulette, world weary,
stripped of mores, soon embarked
on shopping forays.


message 8154: by Ryan (last edited Jul 25, 2018 05:45PM) (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments In a midnight mall
she found her bail, in the guise
of a clearance sale.


message 8155: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Hello, Ryan!

Soon her ship came in,
its name eBay. She rushed on
board, then saled away.


message 8156: by Ryan (last edited Jul 27, 2018 05:38AM) (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments G’day, M :)

The proud ship, eBay,
scourge of the seas, was grounded
by steep PayPal fees.


message 8157: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments No lifeboats manned, nor
life ring thrown, she might have drowned,
but floated a loan.


message 8158: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Alone, without men,
Paulette her guard down without
Closets to be found.


message 8159: by Lee (new)

Lee (lee-lette) | 1840 comments She jumped from her sleep
Dreaming of eBay: ways to pay;
incited dread for the day.


message 8160: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Her harsh eagerness
Left her wanting to be free
Of being earnest.


message 8161: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments She tried to think, gave
it her durnest. How to dump
both Frank and Ernest?


message 8162: by Lee (new)

Lee (lee-lette) | 1840 comments 'Dump one or both?' she thought
her bills needed paying
and things to be bought.

(There's a grammatical error there, right? so here's the alternative)

'Dump one or both?'
she weighed her options
making a decision from 'satisfaction'.


message 8163: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments At the moment, it was the only thing I could think of to rhyme with Ernest.

They drank enough scotch
to drown in, then lit cigars
and brought a clown in.


message 8164: by Lee (new)

Lee (lee-lette) | 1840 comments Clowns, scotch and cigars:
A good nightime mix?
The worst by far.


message 8165: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Hers, a mood best steeped,
unstirred, of leaves rust mottled,
strange chords vaguely heard.


message 8166: by C. J., Cool yet firm like ice (last edited Oct 16, 2018 12:30PM) (new)

C. J. Scurria (goodreadscomcj_scurria) | 4485 comments Wow that is good M!

A picture steeped in
beauty. Subject: a house front.
Wisely aged in bronze


message 8167: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments A tiny bronze charm
A house with shining doorways
Sealed closed forever


message 8168: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Its dim, engraved dial
and dusty chime were relics
of a handmade time.


message 8169: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments Sewing our moments
Together in a patchwork
Quilt of memories


message 8170: by T (new)

T J (tjjaffe) | 119 comments Grey fur fluffed under chin
Antenna hairs on ear tips
Warm cat under hand.


message 8171: by Nadia (new)

Nadia | 690 comments A life held in hand
Adoration undeserved
Cat is friend most true


message 8172: by C. J., Cool yet firm like ice (last edited Oct 16, 2018 12:36PM) (new)

C. J. Scurria (goodreadscomcj_scurria) | 4485 comments In slumber, lovely
New creation, a born child.
Wondrous gift from God

(One could guess I was going to originally say a line about a person holding a baby as that ties it to the previous haiku but I am just not that good at doing this well, lol).


message 8173: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Smitten by kitten,
The child of God looked at fur
And began to purr.


message 8174: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments M wrote: "Hers, a mood best steeped,
unstirred, of leaves rust mottled,
strange chords vaguely heard."


So evocative M. Beautiful.


message 8175: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Thank you, Guy!

A disheveled cat
with amber eyes climbed rusting,
creaking fire escapes,

sniffed burger wrappers,
dodged horse flies, and peered in rooms
through torn, faded drapes.


message 8176: by T (new)

T J (tjjaffe) | 119 comments Book anchors papers,
Pink note taped to smooth black rock
polished by water.


message 8177: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments serious poems
with serious themes, a rock,
a tree, and laughter.


message 8178: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments He craved buttered scones,
was often cross, rolling stones
yet gathering moss.


message 8179: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments The hot crossed bun
angrily tossed a mossy stone,
unbuttered, alone.


message 8180: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments “Better sad, alone,”
he muttered, “than a croissant
or scone unbuttered.”


message 8181: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments The old baker worked
from dusk til dawn—he had no
bun to come home to.


message 8182: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments :-)

Croissant and butter
alone can atone for much,
dawn's rise and twilight.


message 8183: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments The line dead, he stared
at the phone. There was nothing
for which to atone.


message 8184: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Lol!


message 8185: by Lee (new)

Lee (lee-lette) | 1840 comments Nothing could atone his rage
as the dial-tone reached him.
He huffed; silently seething.


message 8186: by Mark (new)

Mark (crawdadddy) | 402 comments Live once for your dreams.
Nancy Sinatra's advice:
You only live twice.


message 8187: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Her voice conjured docks,
luffing sails, barnacled rocks,
and gleaming deck rails.


message 8188: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments To sail through a life
overlooks how many wrecks
lay on ocean rocks.


message 8189: by C. J., Cool yet firm like ice (last edited May 04, 2019 06:28PM) (new)

C. J. Scurria (goodreadscomcj_scurria) | 4485 comments To glide like a ship
Past all the trodden terrors
Into the future!


message 8190: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Bags of prospectors’
flakes of gold lay among ribs
of a bleached wreck’s hold.


message 8191: by Lee (new)

Lee (lee-lette) | 1840 comments Movements poetic, strokes on canvas:
Swishing! Twisting! To and fro',
An artist's story untold.


message 8192: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments The grace of garbage
Moves oozily to the swamp
Alive! So alive.


message 8193: by Lee (new)

Lee (lee-lette) | 1840 comments 'Life is trash: trash is life'
The garbage man hums;
Into the night.


message 8194: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Out of the refuse
a creature sprang in tie-dyed
bell-bottoms, and sang.


message 8195: by Doug (new)

Doug | 89 comments Names thrown in a hat...
half withdrawn absent reason.
Futures changed like that!


message 8196: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments The hat was leather,
wide-brimmed, torn, and had long been
an object of scorn.


message 8197: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Spring brought rain, FedExed
fruit/nuts baskets, high-priced gas,
and floating caskets.


message 8198: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Charon sighed, then leaned
on the oars. “Rum would be nice,
and maybe some S’mores.”


message 8199: by Ryan (last edited Dec 07, 2020 03:07AM) (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Charon’s rum ran dry,
he gave a grunt, docked his oars,
streamed Emily Blunt.


message 8200: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Charon watched her, stunned,
a-quiver. A line had formed
to cross the river.


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