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message 6751: by Connie (new)

Connie D. | 656 comments M wrote: "The indigestion
of a honeyed question grew:
to bee or not to."



Awesome. :)


message 6752: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Yes. Very awesome M!


message 6753: by Guy (last edited Mar 21, 2015 07:55AM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments The flatulent bee
was all abuzz with being
on a stage Sting-ing.


message 6754: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments (Thank you, Connie and Guy!)


message 6755: by Julie (new)

Julie Grenness | 137 comments From Julie:

X looked at y, Why?
Bard replied: Love was so blind!
Get on with thy life.


message 6756: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments She was a dream, seen
from behind, but otherwise
blessed that love is blind.


message 6757: by Nadia (new)

Nadia | 690 comments Perfection is not
perfect smile and pretty hair
Beauty is inside.


message 6758: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments “Such inner beauty,
often missed!” sighed the gastro-
interologist.


message 6759: by Julie (new)

Julie Grenness | 137 comments From Julie: (bit sick)

Intubation now,
Laryngospasms for you,
Don't turn blue, they'll sue!


message 6760: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments LOL!


message 6761: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments I’ll echo Guy’s LOL. Great one, Julie!


message 6762: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Beauty was something
Velda spat into the eye
of the beholder.


message 6763: by Nadia (new)

Nadia | 690 comments The spittle flying
Stung the beholders wide eye.
The nerve of Velda.


message 6764: by Julie (new)

Julie Grenness | 137 comments From Julie,

Thus, nerves aquiver,
So Aghast, such front, all that
Glistens is not gold.


message 6765: by Guy (last edited Mar 23, 2015 08:01PM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments .


In silver moonlight
Her extended tongue glistened
And it was not gold.
Her spittle lit up the night
And gave him small drops of love.


[LOL! OMG, that was — is — so bad!]


message 6766: by Julie (new)

Julie Grenness | 137 comments From Julie,

Faded love, his dream,
Last romance, warm memories,
Smiles light golden years.


message 6767: by Nadia (new)

Nadia | 690 comments Memories fade out
Give way to my emptiness
There is nothing left


message 6768: by Connie (last edited Mar 25, 2015 08:11AM) (new)

Connie D. | 656 comments What appears empty
is just space waiting while the
indecision ends.


message 6769: by Julie (new)

Julie Grenness | 137 comments From Julie.


Now the stage is bare,
Maybe there's someone there, you know,
'Cause we ain't dead yet!!!!


message 6770: by Nadia (new)

Nadia | 690 comments Here I am waiting,
Waiting for eternity
I won't be alone


message 6771: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments A silent exchange
marks eternity's ending:
my morning coffee.


message 6772: by Jim (new)

Jim Agustin (jim_pascual_agustin) | 625 comments My first cup, milky
with drowned stars swirling.
Too soon, the bottom.


message 6773: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments In tired dreams he heard
primordial sounds made by
submerged coffee grounds.


message 6774: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments His dreaming, darkly
caffeinated; his boxer
shorts, percolated.


message 6775: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments (I’ll write another one when I quit laughing!)


message 6776: by Jim (new)

Jim Agustin (jim_pascual_agustin) | 625 comments Hahahaha!


message 6777: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments :o)


message 6778: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Lol!


message 6779: by Connie (new)

Connie D. | 656 comments Silly Ryan. ;>


message 6780: by Julie (new)

Julie Grenness | 137 comments From Julie,

All dreams, awaken
Pristine, symbolism's fine,
Café au lait time!


message 6781: by M (last edited Mar 27, 2015 03:45AM) (new)

M | 11617 comments Her dreams, warped shadows
in a prism, wavered, fraught
with symbolism.


message 6782: by Nadia (new)

Nadia | 690 comments Shadowy figures
Faces from the other life
Stuck in the world of my mind


message 6783: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Great, images, Nadia and Robyn! “Faces from the other life” and long shadows in “the frosty twilight.” What a setting for a story.


message 6784: by Nadia (new)

Nadia | 690 comments Thanks, M!


Stiff fingers gripping
Holding me back from waking
Fighting is futile.


message 6785: by Guy (last edited Mar 27, 2015 08:40AM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments The shadow knows all
And moves with us like the air
we fear may leave us
without fingers to hold truth,
without thoughts to hold off death.


message 6786: by Julie (new)

Julie Grenness | 137 comments From Julie:

Death, beyond the door,
Portal, this side of midnight-
No, mere lucid dreams.


message 6787: by Nadia (new)

Nadia | 690 comments The bell tolls for me
Its clang calling me to doom
Closer with every step


message 6788: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments I was hale, strutting,
and dapper till doom’s bell reared
and swung its clapper.


message 6789: by Julie (new)

Julie Grenness | 137 comments From Julie:

"Fear not, little flock!"
Today's the first day of the
Rest of your life! Smile!


message 6790: by Nadia (new)

Nadia | 690 comments You definitely lightened our dark themes, Julie.

Always, forever
My life is in your rough hands
Til death do us part


message 6791: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments These old beaten hands
Ache to hold familiar tools
Brush your once black hair.


message 6792: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Long hair once raven
has taken on an ash gray
bottled by Revlon.


message 6793: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments His craven raven
Was waiting to be ravished
On wings to heaven.


message 6794: by Julie (new)

Julie Grenness | 137 comments From Julie,

Heavenly highway,
To Hell, down to Planet Earth!
Games people do play!


message 6795: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments They called each other
horrid names in the strange course
of their bondage games.


message 6796: by Ryan (last edited Mar 28, 2015 03:07PM) (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments The kiss of leather
gives the Phoenix flight; shackles
slide from virgin minds.


message 6797: by Julie (new)

Julie Grenness | 137 comments From Julie,

Overthinking minds,
Never meaning what they say,
Life's too short, it seems.


message 6798: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Though he hadn’t meant
the things he’d said, that evening
he lay just as dead.


message 6799: by Julie (new)

Julie Grenness | 137 comments From Julie.

Another little
Death of love, afterglow bliss,
Love's pathetique!


message 6800: by Jim (new)

Jim Agustin (jim_pascual_agustin) | 625 comments Love, lost before death
parts us. Dry as the Red Sea,
walls of water, fish.

-o-


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