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message 6251: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Oh my...

;o)


message 6252: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments “It’s the sort of cage
I could like!” with a sly wink
chuckled Captain Pike,

and Vina murmured,
“I suppose I should slip off
these strange silver clothes.”


message 6253: by M (last edited Aug 21, 2014 05:47AM) (new)

M | 11617 comments She masked the disgust
she was fighting. Her gown lay
on the polished floor.

Pike had proven less
exciting than the creatures
caged on Talos IV.

From a guard she swiped
a communicator. Though
the signal was spotty

she got through, hungry
for what could sate her: “Please beam
more crew down, Scotty!”


Lillianmoore *Natlia Romanova and Bucky Barnes* | 67 comments ((Wow. Did my haiku start this Haiku harem?))

An old quotation
At the lips of her lover
"Friend with benefits"


message 6255: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments A friend in need is
A friend indeed; a friend who'll
Tease is far better.


message 6256: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments An odd flirtation
From her pale blue open lips
And delicate tongue.


Lillianmoore *Natlia Romanova and Bucky Barnes* | 67 comments Tongues and needles and
A majestic lovely man
He sees a lady


message 6258: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments No. It wasn’t just
that she knew me so well, knew
the ways to tease me;

she knew how to rub
on the petroleum gel--
how to de-grease me!


message 6259: by Caitlan (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments Hehehe.


message 6260: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Lol!


message 6261: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments What I remembered
were dust and thirst, her gray eyes,
the noon that brought her,

my heart a sudden,
wild cloudburst, my life spattered
with the rainwater.


message 6262: by M (last edited Aug 22, 2014 01:48PM) (new)

M | 11617 comments The packing sheds rust
in the August sun; nearby,
a squabbling of crows.

“Come for the harvest,
flaxen-haired one,” a voice sings
from the parched corn rows.


message 6263: by M (last edited Aug 22, 2014 01:56PM) (new)

M | 11617 comments When at last night fell,
Norma packed her suitcases,
nor lit the tapers.

Beyond the stone well
lay a life of strange faces,
of glass skyscrapers.


message 6264: by Ajay (new)

Ajay (ajay_n) | 1138 comments Wow, M!


message 6265: by Paula Tohline (new)

Paula Tohline Calhoun (paulatohlinecalhoun) | 493 comments In remembrance
forgetting is still alive.
Our past lives in choice.


message 6266: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Lovely, Paula.


message 6267: by Ryan (last edited Aug 23, 2014 04:07AM) (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments The moan and sobbing
of gats receded; silent
comes the final hunt.

Brothers in arms, no
fight conceded; enlisted
on another front.


message 6268: by M (last edited Aug 23, 2014 04:55AM) (new)

M | 11617 comments Ryan, you've got the form down to a fine art; and the parallel layout of the two stanzas, with the precisely placed semicolons, is very nice.


message 6269: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Thanks, M.


message 6270: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Great way to start my day, everyone. Thank you.


message 6271: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments Silent arrowheads
Penetrating fantasies
Cupid's dirty work


message 6272: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments The town was aghast
At the rash of virgin births
After Cupid's drunk.


message 6273: by C. J., Cool yet firm like ice (new)

C. J. Scurria (goodreadscomcj_scurria) | 4486 comments To be drunk with love
sounds so wrought with silliness
... could I receive it?


message 6274: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments Could I be worthy?
Of the golden chalice held
By such sweet fingers?


message 6275: by M (last edited Aug 27, 2014 04:06AM) (new)

M | 11617 comments Midnights her lips sought
a graven chalice plundered
from the dark palace.

With what thirst she drank
the nectar! Nor was she caught,
for who’d suspect her?


message 6276: by M (last edited Aug 25, 2014 09:19AM) (new)

M | 11617 comments Her eyes now alcoves
where rasping leaves rise and swirl
in a moon’s stage light,

her voice the low hum
of forgotten phone numbers,
she unclasps her hair.


message 6277: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments "The low hum of forgotten phone numbers"
LOVE that!!


message 6278: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Wow, that is really good.


message 6279: by M (last edited Aug 25, 2014 02:56PM) (new)

M | 11617 comments Thank you, Rachel and Alex and Ryan! It was what came into my head this morning about 3 a.m. when I couldn’t go back to sleep but was too sleepy to get up.


message 6280: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Within almond pools
beneath parabolic brows
I swam forever.


message 6281: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Very nice, Ryan! How to follow it?


message 6282: by M (last edited Aug 26, 2014 04:47AM) (new)

M | 11617 comments The lake reflected
a cedared knoll, the streaked moods
of late-summer skies.

He glimpsed the goddess
who was his soul, in the depths
of one woman’s eyes.


message 6283: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Like that! Very nice.


message 6284: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Thank you, Ryan. Good morning!


message 6285: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments 10pm for me, but good morning to you too, M :)


message 6286: by Ryan (last edited Aug 26, 2014 05:40AM) (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Her eyes reflected
a bearded troll, of dark moods
like slate winter skies.

She glimpsed the goodness
within his soul, past the depths
most women dared pry.


message 6287: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments “A bearded troll”! I love it.


message 6288: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Best I could come up with to match your 'cedared knoll'...


message 6289: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments An insatiable
lust for control coldly lit
the eyes of the troll,

who unctuously sought
to enter, suavely masking
his gooey center.


message 6290: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Lol!
Excellent M. Great sequence Ryan and M.

Like caramel cream
His centre pleased her young tongue
And beckoned her in.


message 6291: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments He beckoned her in
But she couldn't pay the toll.
Her soul was the price.


message 6292: by [deleted user] (new)

she walked on eggshells
as she pressed on forward to
a life with no stops.


message 6293: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments Pressed against the wall,
Eggshell fragile; broken heart,
She crumbled, broken.


message 6294: by [deleted user] (new)

cracked limbs failed to mend
on its own; heart made of glass
doomed to be dethroned.


message 6295: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments There was no moment
she could be in, with herself
or with the others.

Instead she wandered
a strange landscape where twin moons
hung in the evenings.


message 6296: by Ryan (last edited Aug 27, 2014 02:50PM) (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Standing on tip toes
Cherry blossom arabesque
Reaching for moonlight


message 6297: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Lovely Ryan!


Lillianmoore *Natlia Romanova and Bucky Barnes* | 67 comments ((Absolutley GORGEOUS, Ryan!
Guy. I messaged you back.))

Blossoms fade away
Like the summertime of youth
To wrinkled, grey farce


message 6299: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Thanks :) Beautiful continuation, Lil.


message 6300: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Petals flit with gusts
That lift and twist and spiral
Detritus new born.

[[Lil, will respond when I have a breath. :-) ]]


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