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message 6201: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments I can't even smoke
The promises you pretend
To keep for my sake.


message 6202: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments I am so obsessed
With where you cast your gaze that
I can't even sleep

Fearing enemies
Laying claims on my long since
Abdicated throne


message 6203: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Wow, Rachel!


message 6204: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Where she in sorrow
cast her gaze lie late shadows
of blustery days.


Lillianmoore *Natlia Romanova and Bucky Barnes* | 67 comments Wind, my love, do blow
Blow like a hellion to me
Until you run out


message 6206: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Down the moon-pale shore
she fled. Spray dripped from her clothes,
her dark hair, her face.

“By the old lighthouse,”
he had said, and soon she reached
that bleak, ruined place.


message 6207: by C. J., Cool yet firm like ice (new)

C. J. Scurria (goodreadscomcj_scurria) | 4486 comments The moon glows pure white
the seas given life- such sights
in beauty of night.


message 6208: by M (last edited Aug 13, 2014 08:00AM) (new)

M | 11617 comments The autumn moon sighed,
dragged down a few cigs, and sipped
a Long Island tea,

splashed shores with the tide,
took the Myers-Briggs, and typed
as INFP.


message 6209: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments The moon’s pale fingers
discern the broken pilings,
the storm-rutted shore.

She thinks of the tern,
the sea like silver filings,
the Norse raiders’ lore.


message 6210: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments For all your ballads
With a guitar in your arms
There's no room for me


message 6211: by C. J., Cool yet firm like ice (last edited Aug 13, 2014 11:26PM) (new)

C. J. Scurria (goodreadscomcj_scurria) | 4486 comments She strums the tune
Her voice lilts as if echoed
to the moon, alone

her sound is. Just her
the guitar- sad yet lovely
the blue love song was.

(Inspired from a song I remember. "Lover's Moon") :D


message 6212: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments (Rachel, you need to publish these! How to follow CJ’s?)


message 6213: by M (last edited Aug 14, 2014 06:58AM) (new)

M | 11617 comments He closed his Goethe,
opened his Byron. There gleamed
an autumn’s lodestar.

Wind whipped sheet music,
waking a siren, her lair
a Spanish guitar.


Lillianmoore *Natlia Romanova and Bucky Barnes* | 67 comments Her hair is red; nay,
A siren red that makes men
Fall under her spell


message 6215: by Paula Tohline (new)

Paula Tohline Calhoun (paulatohlinecalhoun) | 493 comments I am wandering
no direction and few words
no sign posts, no guides.


message 6216: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Thank you, Alex. I think it was the professor in Thomas Carlyle’s Sartor Resartus (“the tailor re-tailored”) who said, “Close thy Byron; open thy Goethe.”

How to follow Lillianmoore’s or Paula’s?


Lillianmoore *Natlia Romanova and Bucky Barnes* | 67 comments ((M, plain ol' Lil will do if thy fingers doth tire. It's a compliment, though, to have thee question how to follow mine, in my own underrated opinions. I thank thee heartily.))

Weary wanderers
Women of the world at large
Tire yourselves to rest


message 6218: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Nor would she that curse
rescind! A rotting signpost
with a stylized rune

creaked at the crossroads
in a November wind, lit
by a witch’s moon.


message 6219: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments In plague-infested
days of old, when plates were wood
and ale mugs were tin,

and the rumors rife
of pirates’ gold, nearby stood
a gaunt wayside inn.


message 6220: by Nicky (new)

Nicky (soundgirl) | 1388 comments Treasure chest of tales
still to be told; knights of
yore and pirates gold.


message 6221: by Paula Tohline (new)

Paula Tohline Calhoun (paulatohlinecalhoun) | 493 comments An oddment of stars
burrow in the universe
shining differently.

The strange reflections
spark only for the careless;
blindness becomes moot.

What of tomorrow
when today is yet unseen?
Find yesterday's sheen.

In starry oddments
yet burrowed in the secrets
we cared not to find.


message 6222: by Guy (last edited Aug 18, 2014 05:01PM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments .


We carried secrets
That like stars their gravity
Have moved and bound us.

Their weight guides our paths
With such soft unseen fingers
That we are like breath.

The breath that finds skin
And caresses it even
As the stars watch us.


Lillianmoore *Natlia Romanova and Bucky Barnes* | 67 comments ((My heck, Guy, that was gorgeous!))


message 6224: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments I second that.


message 6225: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments [Thank you Lillian and M. It's been a while. I needed to shake the dust off. Great to see how much excellent writing has been put up here in my long absence.]


message 6226: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments I’m glad you’re back!


message 6227: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Thank you! We'll see if I can sustain my being back. Still very busy in life.


message 6228: by Paula Tohline (new)

Paula Tohline Calhoun (paulatohlinecalhoun) | 493 comments As long as the moon
absorbs and reflects the light
there will be warmth enough


message 6229: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments The reflected moon
Paused in the October leaves,
Emptied the garden.


Lillianmoore *Natlia Romanova and Bucky Barnes* | 67 comments The month October
Scary and yet exciting,
Little lamb, my birthday

(Those who have not watched the musical "Gypsy" will most likely not get the last line.)


Lillianmoore *Natlia Romanova and Bucky Barnes* | 67 comments ((Wow, Al, that was creepily delicious! Great job!)


Lillianmoore *Natlia Romanova and Bucky Barnes* | 67 comments Alex (Al) wrote: "A leaf floats through an
October wind, circling down
onto autumn's end.

The bard yawns a song,
sleepily welcoming the
winter's beginning.

A moon shrinks into
a pale river bend. The
gray sun doe..."


((Guess it just depends on your point of view. I personally loved it.))


message 6233: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Lillian and Al. Both beautiful and reflective!

Thank you Al. Glad you enjoyed it.


message 6234: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Far beneath his song
The dark chords unbound his voice
Reformed the soft clay.


Lillianmoore *Natlia Romanova and Bucky Barnes* | 67 comments ((I messaged you back, Guy. :D))


message 6236: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments [[:-) Yes. And I will respond soonish. ]]


message 6237: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments (Sorry for the delayed response, but thanks for the lovely compliment M. It means a lot!)

A voice like a glove
Sliding silk along her spine
To hint at her hips

A suggestion of
Quickened breath sounds, a loud moan
Silent promises


message 6238: by Guy (last edited Aug 19, 2014 11:41PM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments In the hushed clear night
The bright moon is warm skin and
The tickle of breathe.


message 6239: by Guy (last edited Aug 20, 2014 08:48AM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments His forgotten voice
Began to growl with vigor
The call of her touch.


message 6240: by M (last edited Aug 20, 2014 05:10AM) (new)

M | 11617 comments In dreams he confessed
of whom he was fond, the girl
who haunted his days,

who wandered through leaves
as autumn undressed the oaks
in an evening’s haze.

Sometimes a redhead
or bottle blonde, she followed
the old railroad ties

past the grist mill’s stones,
the reeded pond, and lured him
with murmuring eyes.


message 6241: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Thank you, Alex! As usual, it’s a couple of ballad stanzas masquerading as 5-7-5.


message 6242: by M (last edited Aug 20, 2014 07:19AM) (new)

M | 11617 comments Beautiful, Alex!


The hearth fire crackled
hollowly. Her photographs
lay in the drawer.

What unearthly hue
would her hair be, he wondered,
next time he saw her?


message 6243: by Ryan (last edited Aug 20, 2014 03:46PM) (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Haha, I know the type - always wailing ;)


message 6244: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments Love's hangover churns
In intolerant stomachs
Courting heart burn


Lillianmoore *Natlia Romanova and Bucky Barnes* | 67 comments "Take me!" she cried out
"Take me, oh please! Far away
Where the Nazi's are."


Lillianmoore *Natlia Romanova and Bucky Barnes* | 67 comments ((I have no idea where that came from.))


message 6247: by M (last edited Aug 20, 2014 04:47PM) (new)

M | 11617 comments His heart was what she
built a fire in when she spoke--
that tall, blonde siren,

her fingertips charged
with lightning (and how she used
them could be frightening).


message 6248: by Guy (last edited Aug 20, 2014 07:57PM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Lillianmoore wrote: ""Take me!" she cried out
"Take me, oh please! Far away
Where the Nazi's are.""


Lol!

Great fun, everyone. :-)


message 6249: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments AL! Sheesh. LOL!


message 6250: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Star Trek haiku! A flashback to the days of the U.S.S. Micrometer and the space harem Plasmodium (1167-1346).


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