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message 5651: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments It never was clear
What dwelled within the mirror:
He, she, or neither?


message 5652: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments “I’m an unconscious
confection,” it hissed, “what Jung
terms a projection.”


message 5653: by Rachel (last edited Mar 21, 2014 01:31AM) (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments Jung's Freudian notes
Reduced many a dream to
Hot dogs and hallways.


(True story. Check out a dream book that emphasizes Jung. Funny stuff.)


message 5654: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments She dreamed pale summers,
dishwater days, hushed voices
in dusty hallways.


message 5655: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Beautiful, M, love it!


message 5656: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments (Thank you, Ryan! Rachel’s was fun to follow.)


message 5657: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments Sweeping up dust cakes
A nostalgic's aging feast
Dried up memories


message 5658: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments silk corner cobwebs
entwine yesterday's dry husks
- bloodless and rotting


message 5659: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments (WOW. I may just have to save that one Ryan!)

The past mummified:
Dehydrated eye of fate
Rusted sewing shears


message 5660: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments (I'm flattered, Rachel. Thanks. It's a direct result of the stunning writing you've all posted here).


message 5661: by Ryan (last edited Mar 22, 2014 06:09AM) (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments sightless and almond
her eyes, like milk; deft, she weaves
knotted thread to silk


message 5662: by Nicky (new)

Nicky (soundgirl) | 1388 comments Each silk woven knot;
a point,marked,along life's
intricate journey.


message 5663: by Angie (new)

Angie Pangan | 4795 comments A rich life woven
with only silken smoothness.
Alas, not for me.
My life, woven from burlap,
The life of the poor.


message 5664: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments A rich life is not
Determined by the cloth that
Composes it's threads.


message 5665: by Angie (new)

Angie Pangan | 4795 comments This lace and burlap
are both made from the same thread,
with different patterns


message 5666: by Ryan (last edited Mar 22, 2014 05:32PM) (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments threadbare and ragged,
my hand-me-down youth; in smiles
dressed, in laughter clothed


message 5667: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments A hand-me-down life:
Will I fit in or will they
Know an imposter?


message 5668: by [deleted user] (new)

Behind the mask is
a face of a man trying
to fit in the crowd.


message 5669: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Adjusting his mask,
the Opera Phantom sighed,
“Maybe they won’t ask.”


message 5670: by [deleted user] (new)

skiddaddle my love
the waves are breaking fast now
see you in the sky


message 5671: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments (An interesting, sort of eerie, haiku, Cat!)


message 5672: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments She reassured me
with the shore birds’ distant cries
and the storm-frothed waves.


message 5673: by [deleted user] (new)

gone are the blue days
mouths are full of Niobe
a rare element


message 5674: by [deleted user] (new)

gone are the good days
mouths make mighty moans
but kisses are where?


message 5675: by [deleted user] (new)

Rachel wrote: "A rich life is not
Determined by the cloth that
Composes it's threads."


Here confess lover
naked - your clothes are flowers
heaped in a bouquet


message 5676: by [deleted user] (new)

Ryan wrote: "threadbare and ragged,
my hand-me-down youth; in smiles
dressed, in laughter clothed"



ragged are your threads
your smile hands me a dress
the cloth is honey


message 5677: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Love it, Cat! Beautiful continuation.


message 5678: by [deleted user] (new)

Ryan wrote: "Love it, Cat! Beautiful continuation."

Thanks, Buddy!~


message 5679: by [deleted user] (new)

Leslie wrote: "Behind the mask is
a face of a man trying
to fit in the crowd."


His sweet eyes sparkle
and gaze into the distance
the rain masks his tears


message 5680: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments “She’s gone,” the trawler,
rusting, said as gulls cackled
beyond the boat shed.


message 5681: by [deleted user] (new)

cumberland road-some
deleterious try out
who will anchor line?


message 5682: by [deleted user] (last edited Mar 24, 2014 09:17AM) (new)

M wrote: "“She’s gone,” the trawler,
rusting, said as gulls cackled
beyond the boat shed."


cumberland road way
the umplumbed oceans are now
throw line to a fish


message 5683: by [deleted user] (new)

Cat wrote: "M wrote: "“She’s gone,” the trawler,
rusting, said as gulls cackled
beyond the boat shed."

cumberland thanks
the fisherman whose line yields
a walk of life there



message 5684: by [deleted user] (last edited Mar 24, 2014 08:52AM) (new)

trill beyond the trees
a relative gathering
songs for a feast


message 5685: by [deleted user] (new)

Tried cation
of human being treacle
The times are our God


message 5686: by [deleted user] (new)

visualize birth
for vice and self government
vow to treasure Me.


message 5687: by [deleted user] (new)

Haiku must believe
in sounds that have no letters
invisible love


message 5688: by [deleted user] (new)

traffic jam on now
because the future was then
yesterday is here


message 5689: by [deleted user] (new)

Yesterday was gait
walking in the ornaments
that yield pine for sport


message 5690: by [deleted user] (new)

We move through her fate
wealthy in the darkness's blush
because love was kin


message 5691: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments (Wow, Cat!)


message 5692: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Darkness’ blush was the
sensation on which he wrote
his dissertation.


message 5693: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments Darkness dissembles
Faithfulness to moon and stars
But admits to fog.


message 5694: by Ryan (last edited Mar 24, 2014 03:26PM) (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments wishes, like fishes,
celestially night swimming
- in dawn's fresh air drown


message 5695: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments “He said there’s more fish
in the sea,” Gertrude sniffled,
“more fish than just me.”


message 5696: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments 'How narrow your view,'
said she, 'I am the ocean,
what are fish to me?'


message 5697: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments He fled, black and blue,
to pen his weekly column,
“The Narrower View.”


message 5698: by [deleted user] (new)

whenever the comb
pulled through the sierra
windsurfing began


message 5699: by [deleted user] (new)

M wrote: "He fled, black and blue,
to pen his weekly column,
“The Narrower View.”"


Execrate the page
that you signed in blood - your name
in unlettered script.


message 5700: by [deleted user] (new)

Rachel wrote: "Darkness dissembles
Faithfulness to moon and stars
But admits to fog."


I like this. :)


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