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message 5451: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments But your ken of Ken
left you puzzled yet again:
can you not ken Ken?


message 5452: by Nicky (new)

Nicky (soundgirl) | 1388 comments Yes, she can ken Ken,
But does not care to Can-can,
So, see if you can!


message 5453: by Paula Tohline (new)

Paula Tohline Calhoun (paulatohlinecalhoun) | 493 comments Ken cannot can-can
That's all I ken about Ken
Don't care to ken more.


message 5454: by Paula Tohline (new)

Paula Tohline Calhoun (paulatohlinecalhoun) | 493 comments I said that I would try to write a Haiku in Latin. That attempt is below. I admit to using Google Translate to augment my VERY RUSTY Latin, but fear that they are worse than I. Let me know if you wish for a translation. (If I were you I would prefer to remain mystified!)

Nam tempus diei
Gratias ago Deo,
Sed nec mihi longius.


message 5455: by [deleted user] (new)

Her ken was her den
Her den was akin to them
The din of her kin


message 5456: by [deleted user] (new)

Paula Tohline wrote: "I said that I would try to write a Haiku in Latin. That attempt is below. I admit to using Google Translate to augment my VERY RUSTY Latin, but fear that they are worse than I. Let me know if yo..."

:) Annaeus~


message 5457: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments A friend for Ken, his
kemosabe; the plastic
babe known as Barbie.


message 5458: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments His wee size appalled
him. The shrimp on the barbie
was what they called him.


message 5459: by Nicky (new)

Nicky (soundgirl) | 1388 comments (Very good Ryan & M you guys crack me up!)


message 5460: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments (Thank you, Nicky! Shrimp on the Barbie is one of the menu items at Outback Steakhouse. Finding a place for it in a 5-7-5 was fun.)


message 5461: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments (Thanks, Nicky!)


message 5462: by Ryan (last edited Feb 24, 2014 05:23PM) (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments After Special V
from a mobster, Wee Shrimp danced
the big Rock Lobster.


message 5463: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments He danced and watched the
lobster claws wave. Then his voice
went up an octave.


message 5464: by [deleted user] (new)

I have been hoping that someone would follow M's.

After a day of
'hard' work, he felt sad to end
up in a large wok.


message 5465: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments He looked at the pans
they had in stock, and thought he’d
better take a wok.


message 5466: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments The funky chicken
was lobster's goal, how he loved
old time wok and woll.


message 5467: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments (I’m glad I hadn’t taken a swig of coffee when I read that! I’d be cleaning up my computer. I’m still laughing.)


message 5468: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments RDF! Great start to the day!


message 5469: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments (First Al, now Guy...reunion day on the WSS!)


message 5470: by Guy (last edited Feb 25, 2014 07:43AM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments LOL! Hello Ryan. Work has been overwhelmingly busy - my morning times just about completely gone. And life has been busy too.

And Ryan, very VERY funny! RotF and LMAO funny!


message 5471: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Hi, Guy. Hopefully it is the pleasant type of busy. Good to see you again.


message 5472: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Fun! As in Keystone Cops. Will send pm with some details. Work has become very amusing.


message 5473: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Rusty, but very funny.


message 5474: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments The lobster, whistling,
lengthened his stride, and took a
wok on the wild side.


message 5475: by [deleted user] (new)

Lol! Hi Al, Hi Guy, Hi M, Hi Ryan! :)

He wanted to be
a chef but the wok took him
to the sea to surf.


message 5476: by [deleted user] (new)

on the sea a word
or two: the names of feelings.
Tidal waves of words.


message 5477: by Guy (last edited Feb 26, 2014 07:39PM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Hi Leslie!


The sea wove her words
In waves of gossamer strands
Sounding her music.


message 5478: by [deleted user] (new)

Spider moon shone bright
The ocean was abysmal
A jive composed well


message 5479: by Nicky (new)

Nicky (soundgirl) | 1388 comments Hi Cat - I love 'a jive composed well'!

Churning and swirling
Their aquatic dance,turquoise
Waves raise white caps.


message 5480: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Great images, crew. These are stunning.


message 5481: by [deleted user] (new)

Nice one, Nicky :)


message 5482: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments The oyster put in
many laps before he joined
the Boston White Caps.


message 5483: by [deleted user] (new)

Nicky wrote: "Hi Cat - I love 'a jive composed well'!

Churning and swirling
Their aquatic dance,turquoise
Waves raise white caps."


Thank you!

I might change the second line to /a Topaz Ocean.


message 5484: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments 'Topaz, the ocean's timbre?'

Timbre -> the color of sound...

Just an idea :)


message 5485: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments The pearl of wisdom
Was not in accord with the
Timbre of the waves.


message 5486: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments Dissonant gemstones
Banished to shore by sea gods
To quarrel with men


message 5487: by [deleted user] (new)

The lonely riddle
of a divergent pathway
semiprecious stones


message 5488: by [deleted user] (new)

Ryan wrote: "'Topaz, the ocean's timbre?'

Timbre -> the color of sound...

Just an idea :)"


Ryan, that is perfect! Thanks :)


message 5489: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Many explorers
wore out their shanks to solve the
riddle of the Spanx.


message 5490: by [deleted user] (new)

The vault is pleasing
je ne sais quoi, some have said
oriented dark


message 5491: by Nicky (last edited Feb 27, 2014 03:43PM) (new)

Nicky (soundgirl) | 1388 comments (Oh, darn - I had one for two posts ago - re semi precious stones. - Can I sneak it in? - I was quite chuffed with it...Apologies if not allowed.

Rainbows radiate
Translucent beams, the crimson
Garnet set in gold.

)


message 5492: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments A red gemmed crown
Casting prismatic phantoms
Unworthily borne


message 5493: by Paula Tohline (new)

Paula Tohline Calhoun (paulatohlinecalhoun) | 493 comments I was crowned at birth
Daughter of the King's children
We are all royal.


message 5494: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments You are all amazingly talented. These are beautiful.


message 5495: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Fie on a life of
grime and toil! Thanks, ye gods,
I was born royal.


message 5496: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments The Lorde is the foil
That will give to the royal
a berth in the soil.


message 5497: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Although my mother
gave me birth, in the end I’ll
berth with Mother Earth.


message 5498: by Paula Tohline (new)

Paula Tohline Calhoun (paulatohlinecalhoun) | 493 comments M wrote: "Although my mother
gave me birth, in the end I’ll
berth with Mother Earth."


But the earth where you berth will be the richest and best topsoil, no doubt, fertile enough for many more royal births and eventual berths.


message 5499: by Rachel (new)

Rachel Strayer | 338 comments Although I gave birth
I am no mother standing
At this plot of earth


message 5500: by M (last edited Feb 28, 2014 01:35PM) (new)

M | 11617 comments Lovely and ghostly
was she who in moonlight stood
by the wind-tossed sea.


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