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message 5401: by Mandy (new)

Mandy Blake | 1231 comments Loss made her hardened,
with tears like diamonds, and
a heart made of stone.


message 5402: by Angie (new)

Angie Pangan | 4795 comments Her heart was stony.
It would crumble or shatter
instead of bruising.


message 5403: by [deleted user] (new)

Jonah bought jug wine
Sang not tonight Josephine
Very John Wayne like


message 5404: by Paula Tohline (new)

Paula Tohline Calhoun (paulatohlinecalhoun) | 493 comments She writes not haiku.
She does not even try to.
(Hence no final rhyme.)


message 5405: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments 'Twas a lark who sang
my final rhyme. I'd always
imagined ravens.


message 5406: by Mandy (new)

Mandy Blake | 1231 comments 'Tis better to be
lamented by ravens than
fore told by chickens.


message 5407: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments He learned that Hawthorne
and Dickens had been foretold
by prairie chickens.


message 5408: by Mandy (new)

Mandy Blake | 1231 comments With writing that looked
like chicken scratch, his plots were
often slow to hatch.


message 5409: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments an age old debate
the chook pondered which came first
- plot or character


message 5410: by Mandy (new)

Mandy Blake | 1231 comments When her story got
a case of plot rot, chicken
soup didn't help alot.


message 5411: by Paula Tohline (last edited Feb 19, 2014 10:10AM) (new)

Paula Tohline Calhoun (paulatohlinecalhoun) | 493 comments A Haiku Play in One Act

"You first," said the egg.
"No, no! You first!" hen replied.
The curtain descends.


message 5412: by [deleted user] (new)

Haiku in One Act:) By the Copy Cat

What? asked the princess.
Go to sleep replied the witch.
Wake up, said the Prince.


message 5413: by Paula Tohline (new)

Paula Tohline Calhoun (paulatohlinecalhoun) | 493 comments Cathe wrote: "Haiku in One Act:) By the Copy Cat

What? asked the princess.
Go to sleep replied the witch.
Wake up, said the Prince."


Love it! Ain't it fun to put silliness in a form? (Of course that's the story of my poorly formed, silly life! :-D)


message 5414: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments “Substance?” she giggled.
“Not a trace of. Plot rot’s what
it’s got a case of.”


message 5415: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments These are excellent! Well done :)


message 5416: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Mandy’s #6740 and #6742 had me rolling. She can write them, can’t she?


message 5417: by [deleted user] (new)

I agree. I wonder who influenced her? Hmmm..

These are wonderful, Paula, Cat, Ryan, Mandy and M! :)

Good morning from here :)


message 5418: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Good morning, Leslie!


message 5419: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments With a rotten plot
that time forgot, my novel
reeked of something fowl.


message 5420: by [deleted user] (new)

Paula Tohline wrote: "Cathe wrote: "Haiku in One Act:) By the Copy Cat

What? asked the princess.
Go to sleep replied the witch.
Wake up, said the Prince."

Love it! Ain't it fun to put silliness in a form? (Of course t..."


Silliness in form
the whirls and twirls of the wind
Thank you for your poem :)


message 5421: by Mandy (new)

Mandy Blake | 1231 comments Thank you guys.


message 5422: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments What vice could surpass
my silliness except my
willy-nilly-ness?


message 5423: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments My willy wanders
To places best not thought of
But leaves with a smile.


message 5424: by Paula Tohline (new)

Paula Tohline Calhoun (paulatohlinecalhoun) | 493 comments Who has not a thought,
willy-nilly though it be,
of smiles that could be.


message 5425: by Nicky (new)

Nicky (soundgirl) | 1388 comments Happily he smiles;
His ignorance can not
Spoil his utter bliss.


message 5426: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments To be good or could
That may be Willy's question,
Between May or B.


message 5427: by Mandy (new)

Mandy Blake | 1231 comments Between May and B
is Mayberry, and a one
bullet deputy.


message 5428: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Lol!


message 5429: by Paula Tohline (new)

Paula Tohline Calhoun (paulatohlinecalhoun) | 493 comments LOL! said Guy
But just what secrets does he
Have 'tween he and she?


message 5430: by [deleted user] (new)

quick - write a haiku
quick witted - something in French
quilt my words in poems.


message 5431: by [deleted user] (new)

haiku quilts cover
my cold feet and my cold hands
keep me warm haiku


message 5432: by Paula Tohline (last edited Feb 21, 2014 11:36AM) (new)

Paula Tohline Calhoun (paulatohlinecalhoun) | 493 comments Vite, je vais écrire
Un haïku en français, mais
Pourquoi un seul, eh?


message 5433: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments RDF!


message 5434: by Paula Tohline (new)

Paula Tohline Calhoun (paulatohlinecalhoun) | 493 comments That "eh" makes it Canadian French. Which makes it REALLY RDF!


message 5435: by [deleted user] (new)

What is RDF?
Canadian French abbrev-
iation. Please tell.


message 5436: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments (Paula, you’re amazing. Not only a wizard at rhyming verse, but fluent in French. Why only one haiku in French, indeed! There’s no rule against it.)


message 5437: by [deleted user] (new)

A run of the mill haiku
In a run down neighborhood-
Dreams of a rug joint

Where I'd flub the dub
And write haikus on napkins
In a flossy dress


message 5438: by [deleted user] (new)

Where I'd pull on pearls
dangling from my little lobes
alone and happy.


message 5439: by Mandy (new)

Mandy Blake | 1231 comments Parlez-vous français?
To which I answered, "No way."
et l'écureuil rit.


message 5440: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments What hangs on the lobes
Are a curious teaser,
His but to please her.


message 5441: by Paula Tohline (new)

Paula Tohline Calhoun (paulatohlinecalhoun) | 493 comments RDF means,en englais, at least as far as this linguistic dilettante understands, Really Damn Funny. But I suppose funny is in the mind of the reader.

I am probably limited to one French haiku, but when my
mind wakes up, I'll work on a Latin one. Cathe,
if you think my French is lousy, wait until you read my Latin. Pig-speak is my forte!


message 5442: by Paula Tohline (last edited Feb 21, 2014 07:35PM) (new)

Paula Tohline Calhoun (paulatohlinecalhoun) | 493 comments Mandy wrote: "Parlez-vous français?
To which I answered, "No way."
et l'écureuil rit."



Pourquoi l'écureuil rire?

Il a dû être un écureuil canadien.


message 5443: by Paula Tohline (last edited Feb 21, 2014 08:06PM) (new)

Paula Tohline Calhoun (paulatohlinecalhoun) | 493 comments The mill runs slowly.
Little meal is created
in any language.

(Pardonnez mon français archaïque. Il a été longtemps depuis que j'ai utilisé ou étudié.)


message 5444: by Paula Tohline (new)

Paula Tohline Calhoun (paulatohlinecalhoun) | 493 comments M wrote: "(Paula, you’re amazing. Not only a wizard at rhyming verse, but fluent in French. Why only one haiku in French, indeed! There’s no rule against it.)"

Wow! Are you delusional or what? I'm not even fluent in English (my native language). I make up most of the French I use, but I will admit to being a Francophile, and e even more so an Anglophile, which is probably the source of all my problems in the overly wordy, logorrhea area of my writing avocation.


message 5445: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Lol! Yes. If you love a language set,it free to run wild and lose itself in your indulgence.


message 5446: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments We shivered through verbs,
smoked cigars after pronouns;
she's gifted in tongues.


message 5447: by Nicky (new)

Nicky (soundgirl) | 1388 comments At the tower of
Babel she felt her mind had
become unstable!


message 5448: by Nicky (new)

Nicky (soundgirl) | 1388 comments Paula Tohline wrote: "RDF means,en englais, at least as far as this linguistic dilettante understands, Really Damn Funny. But I suppose funny is in the mind of the reader.

I am probably limited to one French haiku, bu..."


I have always wanted to learn Latin. At school you had to be in the top set at Maths to be allowed to do Latin(??)I'm not great with numbers - so that was that.


message 5449: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments That she wasn’t tops
in math left her Latinless
and consumed with wrath.


message 5450: by Paula Tohline (last edited Feb 22, 2014 08:20AM) (new)

Paula Tohline Calhoun (paulatohlinecalhoun) | 493 comments I topped not one list.
Even the best dilettante
was beyond my ken.


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