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message 5301: by [deleted user] (new)

M wrote: "Japanese lanterns
punctuate a still twilight
among the larches."

Really like this. I just discovered larches...Midwest, I think.


message 5302: by Md Sajjad (new)

Md Sajjad (mdsajjadazim) "Ghosts in my closet
rib cages fluctuate
bloods in my toes"


message 5303: by Mandy (new)

Mandy Blake | 1231 comments Thanks M


message 5304: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Thank you, Cat! I think larches are beautiful.


message 5305: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Ghosts peel the blue paint
the closet door’s panels have worn
since she turned the knob.


message 5306: by Mandy (new)

Mandy Blake | 1231 comments Who you gonna call?
If there is something weird and
it does not look good.


message 5307: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Bed sheets and pillows,
the soft ghosts of my childhood,
easily dispelled.

Lies and betrayals
rise now to haunt, fearsome ghosts
weakness empowered.


message 5308: by Mandy (new)

Mandy Blake | 1231 comments The ghosts of my past,
ever haunting my future,
no peace in between.


message 5309: by Mandy (new)

Mandy Blake | 1231 comments Lies about the truth,
telling truth about the lies,
tales never ending.


message 5310: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Your whisper, a dream
so real I wake expecting
your lips, not more ghosts.


message 5311: by Mandy (new)

Mandy Blake | 1231 comments The dream of you fades,
the morning takes you from me,
until night returns.


message 5312: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Very nice!


message 5313: by Mandy (new)

Mandy Blake | 1231 comments Thanks Ryan, you too.


message 5314: by Ryan (last edited Jan 31, 2014 09:43PM) (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Insubstantial dreams,
flimsy as storm-blown cobwebs,
fray with day's breaking.


message 5315: by Guy (last edited Jan 31, 2014 11:18PM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments To Dream of Being Alive


I once thought my dreams
were the ghosts of a dead past
but I was so wrong.
I walk those living dreamscapes
Hoping to wake up alive.


message 5316: by C. J., Cool yet firm like ice (new)

C. J. Scurria (goodreadscomcj_scurria) | 4485 comments Dreams may be untrue
Places we might not reach but
strive us for the goal!


message 5317: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Hello everyone! Such great reads, thank you for sharing. And it is so nice to be back.


message 5318: by C. J., Cool yet firm like ice (new)

C. J. Scurria (goodreadscomcj_scurria) | 4485 comments Hi Guy!! :D


message 5319: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Hello CJ! I see this thread is doing very well. Such great writing from everyone!


message 5320: by Mandy (new)

Mandy Blake | 1231 comments Just out of our reach,
the full desire of our hearts,
too much for one life.


message 5321: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments I said to Velda,
“So short is life, there’s no room
for a nagging wife.”


message 5322: by [deleted user] (new)

Nagging wives do cart
groceries home to the husband
and are there for children.


message 5323: by Ryan (last edited Feb 01, 2014 02:55PM) (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Using the axe her
new love bought her, Velda cut
a short life shorter.


message 5324: by M (last edited Feb 01, 2014 04:19PM) (new)

M | 11617 comments (Touché, Cat! A delightful follow-up, Ryan!)


Too late: for him to
make suggestions; too late to
axe any questions.


message 5325: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments For a buxom blonde,
left behind, nagging Velda
had an axe to grind.


message 5326: by Mandy (new)

Mandy Blake | 1231 comments Velda buried the
hatchet, and then her lover.
Cut down in his prime.


message 5327: by [deleted user] (new)

Riparian birds
make nests with cobwebs that gleam
in the sun like dew.


message 5328: by Guy (last edited Feb 01, 2014 08:10PM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Lol! So funny, everyone, and sharp.


The vultures stood watch
While Mandy was axing him
With sharp eloquence.


message 5329: by M (last edited Feb 02, 2014 06:54AM) (new)

M | 11617 comments She left him smitten,
chopped, and soon to be bitten--
indeed, en-raptored.


message 5330: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Lol! That is so funny! Very well done, M!


message 5331: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Thank you, Guy!


message 5332: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Smitten and bitten
Velda took to the whipping
With peaches and cream.


message 5333: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Hi, Guy. Very nice and welcome back!


message 5334: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Ryan! Hello. So great to see you. This iw a quick visit, though. I'm waiting for pizza take-away.


message 5335: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments How have you been
?


message 5336: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Better if I had a hot pizza on the way! Life is good, thanks. And you?


message 5337: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Life is very good. Very busy but mostly in a good way. Aha! PIZZA! LOL! See you later.


message 5338: by [deleted user] (new)

I wish for a pizza on my way too :)


message 5339: by Guy (last edited Feb 02, 2014 08:30PM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Hello Leslie! HUG!


The pizza she ate
was made with peaches and cream
and dark chocolate.


message 5340: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments What Adolfo serves
early and late swelled her curves:
the pizza she ate.


message 5341: by Mandy (new)

Mandy Blake | 1231 comments She wasn't fat, just big
boned, the reslut of munchies
after being stoned.


message 5342: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Lol!


message 5343: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Mandy! Tsk. Tsk.


message 5344: by [deleted user] (new)

cotton woods in fall
inflame bifurcated stems
star like leaves flutter.


message 5345: by [deleted user] (new)

Guy wrote: "Hello Leslie! HUG!
her transit tastebuds
transfix on a cultured crust
the tramp is well fed.



message 5346: by [deleted user] (new)

her transit taste buds
transfix on a cultured crust
from san fransisco

she chews a fair cud
fain to notice the sifted dust
from a whole wheat dough.


message 5347: by [deleted user] (new)

OR

Her transit taste buds
fain to notice the sifted dust
in a whole wheat dough

She chews a fair cud
transfixed on a cultured crust
from San Francisco.


message 5348: by [deleted user] (last edited Feb 03, 2014 03:43PM) (new)

Catherine wrote: "cotton woods in fall
inflame bifurcated stems
star like leaves flutter."


The cheese pizza's girth
circumference of gingersnaps
inflames the senses

little hordoreves are worth
the love apples that wrap
taste bud defenses


message 5349: by [deleted user] (last edited Feb 03, 2014 03:07PM) (new)

Catherine wrote: "cotton woods in fall
inflame bifurcated stems
star like leaves flutter."


Cottonwood cobwebs
insulate homeless nightmares
like dream catchers

branches like cobras
I am soothed by nightingales
Insole dispatchers

Cottonwood cobwebs
insulate homeless bad dreams
like dream catchers

branches like cobras
Insomuch as chronic schemes
breed fair dispatchers


message 5350: by [deleted user] (new)

sweet dreams are composed
of fluffy cotton candy
and colored ribbons

except for him who
chased the dreams with love and a
glass of rye whiskey


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