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message 5101: by Mandy (new)

Mandy Blake | 1231 comments She drank on a mask,
to hide the truth that she was,
drowning in sorrows.


message 5102: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Tequila’s no cure
for drowning. However, it sure
helped her stop frowning.


message 5103: by Angie (new)

Angie Pangan | 4795 comments Stay where you are now.
I don't want you to see me
Cry myself to sleep.

Distance is perfect.
You're too far to see me drown
In my own sorrows.


message 5104: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments She sighed, then collapsed
into a heap and, shaking,
cried herself to sleep.


message 5105: by Angie (new)

Angie Pangan | 4795 comments Those loyal four walls
Had witnessed her silent tears
When no one else had


message 5106: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Restless sleep brought dreams
of fountains, of blue valleys
and snow-capped mountains.


message 5107: by Angie (new)

Angie Pangan | 4795 comments She dreamt of freedom
From all of her aches and pains
That haunted her days


message 5108: by Mandy (new)

Mandy Blake | 1231 comments Dreams were no escape.
Even asleep he haunted,
her nightmare wouldn't end.


message 5109: by Ryan (last edited Dec 30, 2013 02:10PM) (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Through incubus dreams
she tangos. In waking sleep
she walks in shadows.


message 5110: by Angie (new)

Angie Pangan | 4795 comments Nightmares haunted her.
Peace remained a distant dream.
They allowed no rest.


message 5111: by Angie (new)

Angie Pangan | 4795 comments Nightmares haunted her.
Peace remained a distant dream.
They allowed no rest.


message 5112: by Mandy (new)

Mandy Blake | 1231 comments Robbed of all her zeal,
no longer able to feel,
she just tries to deal.


message 5113: by Angie (new)

Angie Pangan | 4795 comments Antidepressants:
How I wish that they would work
And take the pain away.


message 5114: by [deleted user] (new)

dark clouds whirl above
her head, a fearless forecast
of a storm ahead.


message 5115: by Caitlan (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments she unfurls her sails,
choosing to weather the storm;
reckless bravery.


message 5116: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments M wrote: "Guy’s #6484 is intriguing! There’s not only the interest of the “unsought doorway” and what lurks behind it, but that it’s a projection, something from the deep dark of the speaker’s unconscious, u..."

LOL! Thank you M, for such an introspective response.


message 5117: by Angie (new)

Angie Pangan | 4795 comments What were her actions?
Bravery? Stupidity?
Something in between?


message 5118: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Summer had loitered,
toying with the wind vane, with
sails she’d embroidered.


message 5119: by Angie (new)

Angie Pangan | 4795 comments Clumsy hands failing.
Bleeding fingers: the price for
Embroidered flowers.


message 5120: by Ryan (last edited Dec 31, 2013 03:56AM) (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments The scent of jonquils
always awakens something
similar to spring.

Slightly more, and less,
than the first time I travelled
on Bilbo's shoulder.

Back before the world
became solid, when pixies
still danced in gardens.

My old forty-five
crackles to a close, even
magic dragons sleep.

Multi-lane freeways
bypassed Cherry Lane, culled the
Hundred Acre Wood.

The evolution
and degrees of love
bring thoughts of jonquils.


message 5121: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Ryan, that’s beautiful!


message 5122: by [deleted user] (new)

Wow, Ryan! I love it :)


message 5123: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Thank you, M. Thank you, Leslie.


message 5124: by Mandy (new)

Mandy Blake | 1231 comments Great job Ryan!!!


message 5125: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Thanks, Mandy!


message 5126: by Angie (new)

Angie Pangan | 4795 comments Don't know what to say
Ryan's haiku has left me
At a loss for words.

((Great job, Ryan. That was just... wow.))


message 5127: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Nice one, Angie. Thank you!


message 5128: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Searching for lost words,
the tome raider discovered
Lawrence's Pillars.


message 5129: by Angie (new)

Angie Pangan | 4795 comments Ionic pillars:
So strong and understated
Holding the ceiling.


message 5130: by Angie (new)

Angie Pangan | 4795 comments Whoops. I'm getting my architecture confused. Doric pillars are the plain ones. Ionic pillars are scrolls. Oh, well.


message 5131: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Whether Ionic,
Tuscan, Doric, a pillar
made her euphoric.


message 5132: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments :O


message 5133: by Mandy (new)

Mandy Blake | 1231 comments Starting hard like rock,
she found his passionate love,
went soft quite easy.


message 5134: by [deleted user] (new)





message 5135: by [deleted user] (new)

Avalanche Lillies
Blossom high upon a hill -
Tidbit of nature.


message 5136: by [deleted user] (new)

These tropical fish
Anglefish, butterfly, clown -
phosphorescent and homebound.


message 5137: by [deleted user] (new)

Composite columns
of the renaissance era
have "egg and dart" too.


message 5138: by Angie (new)

Angie Pangan | 4795 comments Mother hen and eggs,
Perfect poultry family.
A great breakfast meal


message 5139: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Ryan wrote: "The scent of jonquils
always awakens something
similar to spring.

Slightly more, and less,
than the first time I travelled
on Bilbo's shoulder.

Back before the world
became solid, when pixies
sti..."



Ryan, this is superlative! Every image and note on point, evocative while advancing the conceit of the poem with picture perfect meter. Great, writing. [Guy: Bows to a master.]


message 5140: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments And the thread since page 130 has been exquisite. Excellent writing everyone. This has been a pure joy to read.

Now what to write?

To be without a road

The confused rooster
could not find which road to cross
or which cross to bear.


message 5141: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments He was equally
at a loss to figure out
which bears he should cross.


message 5142: by Angie (new)

Angie Pangan | 4795 comments We lose an old joke
dear to us, if the chicken
never crossed the road.


message 5143: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Thank you, Guy.

Very nicely written, Guy, M and Angie - clever word play.


message 5144: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments The dead baby’s angst
began to quicken: a road,
a nail, a chicken!


message 5145: by Angie (new)

Angie Pangan | 4795 comments It's another nail.
Finish building your coffin,
So you can lie down.


message 5146: by Mandy (new)

Mandy Blake | 1231 comments In the dark, slow your
heart, it will fail when you need
more than you can have.


message 5147: by Angie (new)

Angie Pangan | 4795 comments My heart is failing.
Didn't protect me from you:
I fell for your wiles.


message 5148: by Guy (last edited Jan 02, 2014 11:21PM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments [Sorry about what you are about to read. My fingers went wild. I couldn't stop them.]


I wiled away time
while waiting for a why not
that wasn't worth while.


message 5149: by [deleted user] (last edited Jan 03, 2014 04:06AM) (new)

I willed time to run
fast until I felt tired of
trying to catch up.


message 5150: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments When I realized
there was no chance of catchup,
I grabbed the hot sauce.


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