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[Rudy, I am told my voice looks green]

I was asked a while ago on how to make things more descriptive. Here is my tutorial.

First off, make everything look nicer by putting a space immediately after each colon and period. For that matter, put a period at the end of each sentence. This includes paragraphs. Put spaces in between things outside of parenthesis and the parenthesis.

Next, you need to make everything more detailed. For instance, tell us how much she weights. What color is her hair? Does she always have a smile on? Appearances are really important. But a personality fills in the blanks (your's is pretty good but it just needs to be properly spaced). Another pro tip: Make your character separate from her power. Don't make a light controller just like light and hate dark. Tell us other things about her. Expand the history. What is normal? Was her family rich or poor? How did she do in school? Ask yourself questions like that.

Finally, tell us what she can do with light. Right now, all I know is she has an affinity for it and can shoot bolts of it. Can she change the color of light? Can she make things glow? Can she make light brighter or darker? Give a few examples.

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im new here how do we jump in sry

[ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*･゜ﾟ･*\(^O^)/*･゜ﾟ･*☆]

Cici wrote: "im new here how do we jump in sry"

um...nooo ide

[ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*･゜ﾟ･*\(^O^)/*･゜ﾟ･*☆]

i have typos 24/7

[ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*･゜ﾟ･*\(^O^)/*･゜ﾟ･*☆]

:/ good luck

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Thera~ Rescuing you from sanity~ wrote: "Well, start by first posting on the Welcome topic, then read the rules. You guys are a little low on the 'grammar and punctuation' scale right now."

Sorry. As I've said before, text speak is my native language. I do write novels though (4 novels in progress at the moment. ;] ), and those have good grammar and punctuation. So, I guess I'll get the hang of using that everywhere else. I think I'll have more luck than coolkid. No offense though.

[ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*･゜ﾟ･*\(^O^)/*･゜ﾟ･*☆]

*grumbles*

i am good at grammer its spelling and caps that get me. i never text talk in rps just gtg brb w/e i said in otehr place

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Lol

[Rudy, I am told my voice looks green]

Well, I may as well make this clear here. Thera can be terrifying sometimes (may actually be a dragon, etc.) but I'm the one who is in charge of making people upset when they refuse to follow the rules. Not that I'm sadistic or an asshole (well, maybe a little) but I refuse to take any excuses or arguments (tad exaggeration but…). So yeah. Hi.

[Rudy, I am told my voice looks green]

And I haven't yelled at anyone about their charrie in over 2 months, so I think I have some fun waiting for me when I get back.

[Rudy, I am told my voice looks green]

Yeah. Remember the Black Nova instance?

[[deleted user]]

K well just a warning I mess up stuff. A LOT so just dont get to ticked.

[Rudy, I am told my voice looks green]

I probably will :-/ Might want to look into that a little more.

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[▕ ▋ ♛ ▍Marisa]

Are there any kinds of powers that aren't allowed?

[[deleted user]]

I dont think so but once again im new and im not a mod

[▕ ▋ ♛ ▍Marisa]

Okay thanks.

[Rudy, I am told my voice looks green]

And also: I can refuse approval of charries. So if there are power that would break the RP, I will say so.

[▕ ▋ ♛ ▍Marisa]

Okay!