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Siobhan | 21 comments Mod
This is my first foray into Goodreads; I'm interested in some of these new online reading groups and am trying a couple of different platforms. Thought I'd start with a really good book, and some really good friends. . .and see what happens!


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Sherry | 1 comments I ordered the book, they shipped it today! Can't wait to get reading...


Alice Azure | 13 comments Cheryl Savageau’s Book of Jewels
by Alice M. Azure

Like her previous poetry collection, Dirt Road Home (Curbstone Press: Willimantic, CT), Abenaki poet Cheryl Savageau’s Mother/Land (Salt Publishing: Cambridge, UK) is a work to which I return often, whether late at night before sleep or during a quiet time in the day. Always, delight comes in my rereading of her work. This used to be surprising to me, for there are few poets whose works consistently lure me to the page. Rather, I seem to be one that gravitates to different talismans (Molly Peacock’s term for treasured poems) composed by a variety of poets.

Savageau was my first poetry teacher. I came to know her in 1994 through Wordcraft Circle of Native Writers and Storytellers. In those years, new poets were matched with professional poets, both having the same or similar tribal backgrounds if possible. I lucked out, and thrived under her mentorship for two years. I remember once asking her, “Is producing one poem a month a good goal?” Her reply was “I’d rather aim for one good poem in a year—a really good poem!”
Beyond my good fortune to have had Savageau as a mentor and that we share a similar legacy from the early French and Wabanaki interactions in the northeast Maritimes, I want to point out some other reasons why I regard her poems as jewels.
It was the way she put together her words, lines and images that first captured my attention. Pure clarity! Not simplicity or easy access—but clear vision and disciplined articulation with little fanfare. Jim Northrup’s syndicated columns in News from Indian Country and all of Robert Conley’s works exemplify this clean, sparse way of writing and storytelling.
Consider the way Savageau describes the importance of a huge swath of our northeastern ocean in “The Grand Banks.” Reading the poem aloud, there is much activity of the tongue, to use a phrase in the introduction to the anthology, From the Fishhouse (Persea Books: New York, 2009, p. xx). Starting out with short lines of few stresses,

this great underwater plateau
this dinner table for fish,

she quickly extends later lines to almost a prose poem,

this feasting place where haddock and cod
gather like buffalo, their numbers too great to imagine

and finishes with

…Whales come
from the warm waters of the south to raise their young here
…filling the waters with a song that can be
heard for a thousand miles, more. Ocean is their word for world.

To me, this poem is a wonderful confluence of sounds, sense and meaning, to quote again the editors of From the Fishhouse (xxi).
In another poem, “Cod,” Savageau shows us how the European’s realization that the Wabanaki people’s method of drying then smoking cod was commercially more viable than

[Filling] the ships
salting the fish
down in barrels,
til the hull is full.

Soon the French needed a land base. Then the poet starts to pull in her lines, ending the poem with terse, nearly all single-syllable words mixed with hard consonants:

dreams
of cod
the gold
of the sea
that will
fill their bellies
and their
pockets

Her poetic brilliance—the mix of humor, history, family stories and recast old Wabanaki stories—are other reasons I keep returning to Savageau’s poems. I get tickled funny with how she can give a light twist to a poem like in “Mendel’s Milkmen.” When some nuns comment about how all of Savageau’s brothers and sisters don’t look alike, and the poet remembers that

a great-grandfather’s
eyes can lay hidden for
generations then
flash in a newborn’s face

The poet’s mother is then reported to say

different milkmen, sisters
different milkmen.

Another poem, “Genealogy,” (from Dirt Road Home, p. 80) gives a clever, but a more poignant turn to its last lines:

Her maiden name
she always told me was
LaForte, the strong,
but now I find it Lafford,
as in a place to cross rivers
as in having to pay the price
of a crossing

Savageau’s list poems are a delight to read. She challenged me once to compose a few, but I got very discouraged, never being able to approach the simple elegance of “What I Save” (in Dirt Road Home, p. 61) or “The Liar” in Mother/Land. It is this kind of poem as woven by Savageau that gives me—to paraphrase Molly Peacock—much pleasure and where I involuntarily, but happily begin to engage my senses and intellect (How to Read a Poem and Start a Poetry Circle, Riverhead Books: New York, 1999, p. 4). That last stanza of her end poem in Mother/Land is, to me, one of the most beautiful in her collection, a talisman of such clarity and brilliance that leaves me breathing “Oh!” in pure joy:

I will knit a spider web beaded with
blueberries, I will knit a bed of corn silk
I will knit prayers of smoke I will knit coverlets of
cricket song pillows of milkweed down
scarves from the long howls of coyotes
I will knit embraces of warm spring rains
sweaters of squash blossoms I will knit
whatever we need my fingers
will never be still


Alice Azure | 13 comments I am sorry, readers, about the loss of formatting in my comments pertaining to Cheryl Savageau's book, Mother/Land. I need to learn how to post on the web--or whatever! Still--I think my basic delight about this book shone through.


Siobhan | 21 comments Mod
No worries!--what an absolute privilege to read such a detailed rhapsody, by one of Savageau's students. . .and a first-rate poet in her own right!!


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