Feedback for my book By James

[James]

Hey everyone I new here and I would love some feedback on my book that I have written. It is call The War From Within (Memoirs of a Lost Soul). It is about an young man that is fighting with the choices that he made in the past, some he was forced to make and others that he made on his own. He knows that there is good and evil inside of him, but all he can see is the evil. The book is available for sampling and buying @https://www.smashwords.com/profile/vi....

[James]

Thank You Jessica