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message 551: by Patti (baconater) (new)

Patti (baconater) (goldengreene) | 56525 comments Yat!

Wear off those fingerprints, Mel!


message 552: by M.A. (new)

M.A. Comley (melcom) Well I'm 3 days in to the challenge and have reached 4080 words (had to take the second day off) I'm pretty pleased with that so far.


Had a lovely five star review from someone across the pond, it's always nice to get them over there, especially as the police procedures are so different.

Oh well, off to meet today's target again.

;-)


message 553: by M.A. (new)

M.A. Comley (melcom) Received a fantastic five star review for Impeding Justice yesterday from a Top 500 reviewer! ;-)

5.0 out of 5 stars Really great action novel, 4 Feb 2012
By
Mole "Mole" (UK) - See all my reviews
(TOP 500 REVIEWER)
This review is from: Impeding Justice (Revised version) (DI Lorne Simpkins thriller (Book Two)) (Kindle Edition)
Lorne is a police officer trying to hunt down a truly evil man, involved in human trafficking, drugs, weapons, terrorism. No matter what the police do, he always seems to be one step ahead of them; and then he kidnaps her daughter and uses the young girl as leverage to torment and humilate Lorne, whilst continuing with his criminal plans.

I found this to be a great story; although I felt that it seemed to take some of the plot from the film "Taken". It has a really great pace to it, and I felt that the story was quite believable throughout. I have seen first hand some of the less pleasant aspects involved in the modern trade in human life, and it can be far worse than is portrayed within this book.

There a few issues with the formatting of the text in the version that I downloaded for my Kindle; words running together, some bad paragaraph separation etc. but this did not detract too much from the book. Of course, this is part of a series; I haven't seent he others, but will probably try to track them down.

A little bit too adult for younger teenagers, but a good read overall.

Nice to wake up to on a miserable Sunday morning. ;-)


message 554: by Emma (new)

Emma (emzibah) | 4125 comments Yay! Congrats Mel x


message 555: by M.A. (new)

M.A. Comley (melcom) Thanks Emma. xx


message 556: by Patti (baconater) (last edited Feb 05, 2012 02:37AM) (new)

Patti (baconater) (goldengreene) | 56525 comments Reminds me. One of my friends told me at dinner last night that she's read and loved the first two and bought Final Justice yesterday. She's really pleased that you're working on the fourth. :)

I've told her to give you a wave on Facebook. Hope she does...


message 557: by M.A. (new)

M.A. Comley (melcom) Really Patti, that's so nice to hear.

I had a 3 star for Cruel Justice from someone who just doesn't understand Lorne's character! I think if characters don't fit into a certain mould people find it hard to warm to them.

To me Lorne's character is like Kay Scarpetta, feisty and determined! ;-)


message 558: by Patti (baconater) (new)

Patti (baconater) (goldengreene) | 56525 comments Absolutely. A strong character is our Lorne.


message 559: by Lorraine (new)

Lorraine Versini (lorraineversini) | 8438 comments I love Lorne, she's total girl power !

I hate people. They're just stupid. Who do they think they are? Why do they think that if they don't like it, it means it's rubbish? Grrrr !!!!!! ##@*%$ !!!


message 560: by M.A. (new)

M.A. Comley (melcom) Calm down, dear as the dear Michael Winner would say. ;-)


message 561: by Lorraine (new)

Lorraine Versini (lorraineversini) | 8438 comments Lol, you tell me that now after unwillingly starting a domestic in my household lol !!??


message 562: by M.A. (new)

M.A. Comley (melcom) Haha! Did I? Was over the veg or the meatballs? ;-)


message 563: by Lorraine (new)

Lorraine Versini (lorraineversini) | 8438 comments Lol ! No it was over him hitting on Lorne Simpkins !


message 564: by Emma (new)

Emma (emzibah) | 4125 comments Haha, just see your Facebook!! Very funny!


message 565: by Lorraine (new)

Lorraine Versini (lorraineversini) | 8438 comments Lol, good old facebook !


message 566: by M.A. (new)

M.A. Comley (melcom) I hear MI5 are recruiting at the moment, Emma! lol

Sorry, Lorraine. xxx


message 567: by Lorraine (new)

Lorraine Versini (lorraineversini) | 8438 comments Nah Mel, had a good laugh lol ;)


message 568: by M.A. (new)

M.A. Comley (melcom) That's what it's all about, Lorraine, life's too short to be miserable! ;-)

Have a good evening. xx


message 569: by Lorraine (new)

Lorraine Versini (lorraineversini) | 8438 comments ;) you too Mel xxx


message 570: by M.A. (new)

M.A. Comley (melcom) I'm featured in the Normandy online mag today, and will be writing a monthly article for them highlighting Indie Authors. Initially the ladies involved in the Indie Chicks will be featured and then anything goes. So I'll be able to feature more authors in our group. ;-)

http://www.normandyinsite.com/the-ind...


message 571: by Patti (baconater) (new)

Patti (baconater) (goldengreene) | 56525 comments Mel. Do you ever sleep?


message 572: by M.A. (new)

M.A. Comley (melcom) Haha! Not lately, no! ;-) Do you?


message 573: by Jud (new)

Jud (judibud) | 16799 comments I really like Lorne too!!


message 574: by Patti (baconater) (new)

Patti (baconater) (goldengreene) | 56525 comments Mel (Lorne's creator, Pete's murderer) wrote: "Haha! Not lately, no! ;-) Do you?"

Not so much, no.


message 575: by M.A. (new)

M.A. Comley (melcom) Thanks Jud. xx

I had a lovely five star from someone today who rated a Lynda la Plante book with four stars. That made my day. ;-)


message 576: by Jud (new)

Jud (judibud) | 16799 comments Yay :o)


message 577: by Lorraine (new)

Lorraine Versini (lorraineversini) | 8438 comments Yay Mel !


message 578: by M.A. (new)

M.A. Comley (melcom) :-)

Frosty here today, so I'm going to get my head down and get some writing done. A little behind on my challenge as my aunt came for dinner yesterday and she can talk for England! lol


message 579: by Jud (new)

Jud (judibud) | 16799 comments plenty of time to catch up today :o)


message 580: by M.A. (new)

M.A. Comley (melcom) Be back later to play. xx


message 581: by Jud (new)

Jud (judibud) | 16799 comments YAY! :o) Hope you get lots done!


message 582: by Andrew (new)

Andrew Duff (thrillwriter) | 38 comments 2,000 words a day?! Hardcore. I'm fitting in a measly 600 or so at the moment.


message 583: by Patti (baconater) (new)

Patti (baconater) (goldengreene) | 56525 comments Hardcore. Yes. Fitting word to describe Mel, I think.


message 584: by M.A. (new)

M.A. Comley (melcom) Gee thanks, I think!!! ;-(


message 585: by Jud (new)

Jud (judibud) | 16799 comments Stop slacking! Back to work!

*cracks whip*


message 586: by M.A. (new)

M.A. Comley (melcom) I've just pinched this saying from someone else on FB!

Make friends with the angels, who though invisible are always with you.... Often invoke them, constantly praise them, and make good use of their help and assistance in all your temporal and spiritual affairs.

ST. FRANCIS DE SALES


message 587: by Patti (baconater) (new)

Patti (baconater) (goldengreene) | 56525 comments Lol! Love it!


message 588: by M.A. (new)

M.A. Comley (melcom) It came in handy yesterday for me, Patti! ;-)


message 589: by Patti (baconater) (new)

Patti (baconater) (goldengreene) | 56525 comments Better day today I hope?


message 590: by M.A. (new)

M.A. Comley (melcom) Didn't manage to get any writing done. ;-( But had good news that we'll be getting a wood delivery on Saturday though! Phew! Must save my strength today for all that humping! lol

I woke up to a fantastic review on Impeding Justice today, which incorporated kind words about Cruel Justice too. ;-) Makes it all worthwhile.


5.0 out of 5 stars Fantastic!, 9 Feb 2012
By
S. J. Mackenzie
This review is from: Impeding Justice (Revised version) (DI Lorne Simpkins thriller (Book Two)) (Kindle Edition)
After being impressed with cruel justice I downloaded this one and it does not disappoint at all. The book opens with Pete, Lorne's partner, being shot and from there on it is a battle against the clock and against the "Unicorn" a criminal Lorne has been hunting down for 8 years. He is a master of escape and has no end of people that he is controlling. Lorne is desperate to catch him particularly after he starts targetting members of her family.

Tensions still exist between Lorne and husband Tom about the amount of time she is spending at work but these tensions don't seem to be as severe as in the first book. It will be interesting to see whether they have further improved by the time the third book is read.

My only criticism was the ending...guess I'll just have to download the next book though


message 591: by Jud (new)

Jud (judibud) | 16799 comments Humping? I hope you mean wood...

YAY! for the 5* review :o) FABULOUS!


message 592: by M.A. (new)

M.A. Comley (melcom) Er Yes, Jud!!! Mind out of the gutter, dear. ;-)


message 593: by Jud (new)

Jud (judibud) | 16799 comments :o) Gave me a giggle


message 594: by M.A. (new)

M.A. Comley (melcom) Me too! lol


message 595: by Katy (new) - rated it 5 stars

Katy | 2662 comments Hey Mel, how are you? (: I've been busy, so haven't been posting - just lurking! Congrats on all the wonderful reviews x


message 596: by M.A. (new)

M.A. Comley (melcom) I'm well Katy, thanks for the congrats.

Sorry you've been so busy though, hope your workload slackens off soon. ;-)


message 597: by M.A. (new)

M.A. Comley (melcom) Just to let everyone know that A Time To Heal is Free today.

http://www.amazon.co.uk/A-Time-To-Hea...


message 598: by M.A. (new)

M.A. Comley (melcom) Today I have my final interview with an Indie. Hope you drop by and take a look. ;-)

http://melcomley.blogspot.com/


message 599: by Donna (new)

Donna Fasano | 53 comments Mel (Lorne's creator, Pete's murderer) wrote: "Today I have my final interview with an Indie. Hope you drop by and take a look. ;-)

http://melcomley.blogspot.com/"


Hi, Mel! Wanted to let you know I picked up a copy of A Time to Heal. Looking forward to reading your blog.


message 600: by Shaun (new)

Shaun (shaunjeffrey) | 2467 comments Started Cruel Justice. 25% in and enjoying it so far :)


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