Discussing the Creativeness

[Bri, A poem begins with a lump in the throat.]

Okay, if you like a poem on the "Poetry" thread, or on the Short Story thread, copy it to here (with the authors name) and talk about it.

[[deleted user]]

Sounds fun.

[Bri, A poem begins with a lump in the throat.]

Now....GO!

[[deleted user]]

Plain old Bri wrote: "From Poetry:

Bex, why can't I? He obviously keeps making you depressed which in turn depresses ME"

Because slaping him won't help ANYTHING. It might make YOU happy, but that really won't help me at all. I am just trying to let this go, I mean he can't help who he likes, plus he is only 14 so he can still change his mind. I'm just glad we weren't already together cause that would have been a million times worse.


(this is continued from the conversation we were having about my poem Why)

[Bri, A poem begins with a lump in the throat.]

As I said before Bex, whatever, I don't care. Go get depressed if you want.

[[deleted user]]

I'm not depressed, just upset.

[Bri, A poem begins with a lump in the throat.]

Okay.


You should write another poem.

[[deleted user]]

hm yeah I can try

[Natshane, Inspiration comes and goes....]

XD I like your bickering! XD

Write another poem!

[Bri, A poem begins with a lump in the throat.]

I'm glad someone does! ;)

[[deleted user]]

I wrote another one. It's in poems. :)

[Natshane, Inspiration comes and goes....]

Yippie! Checking it out.

[[deleted user]]

Haha okay! :)

[Bri, A poem begins with a lump in the throat.]

Do you hate me? Do you want me to go away?
Do you love me? Do you want me to stay?
Cuz I dunno what’s going on with you,
But I’m trying to move on, that’s your cue,
Step up, act like a man, raise your chin,
Let me shake your hand, let’s part as friends,
Trust me when I explain, I really liked you,
I wish we could’ve worked, but it wasn’t true,
I made a promise to myself and to God,
And I am trying my best to hold to the Iron Rod,
Stop enticing me, leave my head alone,
I know you don't mean to, but you make me feel so alone,
And you make me feel bad, because everyone says I was a jerk,
But I'm not ready for love, all I meant was to flirt,
And you scared me, don't you understand me by now?
But you're gone, you forgot, it doesn't matter how.

[[deleted user]]

*sigh*

[Rachel]

I like that one very much. Its speaking to me in many ways

[[deleted user]]

Yeah same here.

[Bri, A poem begins with a lump in the throat.]

What kind of ways?

[[deleted user]]

I'm guessing your talking to Rachel?

[Bri, A poem begins with a lump in the throat.]

No, both.

[[deleted user]]

Oh okay. Well um Forrest? He kind of confuses me and makes me feel like that. I just don't know how I feel about every thing that happened. And I don't know if he really even wants to be my friend any more even though he's says he does. Everything is just.... Different. And a lot more confusing. I mean obviously he doesn't like me how he used to, and idk. It's confusing and complicated.

[Bri, A poem begins with a lump in the throat.]

Yeah, I know how you feel. Those feelings are part of why I wrote this poem.

[[deleted user]]

Yeah. I really wish I could write a poem like that and just let out all my emotions cause I noiticed when I write poems about something I don't normally feel that way any more. *sigh* but when ever I try no words come to mind about how I feel. That's why I can't just let go and not like him anymore. No matter how much I wish I could just be over him. I've tried, trust me I've tried. :\

[Bri, A poem begins with a lump in the throat.]

Whatever Bex

[[deleted user]]

It's true okay. Sorry if you don't believe me but it's the truth. I always feel better about something and am not as stressed or up set about it. I don't know about you, but I write to get my emotions out and sometimes I just have "Writers block" and can't. And for some reason this is one of those things. I mean cause trust me I HATE being sad because of all this crap. Like when Chelsea left I wrote a poem about it and it helped me realize thet even though she isn't here and I miss her like crazy, I need to move on and past everything that happened, cause you can't change the past. And this is just another road block that is in my way, and I fell that by not being able to get all my feelings out on paper, is God's way of telling me that I'm not done with this trial until I set everything straight again no matter how long it takes. But sorry if you don't believe me but it's how I feel and I would like it if you would not just blow off how I feel cause it doesn't make me feel very good about my self.

[Bri, A poem begins with a lump in the throat.]

I'm sorry Bex for being insensitive

[[deleted user]]

*sigh* thanks. Sorry for kind of snapping, I didn't get enough sleep last night. :P

[Bri, A poem begins with a lump in the throat.]

You're one to talk....

[[deleted user]]

Just because I got more sleep than you doesn't mean I'm not tired.

[Bri, A poem begins with a lump in the throat.]

I didn't say that.

[[deleted user]]

Fine whatever

[Natshane, Inspiration comes and goes....]

Guys! LONG TIME NO CHAT!

[[deleted user]]

Hey Nat!!!!! What's up?!

[Natshane, Inspiration comes and goes....]

Hey Bex! I'm missing you guys, this group, everything!

[[deleted user]]

Aw thanks Ive missed you too.

[Natshane, Inspiration comes and goes....]

So how are you? It's been too long.

[[deleted user]]

Eh I'm okay. I've been fighting a cold, having friend/ guy troubles, but ive still been pretty good for the most part. What about you?

[Natshane, Inspiration comes and goes....]

Hence explained the poems, :D

Same old same old, exams creeping closer and suffering from dancing withdrawal. haha

[[deleted user]]

Hahaha yeeeeaaaaah.

Oh I know what you mean, I have a couple tests in Like a month I think :P

Ahhh I love dancing! But unfortunately I am only doing hip hop right now. :\ Im hoping to do more dancing though next year.

[Natshane, Inspiration comes and goes....]

I have a huge test in 59 days, :P

You're taking classes?

[[deleted user]]

AckI'm sorry :\

Yup! I used to do balett, tap and tumbling from age 3-9 then my mom made me quit and she had me do gymnastics, two weeks of cheerleading, and swimming from 9-13 then this year me being 14 she is letting restart dancing, except I decided to try hip hop. But she is only letting me do one class right now.

[Natshane, Inspiration comes and goes....]

Wow, you are talented. I only dance when there's performance and never really took classes.

[[deleted user]]

Hahaha not really. Lol just because I have done all those things doesnt mean that I was good at them.
What do you mean by only when there are performances but you've never done classes?

[Natshane, Inspiration comes and goes....]

I mean we sort of just learn dancing whenever we needed to perform, we're not pro dancers but we dances pretty well.

[[deleted user]]

Oh cool! Sounds fun:)

[Natshane, Inspiration comes and goes....]

It is, that's why I'm hungover ><

[[deleted user]]

Hahaha nice ::)

[Natshane, Inspiration comes and goes....]

yeah ><

[Bri, A poem begins with a lump in the throat.]

Nat! HI! Long time no talk! You've been doing school or what?

To catch up with the conversation you guys were having, I was dancing since I was round 4, up until I was around 10, where I switched to cheer leading (I was the flier). From there I did about 7 plays (I had already done two before then), and I've been writing/drawing all that time, too. :D

Nat, how old are you? I don't recall you ever saying so...you probably said it somewhere ::)

[Natshane, Inspiration comes and goes....]

Hi Bri! I missed you!

Yup, school has been hectic and I was sorta busy too! How about you?

You and Bex are both amazing, I always wanted to do those stuff but I just didn't get around to it>< I'm more of a stay home and read kind of girl I think, not much on the sporty side but I've came out of my shell few years ago, haha.

Technically I'm 16, but I'm a senior in my high school (the grading system is different from US), I'll be turning 17 in December.