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message 1: by Cooper (new)

Cooper Griffin took a left down the white corridor,his bare feet pounding against the cold tiles. His heart was pounding in his chest. Of course he was not the slightest bit winded. When he rounded the corner his life tormentor,Briggs stood between him and freedom. The only difference, Briggs had a gun trained at his head. Briggs pulled the trigger,but Griffin was to fast.He jumped to Briggs's left side and brought a powerful round house kick to his head.As Briggs crumpled to the tile cradling his head Griffin said,"A word of advice for your future experiments. Don't give the perfect Killer a conscience." Then Griffin was gone.

tell me what you think.

Cooper Morrone-Webster wrote this on 9/27/2008


message 2: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
hmm. It's intriguing; I'm curious to know more.


message 3: by Cooper (new)

Cooper i have more but am not going to post it tonight i will put a link here when i do.


message 4: by Michelle (new)

Michelle (michellerobins) omg awesome!!


message 5: by Cooper (new)

Cooper Perfect reaction i got the idea sort of from bourne but he was trained and was a human.


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message 7: by Seth, The plan is simple--stay alive. (new)

Seth (ninjaaaaaofwritingbooks) | 2205 comments Mod
wow


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

luv those movies.
and pirates
and spider man
and shrek
and PETER PAN
and what about bob
and natrional treasures
and twilight
and harry potter
et.etc.etc.


message 9: by Riley (new)

Riley (booksarecool) I luv What About Bob! It was hilarious!


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

i'm watching it right now. . . lol, this just happened, i'll be peace . . . i'll be quiet.


message 11: by Riley (new)

Riley (booksarecool) I know! That's one of my favorite parts. The end is hilarious!



message 12: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
omg. my mom and my sister watched that like two days ago. what a weird coincidence! lol XD i saw the first half of it a few years ago ...


message 13: by Riley (new)

Riley (booksarecool) lol


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

my dad recorded it, and we watched the rest yestereday.


message 15: by Riley (new)

Riley (booksarecool) cool. We had to rent it.


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