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message 51: by [deleted user] (new)

I don't know...
I'm not that deep.


message 52: by [deleted user] (new)

You can be.
:D
BRILLIANT! SERIOUSLY!
I cannot write poems, I can only (Barely) write stories.


message 53: by [deleted user] (new)

Thanks!
And you CAN write well!


message 54: by [deleted user] (new)

I wish I could..


message 55: by [deleted user] (new)

YOU CAN TOO!!!


message 56: by [deleted user] (new)

Pffft...


message 57: by [deleted user] (new)

No pfttting about it!


message 58: by Dr. Zyllihapping (new)

Dr. Zyllihapping I-Don't-Have-A-Last-Name (i_wanna_be_a_paperback_writer) | 4 comments Hannie wrote: "Run

Let's go far away
Run away from everything we had
We'll find a new place where nightmares don't lurk in places nearby
Away from fear, away from things that hurt you
Make you cry in the night
A..."


AWESOME POEM!


message 59: by [deleted user] (new)

Thanks!

This is a new one:


My infatuations
May have turned out to be much more if you loved me
My hesitations
Were a human mistake that I couldn't relate to
My complications
Are something only me myself can understand

I'll add more later!


message 60: by Dr. Zyllihapping (new)

Dr. Zyllihapping I-Don't-Have-A-Last-Name (i_wanna_be_a_paperback_writer) | 4 comments Hannie wrote: "Thanks!

This is a new one:


My infatuations
May have turned out to be much more if you loved me
My hesitations
Were a human mistake that I couldn't relate to
My complications
Are something only m..."


Please do add more! I'll be waiting for them! Shucks, you're a good poet, Sherihan!


message 61: by [deleted user] (new)

Lol, you say shucks...

I'll add more, don't worry.
I'm an okay poet.
You're much better!


message 62: by Dr. Zyllihapping (new)

Dr. Zyllihapping I-Don't-Have-A-Last-Name (i_wanna_be_a_paperback_writer) | 4 comments Hannie wrote: "Lol, you say shucks...

I'll add more, don't worry.
I'm an okay poet.
You're much better!"


Yes, I say 'shucks'.


message 63: by [deleted user] (new)

It's cute!
:D

Anyway, my poems probably aren't even all legit!
They have tunes to them...
I have a tune for all of them...


message 64: by [deleted user] (new)

WOW!
Amazing Hannie.
And thanks. *Blushes*


message 65: by [deleted user] (new)

Laura is a noob....


message 66: by [deleted user] (new)

Gee. You're nice.


message 67: by [deleted user] (new)

I know, eh?


message 68: by [deleted user] (new)

No.


message 69: by [deleted user] (new)

Lol, 69.


message 70: by Dr. Zyllihapping (new)

Dr. Zyllihapping I-Don't-Have-A-Last-Name (i_wanna_be_a_paperback_writer) | 4 comments Tonmoy wrote: "Lol, 69."

O.O Man, you= some dirty-minded guy.


message 71: by [deleted user] (new)

???


message 72: by [deleted user] (new)

Do not fucking try and tell me that le soixant neuf is anything but one of the most amazing experiences ever!


message 73: by [deleted user] (new)

Okay.... I'll just keep quiet then.


message 74: by [deleted user] (new)

Seriously.
Don't knock it 'till you've tried it.


message 75: by [deleted user] (new)

...
I ain't trying it any time soon.


message 76: by [deleted user] (new)

One day...
You will...
I think...
You won't regret it...
Is is al, over cyber space now.


message 77: by [deleted user] (new)

Great. Just great.


message 78: by [deleted user] (new)

Netter than you telling everyone your on you you know what.


message 79: by [deleted user] (new)

BETTER!

WTF?!


message 80: by [deleted user] (new)

My monthly?


message 81: by [deleted user] (new)

Tonmoy wrote: "Laura is a noob...."

Prick... XD Someone please start using MSN... I don't want to not talk to you guys... BUT GR IS SOOOOO BORINGGGG!


message 82: by [deleted user] (new)

*Fiza* wrote: "My monthly?"

And ROFL!


message 83: by [deleted user] (new)

Lol... I have an MSN...


message 84: by [deleted user] (new)

Confused...

Tell me why I feel so confused
About what I want
Or who I like
Tell me why the male specimen
Is so hard to understand
And while you're at it
Tell me how I choose the right one

Am I blind to the obvious?
Am I deaf to the cries?
What am I missing in this puzzle?
Called the puzzle of life
Where do I seek the answers
To the questions of the heart
There is no true book of love
Because love cannot be written
It works in funny ways
Ways which you don't understand
Till time decides to comply
And lets you pass the gates of knowledge

Two different people
Both wonderful in their own right
One is perfection
One is humanity
One is the mind
One is the heart
One is sweet
One is kind
And both have caught me
And made me think


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