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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

Yeah, I started a topic for my songs and stuff... They're all weird and feel free to laugh and joke about them! ^_^


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Title: The girl in the blood red hood

The blood on the floor
Soaking in your hood
The blood on the counter
The evil in the woods
They lurk in the shadows
They hunt when it is dark
And when you least expect it
They take away your heart
They wait in the night
The only thing awake
So listen pretty closely
Don’t fall for their mistakes

The wolves are coming to get you
They’ll slay you in your sleep
And throw you in the deep
The wolves are coming to get you
In the dark of the night
They’ll try to stay outta sight
But they can’t catch the girl with the blood in her hoods today
‘Cause the wolves ain’t fast enough to fool her fast enough
So stay away

The blood on the floor
Soaking in your hood
The blood on the counter
The evil in the woods
Creeping in the forest
Keeping outta view
They jump from the bushes
To feast on something new
A small little girl
With eyes as grass is green
He didn’t think her feisty
Till she did something mean

The wolves are coming to get you
They’ll slay you in your sleep
And throw you in the deep
The wolves are coming to get you
In the dark of the night
They’ll try to stay outta sight
But they can’t catch the girl with the blood in her hoods today
‘Cause the wolves ain’t fast enough to fool her fast enough
So stay away

The girl in the blood red hood
Creeps around wide awake
She tries to hide from something unreal
Doesn’t want to fall for any mistakes
She goes along to the small brick house
Where little granny stays
She goes through the door, is greeted by gore
Poor granny’s been swept away

The wolves are coming to get you
They’ll slay you in your sleep
And throw you in the deep
The wolves are coming to get you
In the dark of the night
They’ll try to stay outta sight
But they can’t catch the girl with the blood in her hoods today
‘Cause the wolves ain’t fast enough to fool her fast enough
So stay away
She ran and she ran, she ran, she ran
She ran away as fast as she can
The wolves can’t catch her now, can’t catch her now
Stay away


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

Okay, next song....


This one is REAL WEIRD. Considering it is about Francois. But don't be afraid. I write songs about everyone. And Francois is my cyber twin...


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My Cyber Twin Francois
2339 characters

You walk down Bendigo shopping mall
Your cowboy shoes on your feet
You wink at at all the pretty little girls
They're gonna swoon when you meet
You carry your iPad in your hand
And keeps a spare book in your bag
But when you goes out to sleepovers
You're gonna play COD, that's that....

You're my cyber twin called Francois,
To Francis, you're not gonna answer
They say you look greek, and hell, you're not meek
You're the horny side of my corny side...
Francois. it's like when you're in France and, it's soir
I wonder if we'll meet one day, soon
Yeah, you're so cool
THE Francois

You only choose the best Levis
Cause anything else is just plain uncool
You think of the pranks you're gonna devise
Because being a big joke is just so you
You get a bit judgemental
When someone says Rebecca Black is such a 'BEEP!'
Yes you like to stand for what you believe in
And that's why you're a cyber twin I want to keep

You're my cyber twin called Francois,
To Francis, you're not gonna answer
They say you look greek, and hell, you're not meek
You're the horny side of my corny side...
Francois. it's like when you're in France and, it's soir
I wonder if we'll meet one day, soon
Yeah, you're so cool
THE Francois...

Pure fate brought us together
We'll sing in bad weather
And dance in the rain
We'll stay up late nights just RPing
And simply just being
You'll fly in you're plane
I know you're pissing yourself right now
Cause this is a song about some boy
But some boy just made my day
Because this dude just said hey
And I just wanted to say....

You're my cyber twin called Francois,
To Francis, you're not gonna answer
They say you look greek, and hell, you're not meek
You're the horny side of my corny side...
Francois. it's like when you're in France and, it's soir
I wonder if we'll meet one day, soon
Yeah, you're so cool
THE Francois

Not Francis, Francois
Not Franky, Francois
Not Frannie, Francois
Francois, pronounced Fran-soir
This song is just so weird
I wonder if you'll grow a beard
And grow past 7 feet tall
Really tall Francois

You're the South African guy
And it's really hard to say bye
Dammit, dude, why oh why
Can't I stop writing, Francois
Do you think I should shut up now
But, man, seriously HOW?
I should simply stop right now,
Francois.


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The next song, All we need to know was probably the first song I ever wrote. It was for an assignment and I wrote it with a friend!


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Title: All we need to know

You were 8 and I was 7
We were a match made up in heaven
They thought so, but we said no
Cause you tugged my ponytail and you ripped my dresses
You left me alone without any presence
Then one day, two years ago

I saw through that annoying boy
The one who broke my favorite toy
He was  cute, adoring, admiring, upholding
I saw through that social mess
Yeah he was the one who ripped my dress
But I don't care anymore 
Cause I love him and thats all we need to know

It was in high-school 
You were looking up classes
I never realized how cute you looked without your heavy glasses 
Those dark eyes, that silky hair
Why oh why didn't I realize before 
The day I fell for you I should've  known
The troubles it would bring
But really I had a thing when
   
I saw through that annoying boy
The one who broke my favorite toy
He was  cute, adoring, admiring, upholding
I saw through that social mess
Yeah he was the one who ripped my dress
But I don't care anymore 
Cause I love him and thats all we need to know

It was year 10, it was afterschool
We were cramming through the crowds as we came out of the rooms
I saw you, you saw me
You came up and asked if I need a hand
I said it was ok, you'd be late for band
But you said we needed to talk
So we went for a little walk, you said

I fell in love with an annoying girl
Ever since I was 8 she left me in a whirl
She was cute, adoring, admiring, upholding
I fell in love with an awkward mess
I'm sorry I ever ripped her dress
I hope she doesn't care anymore 
Cause I love her an that's all we need to know

All we need up know, all we need to know, all we need up know, oh


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

I feel like writing another song. Or a snatch of a song. Or something.

What do you do
When the world deserts you,
Life, it hurts you
What do you say
When there's no one to speak to
Nothing to grieve to

Where do you go
Where do you run
Where do you stop
Where is the sun

How do you sleep


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

I like that one, Sherihan.
And I love the new bits to my song too!
:D


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

Thanks!


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

Thanks!


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

A new poem!

I used to wonder what love really was
What is more than just a crush
Is love what happens when I see you
And my blood begins to rush

Is love when you're heart beats loudly
At 100 miles an hour
Is it making me want to always laugh
And sing sappy love songs in the shower

Is it feeling as if you could dance
A passionate tango in the rain
Is it wanting to just weep in sorrow
When I see you're face in pain

I wonder if this is really love
I wonder if it is true
Cause honey, I didn't believe in love
Least I didn't till I met you


message 12: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 08, 2011 08:04PM) (new)

Just the start of a song, I guess:

I leave you
I turn around
This time there's no goodbye
Your green eyes, they'll haunt me through the night
Your conscience bore into me
How much more could I take
I couldn't believe
No it hurt me

I know I gave you pain
And loss and anger inside 
But hear me out this once
And listen to my cries

Forgive me please 
I'm on my knees 
I had to say goodbye
Look into my eyes
I know you thought what I did was wrong
But please just hear me
Forgive me please I'm on my knees
Why did I say goodbye
And leave your green eyes
To love is to let you go
Fly away, goodbye.

I knew you would give up your life
Your love, your friends and family
I knew you loved me more than
Anything else
But I knew my life lay somewhere
Away so far away from here
So here I am now, telling you to let go
When it will hurt the least

I know I gave you dreams
But then I took it away
But hear me out now please
Things are gonna be okay

Forgive me please
I'm on my knees
I had to say goodbye
Look into my eyes
I know you thought what I did was wrong
But please just hear me
Forgive me please I'm on my knees
Why did I say goodbye
And leave your green eyes
To love is to let you go
Fly away, goodbye.


message 13: by [deleted user] (new)

That snatch of a song was about a book character called Tamani...


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

Destini*Iridessa* Smith wrote: "Hannie wrote: "My Cyber Twin Francois
2339 characters

You walk down Bendigo shopping mall
Your cowboy shoes on your feet
You wink at at all the pretty little girls
They're gonna swoon wh..."



It's about meeeeee!
:-D


message 15: by [deleted user] (new)

Aren't you special...


message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

Yes! Very!


message 17: by [deleted user] (new)

Hey!


message 18: by [deleted user] (new)

Yeah?


message 19: by [deleted user] (new)

Your mean to me, twin.
=_="


message 20: by [deleted user] (new)

I wrote a song about you. I can't be mean.


message 21: by [deleted user] (new)

Hmmm...
Depends in which way you mean "special"?


message 22: by [deleted user] (new)

You're a special person! Good way!


message 23: by [deleted user] (new)

Thank you!


message 24: by [deleted user] (new)

Ima take a shower.


message 25: by [deleted user] (new)

You do that!


message 26: by [deleted user] (new)

Bored. Made a poem.

We were born and sang cries
We grew up amongst lies
We were raised to fear the truth
We had lives hen we had youth
We took steps to the door
We wake up and want more
We want love and pain and happiness, anger
Sorrow and friendship, life is a hangar
Carrying burdens, carrying hope
Carrying judgement, with fate you elope


message 27: by [deleted user] (new)

I'm so jealous.
=_="


message 28: by [deleted user] (new)

Why?


message 29: by [deleted user] (new)

 poems...

Where is love when you need it
Where is life once you beat it
Where is glory, colurs, happiness, music,
When you need it most, you start to lose it...


Then, there was this one...


We are only human, acceptance is the key
Submission is bliss, so don't ignore me
The knowledge is there
Engraved in your brains
But when you try to use it, it gives you the pains
A testing situation, a tense lifeless time
When you're feeling so faithless, you don't know why
All lI say is just breathe, let time slow, please
Cause in the end, it's all you need

Another one... Btw, I wrote all these one after the other, and I sorta went from one topic to another...


It's that spur of the moment, impromptu lines
That's the script of life, it's the look in your eyes
Shock, horror and failing, you're crying and wailing
Are all just a way to leave yourself flailing
It's that phobia that you'll not get anywhere in life
You know, that aimless thought on whether you might live in strife


According to my friends, the next few lines were the best. I don't know... Your thoughts?


It's wondering whether love even exists
And if love exists, is it something you missed
Did you say something wrong when it was the time
Did you stumble and fall and miss the surprise

Okay, the rest is crappy, but I'll write it anyway...


What if you said yes instead of say no
What if you said stop, instead of say go
"Dear diary" you write when you finish your day
Yeah you're stuck In a tunnel, you're finding your way...

Then maths class ended.


message 30: by [deleted user] (new)

My songwriting sucks. Does it stop me? Not really...


message 31: by [deleted user] (new)

When I want to resolve something in my head, I write. Here's one I wrote to help me resolve hate.

I h u

I hate you
Go die in a hole
I hate you
Get out of the door
I hate you
Shut that shitty mouth
I hate you
Go somewhere south
I hate you
You can't shut up
I hate you
You don't give up
I hate you
You stupid cow
I hate you
Forever now
I hate you
I don't know why
I hate you 
You sadistic pigsty
I hate you
And your frigging nose 
I hate you
From top to toes
I hate you
You talk too much
I hate you 
You complain too much
I hate you
You gossip like shit
I hate you
For your god given might
I hate you
Cause you don't know when
I hate you 
Cause you don't know why
I hate you 
Why do you exist
I hate you. 
Because you exist 
I hate you 
And your mocking laugh 
I hate you 
You're like college staff
I hate you
Your abusive hands
I hate you
Cause you inhabit lands
I hate you 
Cause you forget your daughter
I hate you
You're a horrible mother 
I hate you
Can I say more
I hate you 
There I said more
I hate you
Like you're shit in a hole
I hate you
Like a skin cancer mole
I hate you
Like I hate the holes
I hate you
Cause you ruined my goals
I hate you
For not listening to me
I hate you
For not letting me be
I hate you
For crushing my dreams
I hate you
For taking me out of teams
I hate you
For not letting me go on skype
I hat you 
Cause your dislike of Facebook is ripe
I hate you
For not letting me go to friends
I hate you
Your malice knows no ends
I hate you 
Your dislike of hockey
I hate you
Your sorry mocking
I hate you
The way you block out the sun
I hate you
For not letting me have fun
But do you know why I hate you the most
I hate you because I can't hate you
I can't hate you cause you're just always there
You take me to shopping and movies somewhere 
You're there for me to hug when things are wrong
You cheer me up when you break into song
I know you get angry cause you love me so
You may scream or hit or punch me to go
I may hate you sometimes cause I don't get the chance
To tell you why I love to sing and dance
I love to read I love to live
I love to take I love to give
I love to hate I hate to love
I hate to love the one who gave me so much grief
I cry at night all alone to myself
I ask why I love you and why i care
Whether you're here or there somewhere
I ask god to forgive me now
Because I couldn't tell mum I love her somehow 
Cause all this hate and grief and sorrow
Will go away somewhere tomorrow
So before I go and finish this post
I want to say what I want to say the most
Although I stared with hate pain and sorrow 
I want to say I love you today and tomorrow.


message 32: by [deleted user] (new)

Wow.


message 33: by [deleted user] (new)

It is pretty heavy stuff...


message 34: by [deleted user] (new)

Pretty heavy is an understatement.
That's so deep...


message 35: by [deleted user] (new)

Deep? Me?
No.....


message 36: by [deleted user] (new)

Okay, maybe it is slightly expressive...


message 37: by [deleted user] (new)

Okay, a lot expressive.


message 38: by [deleted user] (new)

I am so bored. Poem time!

Take me away from here
Somewhere where no one will find me
Away from hurt and hate and pain

Hmm... I seem awfully depressed.


message 39: by [deleted user] (new)

I do too.
Maybe we should move to Mexico.
Just the two of us?


message 40: by [deleted user] (new)

Both of us move to Mexico....
Sounds lovely!
My parents would kill me.


message 41: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 20, 2011 05:55AM) (new)

Run

Let's go far away
Run away from everything we had
We'll find a new place where nightmares don't lurk in places nearby
Away from fear, away from things that hurt you
Make you cry in the night
Away to someplace only we know

Running, running,
Searching for
Something which you wish did exist
Afar, aside, away
Not here...

I'll add more later.


message 42: by [deleted user] (new)

ADD MORE!


message 43: by [deleted user] (new)

Away to someplace only we know

Running, running,
Searching for
Something which you wish did exist
Afar, aside, away
Not here...


message 44: by [deleted user] (new)

Powerful!


message 45: by [deleted user] (new)

^_^


message 46: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 20, 2011 01:08PM) (new)

Run

Let's go far away
Run away from everything we had
We'll find a new place where nightmares don't lurk in places nearby
Away from fear, away from things that hurt you
Make you cry in the night
Away to someplace only we know

Running, running,
Searching for
Something which you wish did exist
Afar, aside, away
Away from here...

If we could fly we would
Glide above our sorrows
If we could leap away
We'd leap away from tomorrow
If I could live
If you could speak
And we could be strong instead if weak
We would run
Away
Today... 

That's what I got so far...


message 47: by [deleted user] (new)

Bloody hell Hannie...


message 48: by [deleted user] (new)

Yeah?


message 49: by [deleted user] (new)

Fiza says some powerful stuff, eh?


message 50: by [deleted user] (new)

It's brilliant! I'm so jealous.
All I can write about lately is blood gore and... Dare I say it. Sex. :D


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