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message 25051: by Hope , I belong here more than they do. (new)

Hope  | 14351 comments Mod
Me: I'm all for realism. What's more likely, given Cyan's personality?


message 25052: by Annie, Have no fear of perfection-- you'll never reach it. (new)

Annie | 7968 comments Mod
Me: I'll have to think about it for a bit. He'll probably be very protective over her and not really act if people try to hurt her, but he'd work on empty threats.


message 25053: by Hope , I belong here more than they do. (new)

Hope  | 14351 comments Mod
Me: Hmmm. Interesting. So he can talk the talk, but not walk the walk. What would happen if harm were to come to Mary?


message 25054: by Annie, Have no fear of perfection-- you'll never reach it. (new)

Annie | 7968 comments Mod
Me: He'd probably go ballistic. While he himself was never a cannibal, he did murder his mother and cook her, and so he's fairly dangerous. Like I said, even though he doesn't get too angry, if someone were to harm Mary he would lose it. I don't know WHAT would happen.


message 25055: by Hope , I belong here more than they do. (new)

Hope  | 14351 comments Mod
Me: Hmmm.

While he develops further, want to help me puzzle out Mary?


message 25056: by Annie, Have no fear of perfection-- you'll never reach it. (new)

Annie | 7968 comments Mod
Me: Sure! What do you want help with?

I'm at my grandparents, and I shouldn't be too long, and I'll probably work on Elin first since she's already been developed before. I need to go on a name hunt for this guy xD


message 25057: by Hope , I belong here more than they do. (new)

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Me: I don't know exactly what's wrong with her. Part of me wants to say trauma of some sort, part of me wants to make her condition something like OCD or autism. I've even experimented in my head with delusions or hallucinations (though that's the one which seems to fit least well.) I can't figure out the general gist of her personality until I know just what her deal is.

What about Cain? I like the name Cain.


message 25058: by Annie, Have no fear of perfection-- you'll never reach it. (new)

Annie | 7968 comments Mod
Me: I think for this brotherly relationship that we're developing, trauma would work well. I know you're not that big on playing the victimized character, but we could work around that.

Hmm. I like Cain as well.


message 25059: by Hope , I belong here more than they do. (new)

Hope  | 14351 comments Mod
Me: Nah, it's not that I have a problem with--it's the fact that all of my characters besides Lenore (and Jacob, if you don't count his delusions) have a traumatic backstory. I'm worried I'm overusing it.


message 25060: by Annie, Have no fear of perfection-- you'll never reach it. (new)

Annie | 7968 comments Mod
Me: Well, they often need them so that they have a reason for going insane. If you want to, you're fine.


message 25061: by Hope , I belong here more than they do. (new)

Hope  | 14351 comments Mod
Me: Yeah, I know. But still.

Second option would be the autism/OCD, but I feel that such would turn her into a more fragile character overall, which I don't want. With the trauma, Mary would display vulnerability only during specific circumstances; but then we run into the aforementioned problem.


message 25062: by Annie, Have no fear of perfection-- you'll never reach it. (new)

Annie | 7968 comments Mod
Me: Well, I think we can definitely rule out delusions and hallucinations, since that's definitely overused. I think you should just go to trauma. It seems like that's what you want her to be like, anyways.


message 25063: by Hope , I belong here more than they do. (last edited Mar 01, 2014 01:23PM) (new)

Hope  | 14351 comments Mod
Me: Yeah, it seems like the option which works the best, considering what I want out of her character.

But I don't want it to involve her parents, since that is most certainly overdone. What should it be instead, think you?


message 25064: by Annie, Have no fear of perfection-- you'll never reach it. (new)

Annie | 7968 comments Mod
Me: Mmm, perhaps instead of an abusive relationship to her, she saw a sibling or friend undergo an abusive relationship?

What do you think of the name Elijah?


message 25065: by Hope , I belong here more than they do. (new)

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Me: Would not she herself have to be the subject of the trauma, though, since she's the one in the asylum?

Not bad. Perhaps he's Elijah Cain?


message 25066: by Annie, Have no fear of perfection-- you'll never reach it. (new)

Annie | 7968 comments Mod
Me: The sight of it could have driven her insane with worry that it would happen to her?

Yeah, I like that c: Now I need a middle name and a model.


message 25067: by Hope , I belong here more than they do. (new)

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Me: No, given her ubringing, that doesn't make a lot of sense. Perhaps she was kidnapped?

Cain is his middle name, I thought.


message 25068: by Annie, Have no fear of perfection-- you'll never reach it. (new)

Annie | 7968 comments Mod
Me: That works too, then he needs a last name xD

That would work.


message 25069: by Hope , I belong here more than they do. (last edited Mar 01, 2014 02:37PM) (new)

Hope  | 14351 comments Mod
Me: Check behindthesurname.com. It's great for name help.

Okay; then who kidnaps her, and why?


message 25070: by Annie, Have no fear of perfection-- you'll never reach it. (new)

Annie | 7968 comments Mod
Me: I use that all the time c:

Mmm, I'm not quite sure.


message 25071: by Annie, Have no fear of perfection-- you'll never reach it. (new)

Annie | 7968 comments Mod
Me: Doherty? Elijah Cain Doherty. It's Irish, since I found a lovely Irish model c:


message 25072: by Hope , I belong here more than they do. (new)

Hope  | 14351 comments Mod
Me: Ooh, I like.

*thinks* Well, why do people usually kidnap kids?


message 25073: by Annie, Have no fear of perfection-- you'll never reach it. (new)

Annie | 7968 comments Mod
Me: Either to rape them and murder them, because they're pedophiles, or because they convince themselves that the kid is safer with them than with their parents.

Alright, then when I get home I shall begin Elin and Elijah c:


message 25074: by Hope , I belong here more than they do. (new)

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Me: Maybe ransom? The Thrashers are a very rich family. Something could have happened to her along the way that could have broken her.

Coolio.


message 25075: by Annie, Have no fear of perfection-- you'll never reach it. (new)

Annie | 7968 comments Mod
Me: That would work well c:

Now, Hope, are you going to kill sweet Mary off like you did Ruby?


message 25076: by Hope , I belong here more than they do. (last edited Mar 01, 2014 02:55PM) (new)

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Me: What is this traumatic event? I would quite prefer it not be rape because she's, you know, thirteen. Younger at the time, I'd imagine.

That's not the plan, no. I have a feeling Mary is going to turn out less of a Sue, just as Mabel was less of one to Felix.


message 25077: by Annie, Have no fear of perfection-- you'll never reach it. (new)

Annie | 7968 comments Mod
Me: I'm not sure. To a thirteen year old, everything is extreme.

Good, then c: I'm excited.


message 25078: by Hope , I belong here more than they do. (new)

Hope  | 14351 comments Mod
Me: *tries to think of something that will not have me crossing the moral event horizon* *fails miserably*


message 25079: by Annie, Have no fear of perfection-- you'll never reach it. (new)

Annie | 7968 comments Mod
Me: Maybe you have to cross that line?


message 25080: by Hope , I belong here more than they do. (new)

Hope  | 14351 comments Mod
Me: Maybe I do. But there are different degrees to which it can be crossed, and I'd like to go as low as possible.

*frowns* The problem is, though, if you're trying to ransom a captive you aren't going to hurt them in incredibly obvious fashions. It would have to be psychological or very subtly physical, wouldn't it?


message 25081: by Annie, Have no fear of perfection-- you'll never reach it. (new)

Annie | 7968 comments Mod
Me: Yes'm.


message 25082: by Hope , I belong here more than they do. (new)

Hope  | 14351 comments Mod
Me: *sighs* Well, I'm leaning towards one of two things, then.

1. Mary tries to run and is caught and beaten, and no one is worried about the injuries because they already have their ransom and were going to send her back the next day as is.

2. There happens to be a sick young man in that group who gets his kicks out of terrifying the people (mostly children) they kidnap in the time it takes for whoever they were taken from to pay up, and he tells Mary so many twisted maybe-this-is-what-we'll-do-with-you stories she temporarily loses it.


message 25083: by Annie, Have no fear of perfection-- you'll never reach it. (new)

Annie | 7968 comments Mod
Me: I think the first one is more logical.

Funny, I had envisioned Elijah to come from a rich family as well c: They'll get along just fine.


message 25084: by Hope , I belong here more than they do. (new)

Hope  | 14351 comments Mod
Me: All right then. For some terrible reason, I get the feeling there's either a whip or fire involved.


message 25085: by Annie, Have no fear of perfection-- you'll never reach it. (new)

Annie | 7968 comments Mod
Me: I have hopes for Mary c:

But you see, you said you wanted a gay relationship (Elin and Lenore), AND a straight one, and while Mary and Elijah will be a relationship, they won't exactly be anything other than brother-sister for NOW. Do we need a love-wise straight relationship? Or no?


message 25086: by Hope , I belong here more than they do. (new)

Hope  | 14351 comments Mod
Me: *puzzles over scar placement*

Nah, I think we're good. I'm not sure if Lenore knows exactly how to fall in love, though, which means maybe not. XD


message 25087: by Annie, Have no fear of perfection-- you'll never reach it. (new)

Annie | 7968 comments Mod
Me: Well poor Elin is good at it so we can work it out xD


message 25088: by Hope , I belong here more than they do. (new)

Hope  | 14351 comments Mod
Me: Okay. XD

No but really how bad is this beating?


message 25089: by Annie, Have no fear of perfection-- you'll never reach it. (new)

Annie | 7968 comments Mod
Me: That's up to you, darling.


message 25090: by Hope , I belong here more than they do. (new)

Hope  | 14351 comments Mod
Me: I know it is but I need help. XD


message 25091: by Annie, Have no fear of perfection-- you'll never reach it. (new)

Annie | 7968 comments Mod
Me: Well, how badly do you want her traumatized? xD


message 25092: by Hope , I belong here more than they do. (new)

Hope  | 14351 comments Mod
Me: Bad enough to carry over into the present under specific circumstances.


message 25093: by Annie, Have no fear of perfection-- you'll never reach it. (new)

Annie | 7968 comments Mod
Me: I would then suggest a whip. It's more traumatizing.


message 25094: by Hope , I belong here more than they do. (new)

Hope  | 14351 comments Mod
Carlos: What is it with you and whips?

Raven: Seriously.

Me: I'm sorry, they're too good at what they do! Iso, the scars would then be along the back, I assume? Perhaps the legs?


message 25095: by Annie, Have no fear of perfection-- you'll never reach it. (new)

Annie | 7968 comments Mod
Me: Excuuuuuse me I like whips c:

Back, definitely. Possibly legs but who knows?


message 25096: by Hope , I belong here more than they do. (new)

Hope  | 14351 comments Mod
Me: Whips are nice--when you're not being flayed with them.

Raven and Carlos: -.-

Me: I think it shall be her back, and then a few scars on her legs placed by misaim.


message 25097: by Annie, Have no fear of perfection-- you'll never reach it. (new)

Annie | 7968 comments Mod
Me: They're good for when you're in a morbid mood, as well. Useful.

That'll work well, yeah. I already feel bad for Mary xD Poor thing.


message 25098: by Hope , I belong here more than they do. (new)

Hope  | 14351 comments Mod
Me: Right? I know! I shall see what I can do about starting her this night.


message 25099: by Hope , I belong here more than they do. (new)

Hope  | 14351 comments Mod
Me: In the meantime, want to RP?


message 25100: by Annie, Have no fear of perfection-- you'll never reach it. (new)

Annie | 7968 comments Mod
Me: Sure thing! Who would you like?

And yeah I'll work on Elin and Elijah tonight. I think I'm gonna scratch Heather.


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