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[John]

Faith wrote: "Me: Yes, Mello you did."

Me: In my defense I'm watching a video on youtube while typing here, so my reading skills aren't up to their par.

[Faith Noelle, The comands we give are always followed by orders. :)]

People of St.Peeters: My sister says she doesnt like my writing so I am asking you people now. What is your Honest Oppion of this:

Part 1
I lay in my bed not knowing what to do next.Not knowwing where to go who to trun to. I just got the worst news of my life, my borther and mother have been killed in Iraq. No dad he died when I was 8 years old. I am 16 years old now no family no one to talk to, to cry with. As I lay in my bed tears coming out of my eyes in buckets I think now what?

I am Amber Leag, I am sixteem my mom and borther have just been killed by a bomb in Iraq. I have no one left no family, no place to go. I lay in my bed looking up thinking, I cant do this I cant live here I cant go on I must die and do it soon.

I lay awake all night thinking of my now dead family and how I should kill my self the next day. I have school tomrrow so it must be after that. Then I will find a place where I was most happiest and kill my self there. The next day I walk into school on ones talks to me only the teachers asking little to no questions at all. I take vrey littel notes do vrey little at all today cause I know what I must do after words. However, I do go to my best friend for 14 years Mady. She has herd what has happend to me and is willing to do anything for me now but I dont accepet. I dont know if I should tell her my plans about latter or not afraid she will try to stop me. Its now the end of the day I dont take I ride home with Mady I dont take the bus I just walk the 5 miles walk home.

When I get home I throw my stuff onto the ground not caring where it lands. I run up to my room and lock the door. I grab my computer and trun it on and go to my Facebook page. I am posting the last video be I die. I upload the video close my laptop and go to the bathroom and lock the dorr this will be the last thing I touch before I die. I open the medicen cabint and grab I bottle of pills not caring what they are.

Part 2

I walk up to the door and un lock it. My dog Cowgril comes to meet me. "Mom I am home" I say. "Hi! Mady how was your day? my mother asks. "Fine" I reply . I grab my laptop and go to my facebook page. I see that Amber has posted a knew video. Probley something dumb but funny at the same time I think to my self. I click it. I am horafid at what she is saying tears are runnig down my face. I shut the computer grab my keys and run to the car not giving my mom any time to react.

When I get to Amber's house I bang on the door as hard has i can. No anwser. I run to the back door its open. I run in side. "Amber! Amber!" I call no anwser. I am now crying and runnig up the staris. I look in her room. Shes not there. I see the bathroom door is shut. "No!" I cry this cant be true. I push on the door and am able to get it open. There I see Amber. On the floor passed out I scream "AMBER!!!" till my lugs hurt. I dail 911. 911 whats your emrecy?
My friend she dead! Theres a bottle of pill on the floor I dont know how many she took or what she took they are just laying there. HELP! I scream into the phone.
"Miss, I need you to clam down. Where are you now?" The lady on the other line says. "499 roserunner dr."(not a real adress) "Hurry!" I yell.
Miss there is an amblance on the way saty right there. They get here in less then 5 min. "I am in here!" I yell. They run in with a gurney and some other tools. I am pushed out of they way but stay right they holding her hand hoping she not dead. The medics are saying something but I dont care to lisen. "We need to get her to the hospital NOW!" one says to the other. They lift it up and carry her to the amblence. "Miss is there any family we can call?" I finally notice they are talking to me. "No they all are dead. I ssy. "I can come. I say hoping they will let me. "Fine." they say. I get in stilll holding Ambers hand.

We arrive at the hospital and theres a whole team of docters and nurses waiting to take her way. To try to save her life. The docters are asking me all these questions like what typ of pills are they? Where did she get them?
I dont know I keep saying I just found her on the floor passed out. "Just SAVE HER!" I scream. When I awake I am in a hospital bed with an IV in my arm. "W-what happend I ask?" "You passed of one of the nurses said. "Wheres, wheres Amber?" I try to get up but shes stops me. "Where is she I demanded!" "She is in sugery right now." Says the nurse.

( *Note: I am not some mentaly carzy person this was just the insperation I got from the song I herd today.*

[Faith Noelle, The comands we give are always followed by orders. :)]

Me: Sooo? What do ya'll think? Have I made a impression?(sp)

[John]

Me: Hmmm. Other than the spelling errors, if you formatted it correctly and maybe made some of the dialogue sound a bit more natural I would find it to be pretty good. I like the transition, myself, between the two chapters.

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Me: *is in next week*

[Faith Noelle, The comands we give are always followed by orders. :)]

Mello wrote: "Me: Hmmm. Other than the spelling errors, if you formatted it correctly and maybe made some of the dialogue sound a bit more natural I would find it to be pretty good. I like the transition, myself..."

Me: Thank you. Yeah, spelling and all that never as really been my thing. Other wise you like it?

[Annie, Have no fear of perfection-- you'll never reach it.]

Hope wrote: "Me: Do you have any nurses 'sides Yvette?"

Me: No, but I can paradox her.

[John]

Faith wrote: "Mello wrote: "Me: Hmmm. Other than the spelling errors, if you formatted it correctly and maybe made some of the dialogue sound a bit more natural I would find it to be pretty good. I like the tran..."

Me: Yes, I do! Everyone, I think, needs a good editor anyway.

[Hope , I belong here more than they do.]

~Iso the Musical Prodigy:3~ wrote: "Hope wrote: "Me: Do you have any nurses 'sides Yvette?"

Me: No, but I can paradox her."

Me: Okayz. Her and Sarah, then?

[Hope , I belong here more than they do.]

Me: Hey-o, Thera!

[Hope , I belong here more than they do.]

Me: I'd have to paradox her, but sure! Where?

[Hope , I belong here more than they do.]

Me: Sure. Can you post first?

[[deleted user]]

Me: *flies back* OMP! I HAD TO COME BACK TO SHARE THIS WITH YOU PEOPLE! AND YES, ALL CAPS IS NECESSARY! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mo-jDh...

[John]

Me: I don't even like Paramore that much, to tell the truth, but that's a pretty darn good song.

[John]

Θήρα (Thera, goddess of cough drops) wrote: "Me: Ugh- I'm on my dad's comp and youtube doesn't work on it. e3e"

Me: Ooouch, life is cruel. My computer has problems of it's own, so I feel your pain. The goshdarned cord doesn't want to work half of the time >.<

[[deleted user]]

Me: AAAAH! I found my new favorite song! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5QbldM...
Decoy~ Paramore

[John]

Me: Oh god, that's awful. But still a good song. But awful.

[Hope , I belong here more than they do.]

Me: You aren't a Paramore fan? Awww. I hoped we would've had that in common too. Oh well.

[Hope , I belong here more than they do.]

Me: 'Tis definitely one of her darker songs, Fay.

Does that mean you like the song?

[John]

Me: Well, I'm more of a electronica girl.

[Hope , I belong here more than they do.]

Me: Do you like Evanescence, Mello?

[John]

Me: To tell the truth, I haven't heard anything from them.

[John]

Me: lol, anyone heard of Royksopp? Or Portishead? Or Skye? That's kinda the electronica I listen to. But really, as long as it's catchy I don't care.

[Hope , I belong here more than they do.]

Me: Nope, I don't do heavy metal. XD

You should go listen to them, though. Their lead singer is amazing.

[John]

Me: How about Robyn? Eh?

But I will go and do that. Any songs in particular that you like that I should see first?

[Hope , I belong here more than they do.]

Me: Hmmm...depends on what you like. If it's a sad song you want, try "Hello". If you want something intense, try "Whisper" or "Everybody's Fool". Otherwise, I'd highly suggest "Haunted" "Going Under" and "Bring Me to Life".

[John]

Me: To youTube awayyy!

[Hope , I belong here more than they do.]

Me: Way ahead of you. :D

[John]

Me: They remind me of Portishead.

[Hope , I belong here more than they do.]

Me: Which song are you listening to?

[John]

Me: Everyone's Fool. They're pretty good.

[Hope , I belong here more than they do.]

Me: *dares to think about having made another fan*

[John]

Me: Maybe, maybe.

[John]

Me: I like the lead singer's voice. Quiet, yet forceful.

[Hope , I belong here more than they do.]

Θήρα (Thera, goddess of cough drops) wrote: "Mello wrote: "Me: Everyone's Fool. They're pretty good."

Me: OHMIGOSH I love that song."

Me: Me too! :D

The same, Mello.

[Hope , I belong here more than they do.]

Me: Yes. Yes she is.

[[deleted user]]

Me: Aw. Remind me NOT to go to the aquatic center after mentioning Paramore, would ya?

[John]

Me: But why?

[[deleted user]]

Me: Because then I miss a conversation about EVANESCENCE! They're like my... 2nd or 3rd favorite band.

[John]

Me: XD

[[deleted user]]

Me: *singing along to Decoy for the 50th time today*

[John]

Me: Eh? Up for what?

Edit: OH, I just saw your message, Thera. Yeah, I'm up for it :D

[John]

Me: Sure! You post first?

[Hope , I belong here more than they do.]

Me: Hi guys!

[John]

Me: Hiya Hope :D

[Hope , I belong here more than they do.]

Me: Hi Mello!

[Faith Noelle, The comands we give are always followed by orders. :)]

Me: Hi people, aka Thera, Hope, and Mello! RP anyone?

[John]

Me: Hey Faith!

[Faith Noelle, The comands we give are always followed by orders. :)]

Me: E'llo! RP anyone?

[Faith Noelle, The comands we give are always followed by orders. :)]

Me: Its fine, I guess.