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Jun 02, 2011 01:16PM
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I'm game. Sounds fun plus it'd throw the Kandin family is disarray, which *cough Elliot wouldn't mind cough*. XD Characters taking over my brain over something.
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Hey Crazy, would it be all right if Lottie was friends with Beverly? That way when Bev does get kidnapped we can still see a lot of drama with all the Kandin characters--like Orion, Karina, and Lucile? So we're not forgetting about everyone else. It would keep everything a bit more put together I think.
Alright, what is this roleplay about exactly? Why are the two kingdoms fighting?
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Hmm.Maybe there is a reason that they are fighting and that can be revealed as, say maybe a plot twist later on? But until then it can be the Montague/Capulet style.
HIYA CRAZY!!!Now we just have to figure out said reason. I'm thinking betrayal by one of the kingdoms.
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Hmm.I'm thinking more along the lines of:
The two kingdoms were allies for quite a long time, and another rival kingdom attacked, and everything was running smoothly between the two kingdoms and then BAM.
Someone important dies and either Trease/Kandin was behind that and and turned toward whatever that other rival kingdom was. It wasn't until a couple of months or years later was that rival kingdom wiped out and the hatred between Kandin/Trease was deepened further.
yea, and just sayin, there could be some last straws for the war to acually happen, such as the kidnapping of Orion...
That would be too recent, though. No one really knows how the war between the two kingdoms happened. Orion's switch would probably be just an act of pushing Trease's buttons, but not the starting of war.
okay, just an idea. how bout its been going on since before Drake was king, that way its a looonnnggg war. Oh, and just an idea, you can turn it down, how about Orion and Elliot are twins? Not identical, but the family resemblance is obvious.
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the person dies, and its blamed on other country? That sounds good
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Yep you guys got it Ethan and Crazy!Ethan, the only problem I see between Orion and Elliot is that Elly isn't of royal blood, but Orion is, right?
no, he was adopted by King Drake so he would have a heir to the throne.
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Orion? nope, kipnapped trease.
oh, i see how that looks like hes a trease prince....nope, he is a trease, who was kidnapped and brought to Kandin(is that the country name?) and adopted by King Drake
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nah, just the son of some random Trease family.
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Oohhhhh. All right! I see what you mean. He should probably be like the king's cousin or something and be the son of a Duke. It would make more sense that way for Elliot to be taken in by the Trease family.So I'm totally chill with this idea of Orion and elliot being brothers. Elly thinks everyone in his immediate family is dead.
Sorry I had to go off and eat dinner. Nothing like a good chicken sandwich.
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Ohmygoodness. Enchiladas are delicious. Ahaha, luckily I didn't have any caffeine I would be jumping off the walls.
theres nothing wrong with a little caffine....unless its my definition of "little"....
Krista im thinking Orion sees him and somehow gets the truth out of Drake and runs of to Trease to inform Elliot.
Krista im thinking Orion sees him and somehow gets the truth out of Drake and runs of to Trease to inform Elliot.
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I like that idea. Maybe just a glimpse, but he recognizes it as his own features but dismisses the idea until he gets back. Anyways, me love!LAWLS! My definition of little is two giant mugs of coffee.
I do that a lot, Crazy. Like if any song comes on--burst into random dancing.
Heh, my definition of little is about 10(ish) cans of soda. And i dont do that, my friends just look at me strange because im staring of into the distance(im told i look educated) mouthing the words to the song.
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heh, my thing gets a bit aqward when i relise im staring at someone whos looking at me like im a complete idiot.
I can't sing so I stay away from singing. So it's just lipping it for me.
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Alright, so let's get this straight real quick. Orion and Elliot are related. Kandin and Trease used to be allies until they broke apart due to a rival's infiltration and sparks of unrest that burned their alliance to the ground. Now both Kandin and Trease are constantly at war with each other. Drake kidnapped the son of a duke, Orion, in order to gain an heir to the throne, though it's a little confusing since he could have easily have adopted a child of Kandin descent... anyway, Lucile and the other girl characters are going to run off with a raid that plan on attacking the kingdom of Trease, which is also confusing since it's an entire kingdom away. Elliot and Blue Jay are doing some sort of game that will most likely develop into a sort of cat and mouse side plot. And Vincent is off bringing down the entire kingdom of Kandin while this is going on.
Is that everything?
Is that everything?
Well, now I feel like we ought to work out a few kinks.
Agreed... we need more plot depth than this, and some other stuff.
let me explain the kidnapping. and besides from that everything seems right. Drake wanted someone from royal family, and there was noone else on the Kandin side, and he had heard of the Duke of trease having twin sons, so he kidnapped one and assassinated the Duke and his wife and anyone having to deal with childbirth, except the other twin.
