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Connor
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May 23, 2011 04:45PM
Nice! I haven't found any errors except for a space in between Sky and but: It lights up the sky ,but only for a moment.
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Ally wrote: "Here's my first poem hope you like it!!! :D Correct anything like spelling and grammer and you know, just comment!
Title:Beautiful Destruction
Genre:Poem
It's terrifying.
It's destructio..."
you spelled the capital destructions w/o the R's. just saying.
Title:Beautiful Destruction
Genre:Poem
It's terrifying.
It's destructio..."
you spelled the capital destructions w/o the R's. just saying.
"Where do you go during this Beautiful Destuction?"
that one too. I hope you're not offended...I don't like correcting people.
that one too. I hope you're not offended...I don't like correcting people.
