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message 51: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
DA, you should describe how Kia gets her pet crow and how she starts practicing magic or stuff. I don't think that it is time for them to MEET up, but i do think that they should have contact with each other.

How about you make Kia do telepathic my talking to Felway, when he is asleep? This will give a chance for our side of the story to progress as well as yours.


message 52: by [deleted user] (new)

John, you bring up a good point :P I've already introduced her falcon, he's with the man who told her she has the gift for dark magic. I have a plan for that and when she starts practicing her magic stuff--it also ties into the memory thing that happens to the others. I was thinking that that part can come after they all meet and have their adventure or can happen during it. Would you like me to tell you, or would you like to be surprised?

The telepathic idea is good, but I don't understand how it can progress the story. Can you expand on that?


message 53: by John, (~^u^~)V (new)

John x (radishfriends) | 851 comments Mod
I want to be surprised, but just let me know when you want it to happen.

well... it's more like a "Dream" for Felway. When they go to sleep, you can write a message to Felway though his dream. If you want. It would sort of give them a sense of connection that way.


message 54: by [deleted user] (new)

Alright. It kind of depends on what's going to happen when Kia runs into Felway, Siki and Zen.

I like that idea. Kia can be upset about Felway leaving without telling her so she tries to make contact to see if he's okay?


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