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message 101: by ♥ Rachel♥ (new)

♥ Rachel♥   (i_got_a_jar_of_dirt) yep, which is y i said 2. keep dancing pplz, we're having a dance-a-thon!


message 102: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ oh okay. XD


message 103: by Laina (new)

Laina (laineyru) have any of you guys ever tried to describe dancing? in writing i mean? i think it is impossible! i've tried a few stories that have dancers in them, but I can't get it right. When it comes to describing something so passionate, so soulful as a dance, I slaughter it. Even books I've read about dancers... it doesn't feel right to me. any advice?


message 104: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ hmmm ... i wrote a poem about a dancer once. it was really weird. i don't know where it went ...
i wrote some other poem about dancing too. maybe i'll look for these poems cuz that would probably be more helpful. lol.


message 105: by Laina (new)

Laina (laineyru) haha i can write poems about dancing... i don't know why but it's easier fo rme. but trying to sincerely describe the character and the way dancing effects her, or the way she dances. *sigh* it's always so cheesey or hollow. i can't get it right!


message 106: by ♥ Rachel♥ (new)

♥ Rachel♥   (i_got_a_jar_of_dirt) hmmm, let me c some of ur dancing poems, laina.


message 107: by Laina (new)

Laina (laineyru) ummm.... i have to think of where they are.... i don't think i have them on my computer. :( i'll have to ask my old english teacher tomorrow if i can have a copy......... oh trasha. sorry! i'll get it soon!


message 108: by Kayli 500 (new)

Kayli 500 | 266 comments Mod
ballet is too slow for me to dance to
the tutus are cute but who enjoys wearing them?
I hate those tights you have to wear
Do boys like Ballet?
I couldn't say
Jazz is more like my kind of dance
cause it has a good beat
and it's fun to dance to
It has a fast tempo
Tap is important
you can be advanced
or just a beginner
It's so much fun to learn new things in tap
clogging is interesting
it looks so complicated to me at least
The Cha Cha I love
It's so cool and has lovely music
Yeah I love how the music
is from different countries
I like the Rhumba
It's a beautiful dance
Just watch dancing with the stars!


message 109: by Laina (new)

Laina (laineyru) i like it, Kayli!! I CLAG!! YEA FOR CLOGGING! *breaks into double-doubles*


message 110: by Kayli 500 (new)

Kayli 500 | 266 comments Mod
OK then I'm tapping *Does many triplets*


message 111: by Laina (new)

Laina (laineyru) haha i ment to put clog instead of clag on that one post... i just barely noticed that... how embarrassing! hehehe.


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