Problems with Life/Emos and Goths discussion
What is a real emo?
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Every one bites the dust! *music is my sole*
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Mar 26, 2011 10:32AM
ya... and apparently im a better driver (on the jet-ski) than any of my other siblings... i figured out the best speed to turn at and i have good balince(haha) and i was only driving it for 20minets... and i parked the thing better than my dad... it was fun...
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math, to me, is the worst thing on earth. NO OFFENSE. but srysly, i hate it as much as my mom's temper tantrums lol
i thinck logicly...
every one is diferent...
i dont think at all..... im just kinda.... numb, emotionally, you know?
ya... we all do that sometimes...
Forensics and graphic design that is so cool. I have no idea what I want to be. I have thought of both of those and lawing but I just don't think I could succeed in any of those. I honestly think I will be stuck as a waitress for the rest of my life.. :(
thinck on the positive side... and take diferent classes to see if anything trips your trigar... there is more jobs than the three you sed...
I know, and I am a major work-a-holic so I am sure I could get any job if I put my mind to it, I just mean that I haven't been able to find my calling or a job I am good at that I also love to do. I love mysteries so right now I am thinking of becoming a PI. :)
you should wright a book... you never know... it could be the next Harrie Potter...
Ooh, I really would like to do that but when I get an idea I don't know how to start the process of making it into a book. I can't even make short stories on Goodreads (I've tried). I'm a fail T-T
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okay...this is my proses1)(get ideas)
just jot down whatever comes to mind don't think of about making it a book yet
2)(organise the ideas)
once you have enough ideas nix (get rid of) some but keep plenty... do a time line type thing
3)(actuarially starting)
think of the beginning of books that got your attention... How did they format it? What makes it catch my attention? ask yourself questions like this...(if it is an informational or self examination type of thing Start with a question about the subject...) and ones you have the beginning the rest is easy(er)
the righting proses is LONG and drawn out... i can do all the steps in a matter of hours... this is my proses,mind, so it might not work for you... this proses does not work for most...
Hmm, this helps. And I am sure I can use this advice. Here is a question though like when to people are talking in a book I have problems with like how to show that and also how to make the story in the view point of a character.. I hope I'm not confusing you guys with this..
start a new paragraph with a new speaker anddo you know how to use " " quotations?
um... wright it how that charecter hears/ sees/thinks/ knows...
does that help?
Hmm, like this? "Does this help?"
"Yes, I suppose it does." I replied.
yes But make shur you say who sed what like..."Does this help?" Kat questiond
Okay, that is probably why my characters conversations get lost.
yes
if you have anymore questions just msg me... and if i dont knoww i will find out asap
What about this:I scrolled down to the most recent comment and seen that Kat had replied "Does this help?", "Yes, it does" was my reply.
But now that sounds wierd and wrong >_<
I scrolled down to the most recent comment and seen that Kat had replied "Does this help?""Yes, it does," was my reply.
i believe that is corect... and remembor new speeker new setting new thaught all start a new paragraoh
Okay. Thank you, this really is helpful. If I have more questions I will msg you. I really can't thank you enough. :)
o and make shur all your verbs are in the same tense (panttence, presenttense, futer)
it is ok.. i like to help people... sometimes... and i just dont get to help people that much because people dont know how to take me
I will. And you are very helpful. I am glad we are now friends :)
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can some one answer this questionwhy is life so fu*king hard?
can some one answer this questionwhy is life so fu*king hard?
I'd like to know. Do people try to torture others for fun, or is there some punishment we needed to fulfil from a past life?
no some people torture for fun and do you ever think if it is true what your past life was like
I'm afraid to know what I did in my past life to deserve this. I probably killed the person that loves me for someone who I love and so now everyone is in a way killing me the same.
but still why is life so hard and hurtful
Life's a bitch, cuz if it were a slut it'd be easy.
i know her name but my lips - er, fingers - are sealed.
At least not on the Internet cuz there could be creepy stalker people
Totally. my name on here is fake too and im not telling my real name
i didnt. all i said was that ur name is a mouthful. and i hate my name too
