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Iviana (The Sign Painter), The Goddess of indecisiveness
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Dec 15, 2011 02:00PM

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Me: Hurray, Ivi!

Me: GUYS MY TUMMY ISN'T ALL SQUISHY ANYMORE. :D Crunches do work!

I'm sorry, Rudy. Try some chamomile tea?
I know how you feel, Thera. My back's been on a heating pad all day. :/
Me: I don't believe in exercise, because I'm an incredibly lazy person. Last summer I was so lazy that I was too lazy to get up and eat.
Me: Try listening to rain or a thunderstorm, if you have an iPod or something, Rudy. I have pretty bad sleeping problems (well, sleeping at night) and this has helped me quite a bit.
Me: SAME. I love the pitter-patter of rain and the BOOMS.
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Iviana (The Sign Painter), The Goddess of indecisiveness
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except for Writer's Craft because it's our last day of poetry :("
Me: I MISSED WHIM?! D:
Hi!
Me: We had a coffee house in Writer's Craft and argh the poems I listened to were awful. My classmates hate poetry :P
We had to pick a poet and write in his style and memorize an original and a replication. My five poems were:
We had to pick a poet and write in his style and memorize an original and a replication. My five poems were:
Original Poetry – Inspired by the works of Charles Bukowski
I Won’t
When things happen
(and happen they do)
they take whatever this shell of mine
is holding
they take whatever I’ve gained before
they happened last
they leave me the insult of leaving the shell.
I am struck
with nothing and everything at once
I have dissolved
and I am air.
But these dear friends of mine
(these darlings)
these mute and clumsy beings
stumble all over my solitude
leave me locked in the bathroom
with spirits to singe my throat
and wounds
that I did not know I had.
O spirits -
you have flooded me
with despair.
Believable Portrait
Scratching, wasting, fading, painting
it’s incredible how I am
saving the world, saving my life.
Tell me that I’m wrong little bullet, go away,
become a dream of a mere happening or a tantalizing chance.
you’re worth something
you’re worth a stammer.
Broadcast the elements,
lead them into a pipe of war
lead them into a mechanical hurricane.
Yeah baby I’m a dreamer.
The Homeless Man
One day I left my apartment
through the window
and dropped down to the broken pavement
to melt into the ordinary crowd
of people who
were buying stale coffee
and smoking stale cigarettes
I bought my stale coffee
and smoked my stale cigarette
and sat down in a corner
and held out my dirty palm
for money
Solitary Commentary
Some people say that a fool learns from their mistakes
and wise men learn from others’
but I’ve been a fool to look at others’ mistakes
and wise to forget mine.
the airplanes fly overhead
and I wonder at how advanced we’ve gotten
and I despair at how far behind we’ve fallen
the material views, the prostitutes,
the dimes, the diamonds
we all want them to be mine.
Blindness
is not cured with faith
it’s not a reality, it’s a disease
and Lord knows I have it
Poor and Starving
there is no more food in my cupboard.
Cockroaches scuttle and take the last crumbs
of dry bread
that I kept, hoarded,
the treasure of a dragon in his cave
some dragon
some cave
I lure women in and out
under the pretence of being an artist,
they take one look at the wine bottles and leave
It’s fine.
I’ve got the cockroaches for company
after all.
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Iviana (The Sign Painter), The Goddess of indecisiveness
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Me: I especially love the lines in "Believable Portrait":
In "The Homeless Man", I would have added "dirty" before money, just for the sake of adjective repitition (you had "stale coffee" and "stale cigarettes") but that's just my own opinion. You of course don't have to.
And then I absolutely love "Poor and Starving." :)
I haven't read Bukowski, but I kind of really want to now. TO GOOGLE.
Tell me that I’m wrong little bullet, go away,
become a dream of a mere happening or a tantalizing chance.
In "The Homeless Man", I would have added "dirty" before money, just for the sake of adjective repitition (you had "stale coffee" and "stale cigarettes") but that's just my own opinion. You of course don't have to.
And then I absolutely love "Poor and Starving." :)
I haven't read Bukowski, but I kind of really want to now. TO GOOGLE.
Me: Hahaha thanks guys :D Ivi - most of these were results of slam poetry, so yeah. It just came out that way. Thank you ^^
I got lost on the TTC :( So embarrassed.
I got lost on the TTC :( So embarrassed.
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Iviana (The Sign Painter), The Goddess of indecisiveness
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Me: Slam poetry is amazing. ;3 One of my friends is captain of the slam poetry team at school.
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Me: Nice. I have to write an essay. murr.

Can I have a mod delete them all, so I can entirely re do them?

I need a mod on here to delete ALL posts from my old account. XD cuz I can't redo my old ones till the old old ones are gone...

Keeping:
Avery, Edwin, Rosa, Noel. They may be the only ones.
Any objections?

This is why I'm considering to get rid of Rosa... And Noel... And everyone XD

So, ima keep Edwin(apparently) and Avery?

OMG MY BAND TEACHER THE OTHER DAY:
"Glitter is like the herpes of the craft world. Once you get it, it's impossible to get it off."
He pauses.
"So I guess Ke$ha has a lot of glitter, then. In both ways."
WE LAUGHED SO HARD

So, I'm gonna work on Schmeddie....
GOTTA GO. THERA REMIND THE MODS:
I would like ALL of my character posts and RPs deleted. I'm sure that you can delete my old account and find an option to delete the posts. As for this account... Just the characters:3 please and thanks.
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