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message 1: by [deleted user] (last edited Feb 04, 2011 04:17PM) (new)

Name: Jackson __________ Dawes (Haha, guess whose dad he is...)

Age: I'll say 49, because that's how old he'd be right now...

Appearance: Sandy blonde hair that is thinning a little, blue eyes. He's about 6'6", and has a slim build. He has a small mouth and thin lips, and he has a very button-like nose (that's where Mitch gets his nose, but obviously not his lips.) Other than that, I have no idea.

Personality: *has no brain* I guess he's a little like Mitch, but almost completely lacks his son's temper.

Past: *brain is still AWOL* All I know is he didn't go to college.

Family: His parents are divorced, and I don't think he has a very good relationship with his dad, because his dad is kind of a dirtbag. Jack has two sisters and three brothers as well. He married Mitch's mom when he was about 20, and they had three miscarriages before they had Mitch, and then three after him before they had Holly (that's why Mitch is 9 years older than his sister).

What I want help with: Everything. I'd like personality, some appearance, some more past, a reason for his dad to be a dirtbag, and I'd really love some quirks.


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

Maybe he's not very fun to be around when he's stressed, and it's Cathy that kind of helps him relax and see reason? Maybe he was a little disappointed at first that they couldn't have more kids because he grew up with five siblings and likes big families?

Big ears, maybe? Small ears? Laugh lines?

Maybe he didn't go to college because he couldn't afford it. He tried to earn the money but hadn't done it by the time Cathy came around, so after he got married he just thought "Whatever. No college."

Are his sisters older or younger? They should have forced him to play dress-up with them. Haha.

His dad was a dirtbag because... He just had anger issues? Had a rough childhood and never really got closure for it? I dunno.


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

Okay, I like your whole first paragraph. That is genius.

Small ears and laugh lines.

Hmmm. That sounds reasonable.

I think they're older. YES! DRESS UP! *glomps*

Hmmm....I like the rough childhood...wait, maybe Jack's dad could have been kind of like Ben's dad on Lost? (Did you get that far?)


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

It sounds familiar. I may have seen a bit of Ben's dad, but you might have to explain.


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

Well, actually, it wouldn't work because Jack's mom is still alive....

Forget I said anything.


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

Alright. *flashy-things her memory*


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

Hey, I was just thinking. You know how it took Mitch and Delilah about 4 years before Delilah got pregnant? I was just thinking that was probably really hard on Mitch because his parents had so much trouble having children...

And then there's the whole embryonic stem-cells thing that we don't really need to talk about.


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

Ahhh. Sadness. That makes sense, though.

Gah.


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

*sniffles*


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

He could be like my dad and hate cats but love dogs.


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

Okay. That sounds good. Maybe he wanted a dog but Cathy is allergic?


message 12: by [deleted user] (new)

Sure.

Hmm... Always loses his keys?


message 13: by [deleted user] (new)

YES! That is so like him!


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

Yay!

Has a good sense of humor?
Good at comforting people?


message 15: by [deleted user] (new)

I'm going to say yes to both of those.

What kind of things do you think he and Mitch do together?


message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

Talk about cars they wish they had, like black corvettes with red leather seats. xD Go driving, once Mitch gets his license/permit. I can't think of Mitch's hobbies right now... Basketball?


message 17: by [deleted user] (new)

Yeah, I can see them talking about cars, and driving, and Jack's more into football, but they probably play both together. Even though Mitch totally sucks at football and Jack totally sucks at basketball. XD


message 18: by [deleted user] (new)

Teehee.


message 19: by [deleted user] (new)

I know Mitch always hates it when his dad and his cousins pressure him into playing football with them at Thanksgiving...


message 20: by [deleted user] (new)

That's true.

I am suddenly really tired.


message 21: by [deleted user] (new)

Take a nap?


message 22: by [deleted user] (new)

I can't really. It's probably good that I'm tired, so I'll be able to sleep tonight.

What kind of music does Jack like? I'd suggest Goo Goo Dolls, but I'm listening to them right now, so I'm biased.


message 23: by [deleted user] (new)

He probably likes 70's and 80's music....because those are kind of his decades...


message 24: by [deleted user] (new)

*nods*

Hmm... His favorite color is... bluegreenred?


message 25: by [deleted user] (new)

Also known as brown? XD


message 26: by [deleted user] (new)

*pfft*


message 27: by [deleted user] (new)

It's okay. He can like brown. He actually kind of seems like a tan person to me...

Sorry I vanished. I was installing Google Chrome.


message 28: by [deleted user] (new)

I just couldn't decide which of those colors to suggest, so...

No problem.


message 29: by [deleted user] (new)

Ah. I see.

I have two browsers so I can get on my GR and my character's GR at the same time. And I have no patience for Safari.


message 30: by [deleted user] (new)

Bahaha. That's a good idea. I think only Firefox works on my ancient laptop, so that's that.


message 31: by [deleted user] (new)

*nods* Firefox is pretty rad.


message 32: by [deleted user] (new)

Indeed.


message 33: by Mitch (new)

Mitch (i-am-not-real) | 425 comments Hey, look. My dad has a topic.

And he has no middle name.


message 34: by [deleted user] (new)

Maxy wrote: "Indeed."

It has the best name. for sure.


message 35: by [deleted user] (new)

MITCH.

His middle name could be... Aaron... or Michael... or Samuel... or Scmhutiferghuson. Or Smittywerbenmanjensen.


message 36: by [deleted user] (new)

I like Aaron.


message 37: by Mitch (new)

Mitch (i-am-not-real) | 425 comments MAXY.


message 38: by [deleted user] (new)

MITCHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL. AND CASSIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEE.


message 39: by Mitch (new)

Mitch (i-am-not-real) | 425 comments Mostly Mitchell.


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