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message 401: by [deleted user] (new)

Ally: Makorra Makorra Makorra Makorra Makorra Makorra Makorra Makorra Makorra Makorra Makorra Makorra Makorra
Adam: I hate you.
Ally: Whyyyyyy?
Adam: Because you love other fictional characters more then your own.
Ally: I can't help it...LoK is so addicting...
Adam: I'm hurt! I'm somewhat like that Mako guy...
Ally: Hardly. O_O


message 402: by RedPath (last edited Apr 26, 2012 04:39PM) (new)

RedPath | 853 comments RP: MAKORRA. IT'S IN THE AIR.
Rosalia: *snaps fingers* Hey, hey! Focus! You're nearly done with this chapter.
RP: But, but the Makorra is calling to me... How can I resist? They're sooooo cute!
Rosalia: They're FICTION!
RP: So are you!
Rosalia: ...Touche.


message 403: by [deleted user] (new)

Kaya: you're welcome! I wrote a million new chapters for you!
Pluvia: thank you, Kaya.
Kaya: you're welcome.
Erin: Do you think I'll get to kiss Pluvia?
Kaya: ...we'll see.
Pluvia: ...I wouldn't mind.
Erin: ...Kaya?
Kaya: I said we'll see!
Erin: Okay!
Lien: What the heck was that?
Kaya: What was what?
Lien: I don't even get to punch him!
Kaya: Ooooh... That.
Lien: Yeah that!
Kaya: ...


message 404: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Emily: I need to find a picture of you.
Kevin: AND CHANGE MY NAME.
Emily: I'll make a to-do list.


Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Ally wrote: "Ally: Makorra Makorra Makorra Makorra Makorra Makorra Makorra Makorra Makorra Makorra Makorra Makorra Makorra
Adam: I hate you.
Ally: Whyyyyyy?
Adam: Because you love other fictional characters mo..."

Shreya: Are you talking about Legend of Korra....?


message 406: by Sydney (new)

Sydney (sydeli) | 145 comments Rayne: Get off the computer.
Me: But...
Rayne: Either get off the computer or get on Amazon and find him a present.
Me: Just let me--
Rayne: No. Give me the mouse.
Me: How? You aren't real.
Rayne: Give me the mouse.
Me: You aren't real!
Rayne: Give me the mouse!
Me: BUT YOU AREN'T REAL!
Rayne: Fine. I'll take it from you.
Me: If you take that mouse, I'll break your hand.
Rayne: BUT I'M NOT REAL!
Me: Ainslee, break her hand.
Ainslee: No!
Me: Ainslee!
Ainslee: Well, she's right. Find him a present and you can get back on Goodreads.
Me: You're supposed to be on my side!
Rayne: Haha. I win.
Me: But--
Rayne: I win.
Me: But I created you! So I win!
Rayne: Not necessarily.
Me: Just let me be right.
Rayne: You still have to find him a present.
Me: I KNOW!


message 407: by Jo (last edited Jul 10, 2012 05:08PM) (new)

Jo (Penname8) | 1574 comments Me: Really, I need to give my sassy characters a lecture. all right, listen up! Unless you want our RPs to go Downhill, we are going to have to change things. If we go one like this, I'll have you get away with Murder!. None of you are Young and Innocent in the least, or have Stage Fright, so you immediately turn to sass. The least Notorious RPer would notice. You may think of me as a Saboteur, and I Confess I am trying to undermine your witty talks. Don't have a Shadow of a Doubtthat I am. Now, I advise you to have less Suspicion of other characters (that's for you, Judith. Not everybody is a Secret Agent. And you, Greg! To Catch a Thief you first need proof she is actually a thief!) Other smaller points include not letting your emotions get you, taking care not to get into a sentimental Frenzy, not thinking of yourself as a Man Who Knew Too Much, and to start wishing other people a Bon Voyage.
Characters:...fourteen Hitchcock films.


message 408: by Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. (last edited Sep 04, 2012 01:49PM) (new)

Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Shreya: FINALLY! I'M 14 YEARS OLD!
Divya: Darnit. I was enjoying being the same age as you.
Shreya: Um...don't I get a "Happy 1-day late birthday"? And technically you're the same age as my grandma. You're born in 1934.
Divya: No excuse. And now you've cut off the part when I get to turn 14.
Ravi: Hey, don't complain. I'm still 10. And I don't get to turn 11.
Divya: In the sequel you guys are older!
Ravi: Is the sequel ever going to be written!?
Shreya: YES! Just not yet.
Ravi: Yeah right.


message 409: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Parker: GUESS WHAT'S IN LESS THAN TWO MONTHS?
Me: Shut up shut up shut up.
Laurel: Wait, you mean we finally get to actually have lives and things?
Me: Shut up shut up shut up
Elliot: What's going on?
Parker: NANOWRIMO.
Me: GAAAAAH.


Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Shreya: Oh god, I remember NaNo 2011 - EPIC FAIL.
Divya: You got that right.
Shreya: 20, 000 words like a boss.
Ravi: Niiiice.


message 411: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Me: 20,000 words is still good!
Elliot: Yeah, easy for you to say, Miss Win-Everything-No-Matter-What.
Me: Shhh.
Laurel: *shrugs* He's only telling the truth.


message 412: by RedPath (new)

RedPath | 853 comments RP: I find 20,000 words to be impressive.
Amity: Especially since you only got about 7,000 words.


message 413: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Me: But yeah, 20,000 words is a LOT of words. And it's definitely better to try and "fail" with that many words than to not write at all.


Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Shreya: Let's just hope I do better this year.
Divya: Not with all your crazy music antics.
Shreya:...that's true, in November I'll be pretty busy rehearsing Hallelujah.
Divya: Not to mention writing out 6 parts.
Shreya: No, I'm doing that now!
Divya: Still...I don't think you'll do it.
Shreya: Thanks. Well YOU'LL be out of the way by then. Only about 8 more chapters.
Divya: That's a lot...
Shreya: OH SHUT UP! DO YOU WANT ME TO FINISH YOU OR NOT?


message 415: by Finley (new)

Finley Mac | 334 comments Trey: Can I ask you something?
Mouse: No.
Trey: Why have you not written anything?
Mouse: I'm busy.
Trey: No, you are not. You are on the internet. Your life is compromised of horses, school, and internet.
Mouse: I hate you. Go navigate your submarine.
Trey: Maybe you should write a scene… ABout me navigating said submarine.
Mouse: GET OUT OF MY HOUSE.
Trey: I am not in your house. I am in your head and you are hallucinating.
Mouse: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGETOUTGETOUTGETOUT


Berwald ~I Have Moved Accounts~ | 26 comments (I haven't been active for a while, but I am back on, so I'm just going to jump in.)

Me: ? What the heck?
Max: I have no idea... (Max is from here: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3... )


message 417: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Aaron: Hey, everyone!
Bethany: Um, hi?


Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. wrote: "Shreya: Let's just hope I do better this year.
Divya: Not with all your crazy music antics.
Shreya:...that's true, in November I'll be pretty busy rehearsing Hallelujah.
Divya: Not to mention writi..."


Shreya: WHAT NOW! I FINISHED YOUR BOOK! OH SNAP! Jan 10, 2013, 12:47 PM.
Divya:....you even remember the time.
Shreya: Yes! Well kind of, I was on a flight so that's the time it would have been at home.
Divya: I can't believe it.
Shreya: ME NEITHER! Now I can start a new book and get some kind, gentle, docile characters.
Divya: What about that sequel you planned?
Shreya: Err...what sequel?
Divya: Oh don't play innocent! You're not getting rid of us yet!
Shreya: >.<


message 419: by [deleted user] (new)

Missy: I've never done this before!
Fate: That's because Maxy has ignored all of us for the last year.
Dominic: Not all of us...
Fate: You're right. You guys at least got NaNoWriMo. All I've had since 2009 is one and a half chapters and a kissing scene that will never even happen.
Amelia: You have a kissing scene, Fate?
Fate: *repressing a sigh* You missed the key words in that sentence: never and happen.
Amelia: Oh, right... That one... I kind of forgot about it because it's a little out of character for me, so it's almost like--
Fate: Thank you, no need to rub it in.
Kayleigh: And we're already fighting. Maxy? Care to stop this?
Maxy: Nah. I prefer to watch it all unfold.


message 420: by Elliott (last edited Jan 10, 2013 05:10PM) (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Me: OH MY GOSH FATE HI HI HI I'M YOUR BIGGEST FAN LIKE YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH I LOVE YOU HI.
Bethany: ... she apologizes for her excessive fangirling. She's not always this... weird.
Me: Um, yes. Yes, I am. Shhh.


message 421: by [deleted user] (new)

Fate: I'm flattered... I suppose.
Maxy: *to Lav* That's a better response than he'd give me if I told him I was his biggest fan.
Fate: Maybe because I don't believe you. My biggest fan would not write the story this way.
Maxy: You're losing some of your personality. Too much angst and not enough... I don't know... humor?
Fate: You know perfectly well that sarcasm counts as humor.
Maxy: You haven't used any of that, either.
Missy: "Oooh, a sarcasm detector. What a useful invention."
Fate: *silence*
Maxy: *silence*
Missy: I just wanted to lighten the tension.
Maxy: You don't even know what that quote is from.
Fate: Yeah, Maxy, because you don't know what it's from.
Maxy: EVERYONE STOP STATING THE OBVIOUS AND GET YOUR PERSONALITIES BACK.
Fate: I'll get my personality back if you suck it up and write the second chapter.
Maxy: Does it even work that way?
Fate: *rolls eyes* Why don't you just try it out and see.
Maxy: That's better. I'm seeing some of your manipulative side.
Fate: I'm Fate. I have to be manipulative.
Maxy: Good point.
Aaron: You do realize that there are dozens of us here, right? You don't have to settle for arguing with Fate.
Adrienne: Like us. Remember?
Maxy: BEN! ADRIENNE! *glomps*


message 422: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Me: I agree. You should have a nice, happy, ending. BECAUSE YOU ARE WORTH IT. Shame on you, Maxy, shame on you.
Merrilee: Because you definitely gave me a nice, happy ending.
Thea: Because you definitely aren't planning to screw up my life by the second half of the novel I'm in.
Aspen: Because you definitely didn't kill off my mom.
Will: Because you definitely aren't planning some sort of tragic accident for me to die in.
Me: Wait, I'm not... hmm. That could actually work...
Bethany: Oh, Will. Look what you did.
Will: ... great.


message 423: by Anastasia (new)

Anastasia (booksteainsanity) | 955 comments Me: So...guys...I'd love for you two to end up together, but I don't think it's going to happen.
John: Aww! Why not?
Me: It's just...overly cliche for a book to end with a couple riding off into the sunset. And, sometimes, it isn't all that realistic, either.
Aimee: But I've been pining over him for the whole book!
Me: Well, you know what they say: feelings can sometimes be misleading.
Aimee: But you made me do it!
Me: ...
John: She has a point.
Me: I...I know. But it's not realistic. I mean, even though I want you two together, I--
Aimee: See? You admitted it.
John: *smirks at Aimee*
Aimee: *smiles back at him*
Me: Fine. I'll think about it.


message 424: by Sarah (last edited Jan 11, 2013 11:35AM) (new)

Sarah (sarah_endipity) | 819 comments Me: What's wrong Toby? Had a bad day?
Toby: We were in a car accident today.
Me: Are you guys ok?
Toby: My wife and children died!
Me: Oh yeah! That reminds me. What kind of funeral do you want them to have. Then I can just go write it down.
Toby:What do you mean?
Me: Well I am planning your life right?
Toby: Yeah, but-- Wait! You ruined my life?
Me: No! I wrote your life.
Toby: You just wait til' I find that whitch. I will put a curse on you! *runs away laughing*
Me: *writing* Needs therapy... and a friend.


message 425: by Jo (new)

Jo (Penname8) | 1574 comments Me: So, a small reunion. Miles, choose your true love.
Miles: You mean it?
Me: Candidate A: Gilbertine Hester Pearson of the caramel hair and softy brown eyes...
Gilbertine: He's five years older than me! Although he is hot
Miles: As my true love? Jo... No offense, Gil, but...next candidate?
Gilbertine: Please, how could I ever take offense!
Me: Candidate B: your average nerd--
April: --fighter. Nerdfighter--
Me: --April Oakley of the notorious arrest record proper of a half-Patterson.
April: I try.
Miles: And?
April: I am disappointed in that single "And?"
Miles: Sorry, but I barely know you.
Me: Candidate C: Glorious tennis goddess--
Charlene: This keeps getting better and better--
Me: Charlene!
Miles: She lives. In Johannesburg.
Charlene: Care to move?
Miles: No offense to any of you, but no. No.


message 426: by Sarah (new)

Sarah (sarah_endipity) | 819 comments last line was funny.


message 427: by Jo (new)

Jo (Penname8) | 1574 comments Me: So, ask my characters anything. Geraldine, Simon, Adam, Swift, Miles, Maxine, Lily, Andrew and Olive. Any question.
Olive: Any question?
Adam: You thinking what I'm thinking?
Olive: Keep it PG-13.
Simon: I might be eleven, but I'm not ignorant.
Olive: It wasn't for you.


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