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Get To Know Your Characters
Me: Hayden. Please. Please stop.Hayden: Shut up.
Lola: *cries*
RedPath wrote: "Chrysanta: :O I LOVE THEM!RP: ...what?
Rosy: She's talking about those clay figures you made of both of us while you worked at that art camp.
RP: Oh yeah! I'm glad you like them!
Rosy: They're ver..."
Shreya: RP! *attack-hug*
Ravi: =.=
Divya: Yay Shreya! You've done 50 pages of our story!
Shreya: 51, actually XD.
Rhea: NO! 50 and one third.
Ravi: o_0
Shreya: Ravi, are you planning to SPEAK today?
Ravi: No.
Rhea: HE JUST SPOKE! HE JUST SPOKE!
Shreya: What? Oh...right! YOU JUST SPOKE!
Ravi: ^.^
RP: SHREYA! -returns attack-hug-Rosie: You've got 50 pages? Great!
Chrysanta: Don't forget about that extra third, Rosie.
Rosie: -.-
RP: Heeeey, the TV show I'm watching right now has a character named Divya in it :D
Mandy wrote: "Jess wrote: "mandy: this is mandy brighton.... who are you??"Mandy: THE Mandy."
Mandy: What's your last name? I'll just be called Dee cos thats what my sis calls me
Jess wrote: "Mandy wrote: "Jess wrote: "mandy: this is mandy brighton.... who are you??"Mandy: THE Mandy."
Mandy: What's your last name? I'll just be called Dee cos thats what my sis calls me"
Mandy: Mandy Lastname. Sorry, not giving it out over the internet. =P And you can be Mandy. I don't mind. I'll be Manandy.
Autumn: Hai Mandy!Sam: I want to say hi to Mandy
Autumn: Then say hi, stupid
Sam: HI MANGIRL.
Mandy: lol i'm a character in jess' story. everything started out sad at first but now it's all good :) i have a family!
mandy; erm hisymon; did you just call her a man? *ball up fists*
rossetta; calm down bro
ash; You gotta chilllllll
mandy; honey its ok they mean well *sighs* sorry about him
Mandy: HI SEALBOY. HI AUTUMN. Oh, okay, other Mandy. I'm glad it's all better. =)
Me: Hey Chance! You like your story so far?Chance: Yeah,sure. Theres barely any story to read.
Me:Yeah,I know,but A huge Idea hasnt hit me yet
Chance:haha,I thought your mind was full imagination. Or at least thats what yo
u said.
Me: *glares* HA,HA,not cute.
Chance:And Who said it wasnt?
Me: I did!
Chance: well I did is wrong
Me: Wha? Get Over it!
Chance:yes,of course *winks*
Me:*faceplams*
Jess wrote: "mandy; erm hisymon; did you just call her a man? *ball up fists*
rossetta; calm down bro
ash; You gotta chilllllll
mandy; honey its ok they mean well *sighs* sorry about him"
Sam: Err, no. I meant the other Mandy. That is her nickname.
Cobalt; jess, i'd like to introdue my sisters; scarlett, silvyr, violet and marygoldall; Hey
me; I already know them... I created them
cobalt; oh... nvm then
me; its ok ;P
Mandy: oh... this could get confusing >.<
Havanne:So you wanna go out and party!?Me: No! I didnt make you to go out and party! Your supposed to be Havanne Hurtrose in my book! Not Miley Cyrus!
Havanne: DONT compare me to her
Me: Of Course I DONT want to compare you to her!
Havanne: -.- Who Says?
Me: Because,...Okay why did you do that?
Havanne: What?
Me: Who Says!
Havanne: Oh yeah I have a new rolemodel I wanna follow.
Me: Havanne,you dont need a rolemodel. Your supposed to be a rolemodel yourself!
Havanne: hm. That interesting. But...fine. Im On The Right Track Baby I was Born This Way!!
Me:°_°
Something random! A great way to get to know your characters is to play Truth or Dare with them and their accompliances!
Avaline: You gave up on your idea for Tierken! Shame on you!! How could you? It was an amazing idea!Me: It wasn't working out so well. I have plans for other novels.
Avaline: Like what?
Me: Like what if the American Revolution failed?
Avaline: Then we'd be British and we wouldn't be the U.S.
Me: Exactly.
Avaline: Do you have an issue with British people? 'Cause it sounds like you do.
Me: No, I don't have an issue with them.
Avaline: Fine, go write your story on the American Revolution. I'll bet you fifty bucks that you'll scrap this one too.
Me: Oh, I won't give up on this story. It'll be my best idea yet!
Avaline: What about the story of your wolves?
Me: That one's pretty good as well. Now go away. I'll try to come back to your story in a few years.
Avaline: A few YEARS!! Are you crazy!
Me: *pushes Avaline in the closet* Much better, now, what to call my new novel.
RedPath wrote: "RP: SHREYA! -returns attack-hug-Rosie: You've got 50 pages? Great!
Chrysanta: Don't forget about that extra third, Rosie.
Rosie: -.-
RP: Heeeey, the TV show I'm watching right now has a character ..."
Divya: REALLY? What's she like? Does she have a brother that drives her insane?
Rohan: Aww...*sniffle*
Divya: NO NOT YOU ROHAN! YOU'RE AMAZING! *attack-hug*
Ravi: O__________________O
Anjali: Erm....guys....NONE OF YOU HAVE NOTICED THAT SHREYA HAS GOTTEN TO PAGE 52 OF OUR STORY!
All: WHAT!
Shreya: Gee, thanks. That just proves that you don't believe in me at all...
RP: Weeeelll, she's a physician's assisstant for a concierge doctor in the Hamptons, and she does have a guy who drives her crazy and he is someone's brother...just not her's. And he's nothing like Rohan. *hugs as well*Maxen: Congratulations on reaching 52 pages!
Pierce: We'll never know what that's like.
Rosalia: Most likely not.
RP: SHUT UP.
Shreya: Aw, guys, don't be mean. The only reason I wrote so much is because I don't have very much to do on AIRPLANES. Otherwise I'd still be at...um...40 pages?Ravi: EXCUSE ME?
Emily: *pokes*Sheldon: WAT?
Emily; *huddles in corner*
Hayden: You're an obnoxious brat with terrible taste in everything. I hate you.Mia: I love you too, Hayden.
Emmie: Erm...Hayden? You're going to date her. Seriously. Actually, she's going to be the only person you'll date seriously after Alice.
Hayden: Oh, is our relationship just as retarded as mine and Cassidy's.
Emmie: Uuum...no. For reference, see: Animal by Neon Trees.
Hayden:...That's awkward.
Emmie {all things go} wrote: "Hayden: You're an obnoxious brat with terrible taste in everything. I hate you.Mia: I love you too, Hayden.
Emmie: Erm...Hayden? You're going to date her. Seriously. Actually, she's going to be t..."
Mandy: *breaks into song* WA-OH I WANT SOME MORE. WA-OH WHAT ARE YOU WAAAAITING FOOOR TAKE A BITE OF MY HEART TONIGHT.
Emily: Gah, that song... I can still hear 97% of the kids at school singing that at the top of their lungs as I sat out....
Snow: *spins in circles*Chord: What ARE you doing?
Snow: *stops spinning* Spinning!
Chord: … I see.
Indigo: Hey, Eliza, are you gonna start our story yet?!
Jay: Don't forget me!
Me: Shush, you're all probably going to be in the same story, alright?! Well, maybe not you, Snow.
Snow: What??!!
Me: Wait, but you're gonna be in my other one, okay?
Snow: *pouts*
Addie: Why haven't you started writing about us yet when you know exactly what you want to say?Me: I don't know exactly what I want to say. In fact, I barely know at all.
Addie: Yes, you do.
Me: No, I don't.
Well this really gave some great insight, eh?
Emily: Hey kid.Maggie: ...Hey.
Emily: What's goin' on?
Maggie: ...Nothing much. Homework, studying...
Roxanne: Don't be so quiet, Mags! She is our creator, after all.
Maggie: Oh, really? Yet another god I have to please? Yet another stupid warlord who thinks she can tell me what to do, what to say, who I am? Perfect!
Emily: Um, actually, Maggie, I just want you to be yourself. I won't kill you; I love you.
Maggie: That's what they all say.
Aiden: Hey, hey! Ms. Almighty Woman! Could you give me a third eye? I think it would look so epic!
Roxanne: Aiden!
Maggie: *snort*
Emily: Uh...Lemme think about that...no.
Aiden: Aw, man!
Me: *sigh* I'm bored. I'm sooooooooooooooo bored. Daniel: Shut up.
Me: You shut up.
RP: Hey guys!-cricket-
RP: Where is everyone...?
Strange woman who I've never seen before: They're not here.
RP: O.O My characters disappeared?
SWINSB: Yep. They all went out for a smoothie.
RP: ...Without me?
SWINSB: That's right.
RP: But they know I love smoothies!
SWINSB: They most certainly do.
RP: That's not fair.
SWINSB: Well, they were so mad that you've been neglecting their stories that they decided to leave for a bit. They're awfully bored, cramped up in you brain with nothing to do.
RP: But they can't leave!
SWINSB: They're obviously not here. and they're not invisible.
RP: HMPH. I'll show them. I'm going to write tonight and they're not going to be here to be a part of it! Then they'll think twice about bailing. *runs off to write*
SWINSB: ...I didn't think that would work.
-Rosalia, Maxen, Pierce, and Chrysanta peek in-
Chrysanta: I guess you're were right, Pierce.
Maxen: Good plan.
Pierce: *only slightly pleased with himself* I knew the smoothies would do it.
Jay: Mmm. Smoothies...Snow: Ooh! Ooh! I like strawberry!
Ivy: I like rasberry!
Jay: Blueberry!
Me: Ooh, rasberries.
RP: I prefer cherry.Rosalia: Get back to writing.
RP: Yes ma'am.
Chrysanta: I loooove chocolate and banana.
Pierce: Gross.
Chrysanta: No it's not! It tastes like a Reese's Cup!
Ivy: But a Reese's cup has peanut butter. That's why it's called a peanut butter cup. But I do like bananas...Jay: I know 'banana' in sign language!
Chrysanta: But it TASTES like one! :DPierce: Do you know how crazy you sound right now?
Chrysanta: Oh shut up. Why do I even hang around you?
RP: Because you loooooove each other.
Pierce: *snort*
Ivy: If you say so!Jay: I know 'cookie' in sign language!
Me: Ooh, I like cookies!
Me: I should write.Jay: Yes, you should.
Daniel: I completely agree.
Ivy: What are we talking about?
Snow: Smoothies?
Me: No.
Snow: Aww..
Jay: Aren't you going to write?
Me: No.
Daniel: What?!
Me: Fine, I'll think about it. Jay? I think you're gonna fall in love with either Ivy or Indigo.
Indigo: What now?
Ivy: Uuuuuhhh........
Me: Oh, and Daniel? I think you'll be bad. And you can be Jay's long Lost brother!
Jay: What?! No!
Daniel: You're insane, woman!
Me: I know. Now shut up.
Seattle: Hey, you!Me: Me?
Seattle: Yeah, you. I've got a bone to pick with you!
Me: No you don't. You're a quite mild cloud cuckoo lander, remember? You don't get angry.
Seattle: It's that, right there. You think you know everything about me, don't you?
Me: But I do. I created you. Seattle Kim, property of Mello Severus Lawliet.
Seattle: And another thing! Who's bright idea was it to name me Seattle? Who names their kids Seattle?
Me: Hey, Seattle's a nice name. Don't go trippin' on my names.
Seattle: And then, as if the name wasn't bad enough you gave me the sole purpose of being Shaun Lee's crush! SHAUN. LEE. I mean, really?
Me: Hey! I gave you a personality, didn't I? I even gave you your own comic! You were not just Shaun's cru-
Seattle: You made my mother single! And then you made her insane!
Me: Well, now, it was needed for the story and I didn't mean to -
Seattle: And then you killed her! But no, it couldn't be a painless or simple death, right? No way. You had to go and try and use another plotbunny you had, right? After all, who cares if poor ol' Seattle is scarred for life after his own mother drives off a bridge with him and his sister in the car with her!
Me: That wasn't-
Seattle: And if that wasn't enough, you had me go live with that-that nightmare!
Me: Bishop wasn't that bad...
Seattle: And you made me have a crush on him! My own uncle!
Me: Don't say it like that, after all, it's not like he's related to you by blood or anything so-
Seattle: You friggin sadist!
Me: ...we don't need to start namecalling here...just calm down, dude.
Seattle: Must you torture every single character that ever crosses your mind? Must you make up some hideous backstory for every poor soul that even dares to linger in the black pit of eerie depression and darkness known as your brain?!
Me: ...
Seattle: Well, don't you have something to say for yourself?!
Me: *leaves*
Seattle: Get back here and defend yourself! SAY SOMETHING!
Me: *begins to run*
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And stay tuned for another episode of All My
Me: That was.. interesting. :)Jay: Ahem. We need to talk.
Me: No, no we don't.
Jay: You're making me Daniel's brother!
Me: So? He's nice.
Jay: He's evil.
Me: He gave me a cookie.
Jay: A cookie.
Me: Yes.
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Me: I wonder what happened to my old characters I made...4 years ago. I've spoke to em since then. I wonder where they are..
Daniel: They probably ran away because they don't want to be thrown into a pit of depression and pain.
Me: I'm not that bad, am I? I haven't given anyone permanent physical injuries yet, right?
Jay: It has crossed through your mind.
Me: Jay!
Jay: What? You can't hurt me.
Me: Oh, really?? *takes out stick*
Jay: *snorts*
Me: *raises stick*
Jay: ...
Me: ...
Jay: *walks away*
Me: ..What are you.. Hey! Come back! *runs after*
!ĘŁÏŻÅ¡ wrote: "Me: That was.. interesting. :)Jay: Ahem. We need to talk.
Me: No, no we don't.
Jay: You're making me Daniel's brother!
Me: So? He's nice.
Jay: He's evil.
Me: He gave me a cookie.
Jay: A cooki..."
Shreya: Come to the dark side. We have cookies.
Ravi: O_O
Shreya: Sorry! My friend told me that today and I've become obsessed with it.
Ravi: Let me guess. It was Leila.
Shreya: No, actually it was Ashna.
Divya: Who the heck is she?
Shreya: You don't know her? SHAME ON YOU.
Divya: Nope, not ringing a bell.
Shreya: You meanie children! I'm going to email her saying you don't know her.
Ravi: Yeah, right. Can you imagine how scary that would look? "Hey Ashna! My characters don't know you!"
Shreya: >.<
RP: SHREYA??Maxen: *winces* Do you really need to yell?
RP: I'M NOT YELLING.
Shreya: RP!!!!!!!!!!!!!Ravi: We know she's there.
Shreya: I KNOW YOU KNOW WE KNOW SHE'S THERE.
Ravi: You make no sense whatsoever.
Lily: Hey, Mr Donagan!!Mr Donagan: LILY, MY DEAR! Oh my, it's been centuries! Did you swallow a giraffe not long ago?
Lily: Well, you certainly have not changed at all. You haven't seen me since my third birthday. Did you expect me to stay that short?
Mr Donagan: Yes. Yes I did.
Lily: HAHA, of course. You sure know how to make my day.
Mr Donagan: And you sure know how to make me a coffee! The machine is right over there. Go on, you silly giraffe!
Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. wrote: "!ĘŁÏŻÅ¡ wrote: "Me: That was.. interesting. :)Jay: Ahem. We need to talk.
Me: No, no we don't.
Jay: You're making me Daniel's brother!
Me: So? He's nice.
Jay: He's evil.
Me: He gave me a cooki..."
Me: *hyperventilates* COOOOOOOKIIIEEESS!!!!!!!!!!
Jay: What kind?
Me: CHOCOLATE CHIP.
Jay: Interesting. Do you have peanut butter?
Ivy: Can I have peanut butter, extra crunchy, with apples?
Jay: I do like apples..
Ivy: Raise your hand if you like apples! *raises hand*
Jay: *raises hand* I like honeycrisp apples.
Ivy: Yum.
Me: Ooh.. *raises hand*
Daniel: I like green apples.
Ivy: Granny Smith?
Daniel: Sure.
Me: *sings* I like to eat, eat, eat, apples and bananas....
Shreya: Oooh! I LIKE TO ATE, ATE, ATE, AEPPLES AND BANAENAES...Rohan: Bad grammar!
Shreya: o_o that's how the song goes....
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Me: I better not make you like the Mimi I know.
Mimi: I hope not. Then I'd be like you. That would kind of suck.
Miles: Hey hey hey, leave the girl alone. She might kill you if you make her mad.
Me: Miles has got it doooown.
Mimi: True, true.
Me: YES. I HAVE YOU IN MY CONTROL.
Miles: If you make her love you enough, she'll never be able to kill you. You'll preetty much be immortal
Me: Hey, I'm not that much of a softie.
Miles: Scottie? You killed her then cried so much you BROUGHT HER BACK FROM THE DEAD!
Me: I WAS 11.
Mimi: Wasn't that just two years ago?
Me: Shhh everyone calm yourselves I will kill you if I need to.
Miles: Then bring us back to life?
Me: Maybe to kill you again and put you in more pain.
Mimi: Somebody's getting sassy.
Me: I love you both dearly, but go away.
Mimi and Miles: OKAY!
Me: NO I'M JUST KIDDING I NEED YOU.
Me: GUYS.
Me: GUUUUUUYS COME BAAACK!
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Henri: Oh, and we're not?
Me: Well... I made you. If I said that about you it'd seem egotistical.
Henri: Pssh, you did NOT make me. I made myself.
Me: Nooot really. I'm pretty much forcing a personality on you right now, to be honest.
Henri: Yeah, right. Whatever. You'll see who I really am when NaNo comes.
Me: Hope so. That'd be extremely helpful.
Ryan: Now me, on the other hand, totally unique and original. She had NO part in this.
Henri: Whatever, Ryan. She made you just as much as she made me.
Me: Erm... not exactly. Ryan just sort of happened.
Ryan: I'm too powerful to be contained!
Henri: *rolls eyes*
Me: *continues to sing* I LIKE TO ITE, ITE, ITE, IPLES AND BANINIES!Jay: *frowns*
Ivy: Umm..
Autumn: So...are you guys ready for round two?Sam: Not really. Seeing as how round one just ended.
Autumn: Shut up. Please.
Rain: I kind of have to agree with him. Round one pretty much exhausted me.
Autumn: Well, that was sort of the point.
Sam: Why couldn't you be original enough to create another story?
Autumn: Well, I have others; they just aren't as detailed as yours.
Sam: So, basically, you're too lazy to brainstorm for other stories.
Autumn: No, no, no, you have it all wrong!
Rain: This is the part where she tells us it's because she loves us enough to spend that much time on us.
Sam: Of couurrseeee.
Autumn: You two don't know how lucky you are.
Autumn: Oh, look, we have an audience.Rain: ...
Sam: Look what you did, Autumn?
Autumn: Excuse me, you're the one that likes to cause conflict.
Rain: *shuffles away*
Rhea: I want popcorn too! *starts towards Charlotte*Anjali: Mee too!
Sanjay: Meee too!
Shreya: Stoppit. You're making me feel bad about my braces.
Ravi: What are those?
Shreya: Something you had better not know.
Rohan: I WANT TO KNOW!
Rhea: Are they scary?
Anjali: TELL MEEEE!
Divya: Guys, she's just annoying you. They're just weird little bead thingies on her teeth.
Shreya: >.<
Me: Lalalalalalalalalalalarlarlarlarlarlarlarlarlarlalar! :DIvy: ...Uuuh...
Me: Hmm?
Ivy: Anyway...
Jay: We have a proposition for you!
Me: What?
Ivy: If you write-
Jay: Include me!
Ivy: *glares* Don't interrupt!
Jay: Sorry.
Ivy: If you write about us within the next day, you'll get a prize!
Me: Ooh, what kind of prize?
Ivy: Um..a..a..
Jay: A chicken!
Me: I've always wanted a chicken!! Gimme!
Jay: Not until you write!
Me: Fine! I'll write something so fantastic, you'll all explode!!!!! *trudges off*
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Mandy: THE Mandy.