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Rain: Watch your language, sir, this is a kids' group.Sam: Don't talk to strangers, Rain.
Rain: Excuse me, but are you my mother?
Sam: As a matter of fact, I am.
Rain: O______O
Sam: I just realized that's kind of creepy.
Rain: Um, yea, it is.
Autumn: You two already know each other. This is get to know your character. So talk to me.
Rain: I don't really want to.
Sam: Yea...
Autumn: *writing on notepad* They are mean jerkfaces...
Rhea: Meanieesss! Talk to Autumn.Divya: STOP INTERRUPTING AAAH.
Anjali: Knock knock.
Divya: No more knock knock jokes, please.
Shreya: She has a new obsession. You can't stop seven year olds with obsessions.
Divya: *sigh* fine. Who's there?
Anjali: The interrupting cow.
Divya: What the heck? Fine. The interrupting cow wh-
Anjali: MOO!
Divya: *facepalm*
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Abby: Autumn, you seem like a lovely girl. Friends?
Lav: Since when do you talk to strangers and make friends with them?
Abby: In the safety of this box, that's when.
Lav: Then how am I supposed to get to know you if you're a completely different person in this box?
Abby: ... you're not?
Lav: *facepalm* I liked you better when you were pliable.
Chrysanta: Jeez, you're a wreck.RP: AM NOT >.< I'm just very tired, is all.
Chrysanta: Well, I don't blame you. You've had a long day.
RP: -nodnod- I did.
Rosalia: I suppose we can let you off the hook tonight. Who knows what you'll write while you're in this state...
RP: XD Unexpected plot twists are the BOMB.
Pierce: Don't say that. Ever.
RP: v.v Okay.
RP: THE bomb.Pierce: Do you hear me when I talk to you? Or does it go over your head?
RP: ...Sorry, what?
Pierce: -headdesk-
Lav [we'll make it after all] wrote: "Lav: *cracking up about Autumn writing on the notepad* Oh, I love you. Abby: Autumn, you seem like a lovely girl. Friends?
Lav: Since when do you talk to strangers and make friends with them?
Ab..."
Autumn: Hi! I'd love to be your friend! I feel very friendly today!
Rain: I like it when she feels friendly. Then she ignores me and talks to strangers on the internet.
Autumn: ...Are you implying sarcasm?
Rain: No. Because then you can't destroy my life.
Autumn: I don't know how to respond to that.
Rain: Heh heh. That was the point. Now I don't have to talk to you anymore.
Autumn: Still a jerkface, I see.
Rain: I love you, too.
Ravi: What a nice relationship. *snort*Rhea: Now who's the one interrupting!?
Divya: *sigh*
Anjali: But interrupting is awesome! Hey, Knock knock!
Shreya: Who's there?
Anjali: Cows go.
Shreya: Cows go who?
Anjali: NO! COWS GO MOO!
Divya: .....what is with you and cow knock knock jokes!
Anjali: Knock Knock jokes are the bomb!
Shreya:....now YOU'RE listening in to conversations. Lovely.
Anjali: Yes. HEY! Knock kn-
Divya: AAAAH! *runs away*
RP: They are the bomb!Pierce: o.e
RP: That was the last time! I promise.
Pierce: Lies.
Shreya: I love them too. But Anjali is a bit too obsessed right now.Divya: Ya think?
Shades: COCKADOODLEDOO, THE COW SAYS MOO!Hitomi: dude, what is wrong with you?
Flick: Don't ask that question if you have somewhere to be in the next three days.
Shades: That hurts, bro.
Hart: Will you guys just shut up? I'm trying to work here.
Shades: *hanging over side of bed* Hey, whatchu up to, bro?
Hart: I'm getting ready for the escape.
Michael: WOULD YOU ALL JUST SHUT UP?
Shades: Puuuushy.
Divya: *slowly inches away from Shades*Ravi: Don't make it too obvious.
Divya: *snort* Like I'm making it any more obvious than you are.
Shreya: OMIGOD. YOU TWO ARE JUST LIKE ALEX AND JUSTIN FROM WOWP. Except that Divya's not a slacker.
Anjali: Nooo, they're not!
Shreya: What's your problem?
Anjali: That would make me Max.
Shreya: You have a crush on him, don't you.
Anjali: o_0. Okay. First of all, he is twelve and I am seven. Well, I'm supposed to be eight, but *glares*. Second of all, he is fictional. Third of all, he's a complete EGGHEAD, as Alex quotes.
Shreya:....and that sounds JUST like something Max would say. It's official! You guys are WOWP 60 years ago!
Divya, Anjali, and Ravi: *smack*
Anjali: You like art? MEEE TOOOOO!!!!!!!Divya: *sigh*
Anjali: What? I said I LIKE ART!
Divya: That reminds me of the picture you drew me *sob*
Shreya: Aw, that scene was so emotional.
Rohan: What picture?
Shreya: Well now, you don't want me to give away the plot, do you?
Divya: *smack*
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Shreya: *whispers* I know.Divya: *sits in the corner not doing anything*
Shreya: She's going through a hard time. She has to take four kids on a ship, two in hiding. And she's TWELVE YEARS OLD!
Divya: This is all your fault.
Shreya: What, for having good ideas?
Divya: YES.
Shreya: *sigh* It's worse than I thought.
Rhea: Divyaaaa you can borrow Annika and Nalini for a bit! They can make you feel good. They tell stories.
Divya: *smiles* Thanks, Rhea.
Shreya: *sigh* Why is Rhea so good at that?
Ravi: She just is. Like I'm good at calming Divya down.
Shreya: ....No comment. Except that I FOUND PICTURES OF YOU GUYS ON THE INTERNET AND I POSTED THEM ON THE CHARACTER PICTURES TOPIC XDXDXDXDXD
Ravi: OMIGOD! GIMME THAT COMPUTER *steals*
Shreya: Wait! You need to post the comment fir-
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Shreya: *follows her*Divya: *follows* I need to make sure you don't say any bad things about me.
Shreya: Okay. Just don't let Anjali and Rohan come.
Anjali and Rohan: WHY?
Shreya: Uh...well....
Divya: Don't worry. I'll figure it out and tell you guys.
Shreya: Traitor.
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Anjali: Sorry. Shreya interrupts people a lot.Ravi: Where is LeVaughn anyway?
Anjali: Ehh, people never stay long when they're around us.
Ravi: Could be a useful skill.
Anjali: T-T Lovely....
Rhea: Hi Abby! I'm Rhea! I'm five years old and I love dolls! How old are you? What do you like to do? Wanna play?Anjali: *gently steers her away*
Shreya; *returns* Sorry, Abby. These guys are pretty weird, but they're pretty awesome at the same time.
Divya: Was that supposed to be a compliment?
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Rhea: ALL SORTS OF THINGS! We go on ships and we go outside and we clean and cook and we...Divya: W-why don't you tell her about what you make for them, Rhea?
Rhea: Oooh! We make things with the stuff in the scrap bag. Divya and Anjali help me. They sew and glue and...
Divya: *sigh* Once you get her started, it's hard to get her to stop.
Shreya: Hey Ravi! SOMEBODY tells me that you are the ultimate uncle.Ravi: o_0 Come again?
Shreya: YOU. ARE. THE. ULTIMATE. UNCLE.
Ravi: I-I have a niece or nephew?
Shreya: Apparently you do!
Ravi: *snatches my notepad* What have you been writing?
RP: XD I wonder who said that!Chrysanta: A freak, probably.
RP: >.<'
Shreya: Yes, RP, I have been wondering about that too.Ravi: Just tell me already!
Hart: You know, sometimes I wonder how we can get to a computer in a prison. Shades: Becuase it's a book, bro.
Hart...oh.
Michael: Fail.
Hart: Can it, flyboy.
Rhea: FLYBOY? You can FLY?Divya: Eh....come here, Rhea. I think your dolls need something.
Rhea: You borrowed them, remember?
Ravi: Fail.
Lav [the old me is dead and gone] wrote: "Abby: *blushes* I was kind of talking to LeVaughn..."LaVaughn: I have many different cameras. My favourite is my Yashika-A at the moment, but among other things I also have an Olympus-e410, a medium format holga, and a little kodak M530.
And she *points to Tez* wants me to get some video cameras as well*.
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Anjali: WOW. What's the difference between all of them?Divya: She's seven, she didn't mean to sound rude!
Anjali: I sounded rude? ...*sniffle*
Divya: No you didn't, you just MIGhT have.....
Ravi: You may know how to deal with Rhea, but you can't do Anjali.
Divya: Be quiet, Mr. Perfect. You're not helping.
Melissa: Wow, this new group you joined on goodreads is cool!Justine: Yeah! It's fun!
Sabrina: Yeah, except you're probably ruining the group! Your writing is horrible! I mean... uh...
Melissa: Sabrina! That was so mean!
Justine: *sigh* but I'm afraid she's right.
Christie: Yeah, cause she created SABRINA!
Sabrina: HEY!
Melissa: Nice of you to drop in Christie. Anyhoo, when are you going to finish our story?
Justine: Well-
Sabrina: ANYHOO? *laughs loudly and obnoxiously* who says that anymore?
Melissa: Sabrina!!!
Justine: Urg. I think I need to kill Sabrina somewhere in chapter... ONE!
Sabrina: WHAT?
Flick: When are you gonna write about US? Huh?Jordan: *rubs temples* not today.
Shades: Why not, bro?
Jordan: Becausee I just finished a ten page research paper and my hands hurt, BRO.
Shades. Okay, bro. No need to get pissed off.
Jordan: GAAAAAAAAAAHHH! *chases after characters as they scatter shouting "run away run away!"*
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♥Justine♥ wrote: "Melissa: Wow, this new group you joined on goodreads is cool!Justine: Yeah! It's fun!
Sabrina: Yeah, except you're probably ruining the group! Your writing is horrible! I mean... uh...
Melissa: Sa..."
Shreya: OMG JUSTINE IT'S YOUUUUUUU
Divya: o_0. First Liz, now Justine. How many best friends do you have?
Shreya: Too many.
Divya: I have ONE. It makes things a lot easier.
Shreya: Awwww, really? You're my best friend too!
Divya: (quietly) I was actually talking about Anne...
Shreya: I knew that. You're my character. You're never going to be my best friend.
Divya: I hate you too much to be your FRIEND.
Shreya: I hate you too.
Divya: *hugs me*
Shreya: Yes, we are always like this.
Ravi: Girls are crazy.
Rhea: *cartwheels around the room*
Shreya: Ya got that right.
Shreya: OMIGOSH TODAY MY PARENTS TOLD ME THAT I NEED TO STOP THINKING THAT EVERYTHING IS MY FAULT. AAAAH I'M TURNING INTO DIVYA.Ravi: Finally, you recognize the bad in her.
Shreya: I've been recognizing the bad in her for a long time. She is not going to be a Mary-Sue while I own her!
Ravi: Okay. No Mary-Sues. And...what's the bad in me then?
Shreya: Hmm...I don't know where to start.
Ravi: >.<
RP: ISN'T THE "NO PERSONAILTY SYNDROME" BAD ENOUGH?Rosalia: -shrug- I suppose.
RP: AND WHY AREN'T YOU USING YOUR GOODREADS ACCOUNT?
Rosalia: Because I'm confused by the internet.
RP: Chrysanta and Pierce were supposed to teach you how to use it!
Chrysanta: -nervous laugh- Well, this is where it gets ironic. You see, um, Pierce and I realized that we...well we sorta-
Pierce: We forgot how to.
RP: O_O What? You mean that you can't remember how to use a computer?
Chrysanta: Hey, if Pierce forgot his name during all that time, what are the chances that he and I will remember how to use a computer?
RP: But-
Chrysanta: YOU wrote the story.
RP: This is ironic T-T Does this mean I have to teach all of you how to use a computer?
All: -nod-
RP: Even Maxen?
Maxen: What's that supposed to mean?
RP: Well, you don't really have a reason to be on the computer. So, I probably won't need to teach you. Actually, same goes for Pierce.
Pierce:...
Chrysanta: Shirker...
Shreya: HAHAHAHA. Awesomeness. High five, RP!Divya: *glower*
Shreya: Come on. Computers weren't even invented when you live.
Divya: What about when I'm.... o_0 75 years old?
Shreya: Oh. Yeahhh. You're 75 today. Well, you don't use the computer. You sit around and....and...do...something.
Divya: You're supposed to know me.
RP: She watches Westerns, low-budget sci-fi, and Bollywood films.Chrysanta: o.e
RP: You can't talk, Oldies fangirl.
Chrysanta: -///-
Shreya: YES. EXACTLY. SHE DOES. What Bollywood films do you watch? Jab We Met? I LOVE THAT ONE!Divya: Whatever's in the theatres.....
Shreya: I mean at home.
Divya: YOU CAN WATCH MOVIES AT HOME?
Shreya: Not...yet. Not for you.
Divya: Unfair! It's all your fault for putting me in this time period!
Shreya: Yes....I suppose it is.
Eva: Haha! Loser!
Shreya: AAAH EVA GO AWAY.
Eva: Since you actually wrote about me yesterday, I've come back!
Shreya: Be quiet and go away. And leave Divya alone.
Divya: o_0. Since when do you stand up for me?
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Divya: o_0 Sure you do.Shreya: She's a little depressed because I am making her suffer on the ship.
Divya: AND YOU MADE ME ARGUE WITH RAVI. AAAAAH. IF IT WEREN'T FOR HIM, I WOULD...UH...DO SOMETHING BAD. AND YOU'RE MAKING ME ARGUE WITH HIM!
Ravi: It's not Shreya's fault!
Shreya: WOAH. Come again, Ravi?
Ravi: You were completely taking us for granted! You keep moaning about how you're all alone, how you're so awesome and doing this all by yourself! We're here too!
Anjali: GUYS STOP IT X(
Divya: That's not what I meant! You've never been the oldest! You don't understand! You never have to go through all this! You always have someone to go to for help!
Ravi: Yeah, like you'll help me! I'm the one helping you the whole time!
Divya: What about Rhea and Rohan? Hmm? Hmm?
Shreya: *watches* That arguement certainly worked out.....
Me: I don't understand your world. You kill... for sport? What's wrong with you?Rhays: Nothing. I do what I am forced to.
Me: And you don't do anything to stop what you are being forced to do?
Rhays: What can I do? The officials will kill me if I do anything. Believe me, I've tried. But I chickened out. I disappointed myself.
((I feel like a nutzo.))
Rhea: Killing isn't a sport =(Rohan: What? KILLING?
Divya: Honestly, Shreya, you need to stop letting them into your minds right now. They could learn bad things.
Shreya: You just insulted them....
Divya: What? No I didn't! Did I? Did I?
Shreya: Calm down, you freak.
Divya: FREAK! I'M NOT A FREAK! AM I?
Shreya: Aaaaah *headdesk*
Autumn: Hey, Rain, how're you feeling?Rain: Meh.
Autumn: I'm sorry.
Rain: So I've heard.
*silence*
Rain: *sigh* It's okay. It's not your fault.
Autumn: You'll get better someday. I promise, you will.
Rain: I really wish that day would come.
Shreya: Awww, poor Rain. Maybe you can talk to her, Divya.Divya: Wha - me? Aren't I going through a bad enough time myself?
Shreya: Yeah. That's the point.
Divya: Why do you hate me so much?
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Michael: heck yeah!
Me: you guys ready to be severely injured? *coughHartcough*
Hart: hey!
Flick: hey, chill! They send one of ours to the hospital, we send two of theirs to the morgue.
Hitomi: The Chicago Way.
Flick: DAMMIT!
Shades: Looks like you lose again, bro.