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Jan 19, 2011 07:14PM

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I'm not even sure why the action was harder. Maybe because i've never had to deal with that sort of sequence in real life?


Personally, when I write scenes involving the character having a mental breakdown or drastic change in mood/revelation, the words just pour out of me.
Then I look back and realise I need to re write the hell out of it, of course.
On the note of action scenes, mine always feel forced and awkward, so I tend to stay away if I can.
Writing realistic, important and interesting dialogue can be especially difficult though.

Personally, when I write scenes involving the character having a mental breakdown or drastic change in mood/revelation, the words just..."
Bensley56 there are some writing exercises online designed to help with action sequences and boosting your ability to write them. Try looking up "action writing practice exercise" and see what comes up. I hope that helps you. I know it allowed me to focus on them better.


Some of the best action scene writers keep it simple.
He raised his hand to slap her for the umpteenth time and she shot him. He bled all over the linoleum before he died.
The idea is not to milk it for all it's worth because then it won't be worth much.
It's action. Simple, to the point.
He took a fist to the jaw and levied a right hook to the temple that sent his attacker crashing to the floor.
The knife gleamed in the moonlight. He had her cornered. He never heard the shot from the derringer for the blow to the chest that knocked him down.
In all of the above examples, you know what happened, you know something about the characters, and you move on. Action is just that: action. Less wordiness is more.