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message 301: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Josh nodded. He wasn't all that into punk rock, but a couple of his friends were, so he had a playlist stocked full of it. And it was the perfect type of music to crash a dance with. He looked around to make sure nobody was watching and snuck over to the table with the speakers.


message 302: by [deleted user] (new)

Lav Lalie Fompledump (Lavendarlol) wrote: ""Techno, punk rock, or heavy metal?" he asked her, grinning."

((Sorry, but when I saw that I was like "I CAN'T DECIDE!"))


message 303: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((Hehe. I know, right?))


message 304: by [deleted user] (new)

((X]))


message 305: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) Holli stood in front of everyone looking over all the people. She hoped everyone forgot about yesterday, but she doubted that.


message 306: by Elliott (new)

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"Hey," Matt said, walking up to Holly. They had gotten the room mess straightened out the day before.


message 307: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) "Hi, Matt." Holli said. She picked up one the curls and started to play with it in btween her thumb and index finger. This dance needed to be better.


message 308: by Elliott (new)

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"I like your...hair," Matt said, with a shy smile.


message 309: by [deleted user] (new)

Gina made her way over to the edge of the deck and stared at the ocean.


message 310: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) "Oh, uhm, thanks. Does it look, you know, good?" Holli asked. She was starting to get worried. What if Matt thought she looked like a freak with hair? Was she just a big freak? She immediatly dropped the curl.


message 311: by Elliott (new)

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"Really good. I almost didn't know it was a... well, you know... a wig, except for that I saw you earlier," Matt stammered. What was it about her that got him all tongue tied? He wasn't normally one to trip over his words. Okay, well he was. But still.


message 312: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) "Its alright. I know what you mean." Holli smiled. "My hair use to be just like this... I would always straighten it though, because I wasn't into the whole curly hair thing. I miss it now, of course. I should have curled it when I had the chance." She was rambling, and she knew he actually wouldn't care at all. "Sorry. I'm chatty tonight."


message 313: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Good. Now I won't be the only one spouting off random nonsense most people don't care about," Matt laughed. "And yeah. I think it's pretty weird how girls with the awesomest curly hair just ruin it by straightening it. It's such a waste of time, in my opinion and it looks better curly most of the time."


message 314: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) "Haha, yeah." She looked down at her feet and then up again, smiling. "This party needs to get... cranked up." She laughed. Who says's 'cranked up' nowadays?


message 315: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"It's fine for me," Matt said. "I'm not much of a party kid..."
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Josh did one more quick check of the room and quickly switched the iPods out. The All-American Rejects, Move Along, started blasting across the deck.


message 316: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) "I am." Holli smirked and then she giggled. Soon All - American Rejects started playing. She loved Tyson Ritter. "C'mon Matt, let's go out and dance." She said.


message 317: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Dance?" Matt said, hesitating.


message 318: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) "Yeahhh... Why not?" Holli stopped in her tracks to the dancefloor.


message 319: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"I'm not really... allowed to dance," Matt admitted.

((MATT! You bad child. I thought you were going to be post-tornado Matt. Augh. Oh well.))


message 320: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) "Your not allowed... to dance?" Holli raised a eyebrow.

(Lol, post - tornado?)


message 321: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"We don't believe in dancing. Because of my religion," Matt told her.

((He has two personalities, one before the tornado in my story, and one after and I was trying to make him act like the second one... but he decided to be the first one and I just realized that and I can't change him now.))


message 322: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) "What's your religion?" Holli was asking to many questions but she didn't care. She was curious.

(OOOH. That sounds like a great story, just saying.)


message 323: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"I'm Josh," he said. "Wanna dance now that there's good music?" He didn't ask for her name.


message 324: by [deleted user] (new)

Gina almost wished the main deck was closer to the ocean's surface. She could feel a faint spray of it here, but it didn't do much. She wasn't used to weather this warm, especially at night.

Gina, she chided herself. Are you going to spend the night staring at dolphins or actually do something social like you promised mom?


message 325: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Megan wrote: ""What's your religion?" Holli was asking to many questions but she didn't care. She was curious.

(OOOH. That sounds like a great story, just saying.)"


"I'm Seventh-Day Adventist," Matt said, sort of happy for the direct question. He always loved witnessing to people, but ever since Henri had flipped out at him back at school he was trying to be less pushy about it. "I don't know if you've heard of it, but basically I'm a Christian."

((Thanks! I'm still developing it. I'm hoping to start it soon.))


message 326: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Poema (Elizabeth) wrote: ""Sure, Josh," Catie nodded. "Name's Catie, by the way.""

"Cool," Josh said, and took her hand.


message 327: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Josh started dancing with her. He wasn't a great dancer, but he wasn't awful either.


message 328: by [deleted user] (new)

Gina scanned the crowd, searching for boys with promising spirits. Most of the time, that would help her sort the good kids from the pervs. If Gina wanted a perv, she could just go back to high school.


message 329: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) "So, your basicially a Christian, and you can't dance because it's against your religion? Hhm. I've never heard of that one before." Holli said, she thought maybe he was just lying and didn't want to dance with her. But then again, if you were gonna lie it would have just been easier to say you were sick instead of going into your whole religion. She decided to believe him.


message 330: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Yeah. There's a big thing about how it leads to other things..." Matt said, not really wanting to get into it. "Sorry. I do want to dance with you. I mean, I don't, because I don't believe it's right... but I want to dance with you because... shutting up now." Matt blushed.
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"So where're you from, Catie?" Josh asked her as the moved in time to the music.


message 331: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"New England," Josh told her.


message 332: by Elliott (new)

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"I've never been to Texas," Josh told Catie. "I think this cruise is probably one of the first times I've been away from my hometown."


message 333: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) Holli smiled and looked at her feet. She started laughing at Matt and then spoke, "Your cute, Matt." She admitted.


message 334: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"That's not something I hear everyday," Matt grinned a little. "Well... it is, actually, but Henri's just a stalker. You're cool."


message 335: by [deleted user] (new)

Lav Lalie Fompledump (Lavendarlol) wrote: ""That's not something I hear everyday," Matt grinned a little. "Well... it is, actually, but Henri's just a stalker. You're cool.""

((HAHA! Henri's just a stalker... it's funny... hehe. Shutting up.))


message 336: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Josh laughed a little. "Do you travel a lot?"


message 337: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) "Henri?" Holli smiled at Matt.


message 338: by [deleted user] (new)

Gina tapped her fingers against the railing of the deck. Too many people...


message 339: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"This psycho chick at my school. She just started going there and I swear... well, if I wasn't a Christian and such a goody-two shoes, I would probably start yelling at her or something," Matt wasn't sure why he was saying all this to Holli. But she was just really easy to talk to.


message 340: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Maxy wrote: "Lav Lalie Fompledump (Lavendarlol) wrote: ""That's not something I hear everyday," Matt grinned a little. "Well... it is, actually, but Henri's just a stalker. You're cool.""

((HAHA! Henri's just ..."


((*grins*))


message 341: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Poema (Elizabeth) wrote: "Catie bit her lip. "Not especially. Only when I visit my dad.""

"Where does he live?"


message 342: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Wow," Josh raised his eyebrows, but didn't really pretend to be all that interested, because he... wasn't.


message 343: by [deleted user] (new)

((More men! We need more men!))


message 344: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((We do. I think I'll make Ryan tomorrow, when I have time. :D I love Ryan.))


message 345: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) Lav Lalie Fompledump (Lavendarlol) wrote: ""This psycho chick at my school. She just started going there and I swear... well, if I wasn't a Christian and such a goody-two shoes, I would probably start yelling at her or something," Matt wasn..."

"Sounds like someone I knoww..." Jenner came to Holli's mind immediatly.


message 346: by [deleted user] (new)

Lav Lalie Fompledump (Lavendarlol) wrote: "((We do. I think I'll make Ryan tomorrow, when I have time. :D I love Ryan.))"

((Gina would like Ryan. I can just tell.))


message 347: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Megan wrote: "Lav Lalie Fompledump (Lavendarlol) wrote: ""This psycho chick at my school. She just started going there and I swear... well, if I wasn't a Christian and such a goody-two shoes, I would probably st..."

"Some people," Matt shook his head, and laughed.


message 348: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Maxy wrote: "Lav Lalie Fompledump (Lavendarlol) wrote: "((We do. I think I'll make Ryan tomorrow, when I have time. :D I love Ryan.))"

((Gina would like Ryan. I can just tell.))"


((And Ryan would like Gina. ;))


message 349: by [deleted user] (new)

Lav Lalie Fompledump (Lavendarlol) wrote: "Maxy wrote: "Lav Lalie Fompledump (Lavendarlol) wrote: "((We do. I think I'll make Ryan tomorrow, when I have time. :D I love Ryan.))"

((Gina would like Ryan. I can just tell.))"

((And Ryan would..."


((Yay. Heehee.))


message 350: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) It all came back. Going through Holli's mind. Everything. What all happened with Jenner. What all happened during the August & September. How he hurt her so much. How he destroyed her heart and used her. And then finally when she was getting over him, finally when she was moving on, he would follow her and pretend to care. When she knew the truth... He just didn't want her to meet someone else.

He was the biggest mistake of her life.

Holli sighed. And looked at Matt. She was really starting to like Matt, but she knew that if Jenner found out, he would get back into her head faster then you can say shazam.

Holli realized she was spacing on her conversation with Matt. "Sorry, I was zoning out."


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