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message 651: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments "Josh...someone got caught." Marie said.


message 652: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"What're they going to do to her? Eat her?" Josh rolled his eyes.


message 653: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Marie didn't reply.


message 654: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Josh shrugged.


message 655: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((LAV. GO READ THIS NOW! http://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/3...))


message 656: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Marie bit her lip.


message 657: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((D'AWW! MEMORIES.))


message 658: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((IKR? "He's melting! MELTING!"))


message 659: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Shouldn't you be in bed?" the woman glared at her.


message 660: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments "They aren't saying anything." Marie tried to read their minds again. Her brow twisted in concentration.


message 661: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((I have go goooooo. Noooooo. I'll talk to you later. Love you Mandy!))

"Well obviously you couldn't hear them from back here," Josh pointed out.


message 662: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((Ahh, man. Okay. Bye!))

Marie grumbled. "Gr. I'm having trouble reading--yeah. Grr."


message 663: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Mandy Just Mandy wrote: "((LAV. GO READ THIS NOW! http://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/3...))"

((I just laughed so hard that I scared my sister. :P Epic times, those were!))


message 664: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Kenny *What's in a Name?* wrote: "Mandy Just Mandy wrote: "((LAV. GO READ THIS NOW! http://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/3...))"

((I just laughed so hard that I scared my sister. :P Epic times..."


((XD AWESOME. Those so were. KENNYKINS!))


message 665: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Poema (Elizabeth) wrote: "Catie froze. "Must have sleepwalked." Catie decided to say, "And, that how I lost my dad's picture which I really needed! Because, I never see him again because, my parents are divorced." She babbled."

"I don't care about your parents. Just... run along to bed," the woman said, dimissing her with a flick of the wrist. We'll need to keep an eye on this one.


message 666: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Mandy Just Mandy wrote: "((Ahh, man. Okay. Bye!))

Marie grumbled. "Gr. I'm having trouble reading--yeah. Grr.""


"You're so weird," Josh gave her a look.


message 667: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Lav [we'll make it after all] wrote: "Mandy Just Mandy wrote: "((Ahh, man. Okay. Bye!))

Marie grumbled. "Gr. I'm having trouble reading--yeah. Grr.""

"You're so weird," Josh gave her a look."


"Thank you." Marie didn't even bother throwing back an insult.


message 668: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
He rolled his eyes.


message 669: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments "This is wasting our time. Plus I'm getting angry at them." Why can't I break through easily?!


message 670: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Sounds like a personal problem to me," Josh said and took a couple steps closer.


message 671: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments "Fine. I'm personally angry at them." Marie made an angry face. "They irk me."


message 672: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Judging people before you meet them, eh?"


message 673: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Marie looked at him. "Is that anything new? If you haven't noticed, I am sorta judgmental. It's because so many people are how I think they are, so I don't usually take the time to find out for sure."


message 674: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"That's a lovely outlook on life," Josh raised his eyebrows.


message 675: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments "I haven't had a lovely life. Why do I need a lovely outlook?"


message 676: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Because..." Josh started to say when he suddenly pressed up against the wall and put a finger to his lips.

"Now that that girl is out of the way," the woman said, "let's get to work." Her partner just grunted and the woman fumbled with a chair sitting on the deck. The ground slowly opened to reveal a passage way.


message 677: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((Dun dun dun!))

Marie tried to quiet her breathing without holding her breath, because at some point, she'd have to breath and then she'd sound like a vaccuum cleaner. She watched tentatively.


message 678: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((*laughs* That post was hilarious. I love you.))

Josh gaped openly. They disappeared down the passageway and then it closed and the dock was empty.


message 679: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((*bows* =D))

Marie looked at Josh. "I'm not going to lie, that was pretty much the most awesome thing ever." She stepped out from the hiding place and walked over to where the passageway closed.


message 680: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((*coughsawkwardly, but only if Lav is in the mood*))


message 681: by Elliott (last edited Mar 25, 2011 06:01PM) (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((I'm back! So sorry. I got all distracted in the whole religion thing and then had to go eat. Heh.))

Josh walked over to it as well and stood next to it for a second before getting right on top of it and jumping. It held firm.


message 682: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Mandy Just Mandy wrote: "Kenny *What's in a Name?* wrote: "Mandy Just Mandy wrote: "((LAV. GO READ THIS NOW! http://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/3...))"

((I just laughed so hard that I..."


((Hiya Mandy-dahlink. I've been trying to figure out how to try to get into this. Again.))


message 683: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Kenny *What's in a Name?* wrote: "Mandy Just Mandy wrote: "Kenny *What's in a Name?* wrote: "Mandy Just Mandy wrote: "((LAV. GO READ THIS NOW! http://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/3...))"

((I ju..."


((Haha. Umm...hmm....))


message 684: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Lav [we'll make it after all] wrote: "((I'm back! So sorry. I got all distracted in the whole religion thing and then had to go eat. Heh.))

Josh walked over to it as well and stood next to it for a second before getting right on top ..."


"She messed with the chair. Maybe there's a lever or..." Marie shrugged.


message 685: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((Hmm. Kenny. There's a whole evil plot going on with these secret passageways. I'm winging it, but you could definitely get in on it.))


message 686: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Well, do you want to try it?" Josh asked Marie.


message 687: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments Lav [we'll make it after all] wrote: "((Hmm. Kenny. There's a whole evil plot going on with these secret passageways. I'm winging it, but you could definitely get in on it.))"

((Mkay. Any ideas how my character could just suddenly appear? Or where.))


message 688: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((They're on a boat and it's midnight right now... curfew for anyone under 18. Josh and Marie are on the main deck by a folding chair that goes to the passageways. There are people in them... I have no clue what's down there. So your character could find Josh and Marie trying to break into the passageway, or something of the sort.))


message 689: by Ky (new)

Ky (poeticshark) | 10786 comments ((mkay. I'll whip up a post later when the kids I'm about to babysit have gone to bed. :D ))


message 690: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((Sounds good! I may or may not be here. But I shall try! Oh, aren't you such a good babysitter. ;))


message 691: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments "Yes, I'll try and succeed. Just watch and learn, kiddo." Marie said. She walked over to the chair and fiddled with it, playing with a screw. A few seconds later, the passage door slid open. She stood up, smugly and grinned. "What."


message 692: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Josh turned around to fake glare at her when suddenly he tripped and almost fell into the hole.


message 693: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Marie reached out instinctively and caught his arm. She almost wanted to drop him again, but decided that'd be too mean. "Nice move."


message 694: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Har har har," Josh said, blushing a little bit.


message 695: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Marie snickered and jumped down in the hole. "Come on, then." Her voice floated up.


message 696: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"But it's dark in there..."


message 697: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Her head popped up. "You're kidding, right?"


message 698: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Yeah," Josh said, but he didn't make a move to step down into the passageway.


message 699: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments She sighed and grabbed his hand, yanking him down into the passageway. She began walking down into the stuffy blackness, still holding his hand. A small light flickered in the distance.


message 700: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
This is really freaky. I'm going to die. There's going to be a freakish monster that comes and eats us and we're both going to die. The walls are going to close in on us and we'll get crushed. Josh thought.


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