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message 601: by Maddie (new)

Maddie  | 254 comments Good job stupid. Lia thought to herself.


message 602: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Marie had been stunned for a moment. Then she exploded. "WHAT? HIM? Nonononono. No way!"


message 603: by Maddie (new)

Maddie  | 254 comments Lia smiled, "Okay.."


message 604: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Yeah, that's just awkward. And weird. And impossible," Josh continued.


message 605: by Maddie (new)

Maddie  | 254 comments Lia nodded her head slowly.


message 606: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments "Oh, lookatthesea. Isn'titpretty?" Marie changed the subject.


message 607: by Maddie (new)

Maddie  | 254 comments "Very." Lia agreed.


message 608: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Pretty like your face!" Josh said and then blushed. That's not how that was supposed to come out.


message 609: by Maddie (new)

Maddie  | 254 comments Lia faced Josh, "Who did you just say that too?" Her tone was rougher than it was meant to be.


message 610: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments "Josh, do you realize you just tried to do a your face joke that ended up being a compliment? I'm altogether astounded that you managed that. Smooth."


message 611: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Um. Both of you. Yes," Josh mumbled. "And yes. I realize that. I'm just awesome like that."


message 612: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments "Moving on."


message 613: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"What if I don't want to move on?" Josh countered. He paused. "Okay, yeah. I want to move on."


message 614: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Marie smiled. "That's what I thought."


message 615: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"I'm surprised a good child like you is even out... past curfew."


message 616: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments "Goo-good child?" Marie choked.


message 617: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"That's the impression you give off..." Josh said, raising his eyebrows.


message 618: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments "Then I have failed miserably." Marie looked slightly put-off. "Good? Good?" She repeated, as if she hadn't heard him right.


message 619: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Or not...?"


message 620: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments "Wait, now you've confused me. It's just, I'm normally not a bad "child" as you eloquently put it, but I'm not usually a good one."


message 621: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"That makes a ton more sense," Josh said sarcastically.


message 622: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments "Heh heh...." Marie yawned.


message 623: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"See?" Josh smirked. "You're tired."


message 624: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments "Noooo." Marie tried to close the yawn.


message 625: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Now who's the liar?" Josh said standing up and walking over to the railing on the boat.


message 626: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments "Touche." Marie stayed where she was at on the chair.


message 627: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Do you ever wonder how the boat stays afloat?" Josh asked. He watched the waves hit the sides of the large ship in fascination.


message 628: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Marie smiled and shrugged. "I've never wondered, but come to think of it, I wonder."


message 629: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"You'd think it would just sink. Like a rock. And then we'd all die."


message 630: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments "...That's deep, man. Real deep."


message 631: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Why, thank you," Josh bowed.


message 632: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Marie smiled. There was more to this guy then meets the eye. However, what met the eye wasn't too bad either. She grinned to herself.


message 633: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Josh kept gazing out over the water quietly, thinking about a lot of things. Caitlin would've loved this. He sighed and then looked up suddenly. He thought he heard a tapping sound. Footsteps?


message 634: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments "Who's Caitlin?" Marie asked curiously before she could think. She didn't hear the noise.


message 635: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Caitlin?" Josh said, wrinkling his nose and scrunching his eyebrows together. How could she possibly know about Caitlin? Nobody knew Josh used to have a sister.


message 636: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments "Um...Caitlin?" Marie pretended she hadn't said anything.


message 637: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Josh scrunched his face up harder. "You're the one who asked who Caitlin was..." he said slowly. "Right?"


message 638: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments "Umm....hey, I'm hungry. You hungry?"


message 639: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Seeing as it's past curfew and none of the restraunts would be open right now..." Josh started to say in a mocking tone when voices could be heard coming down the hall.

"Nobody can find out about this, do you understand?" a woman's husky voice said.

"Get down," Josh whispered and hid behind a decorative plant that was on deck. He paused for a second to wonder why there was a decorative plant on the deck of a cruise ship, but then focused his attention back on the woman and her partner who were getting closer as they talked.


message 640: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((OOOOOH. DRAMA. YES!))

Marie ducked down with him, eyes wide with surprise. Why hadn't she sensed their thoughts? She began trying to read them all, but couldn't break through. "What?" She whispered to herself. JOSH. They aren't normal. We've got to get out of here.


message 641: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"How?" Josh hissed, too worried to realize that Marie hadn't spoken to him out loud. "In case you haven't noticed, the door is on the other side of the room and all that's between it and us is them and a bunch of open space."


message 642: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Marie also sensed someone else's thoughts. Someone named Catie. She didn't think about that though. "When I say go..." LOOK OVER THERE! She sent the message through to the talking couple. It took a little work getting in, but the force opened their minds to her. Now. Run! Marie grabbed Josh and ran across the deck when the couple was turned away.


message 643: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Josh ran with Marie as fast as he could but once they had made it through the door safely Josh hesisitated.


message 644: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Poema (Elizabeth) wrote: "((Wait. Did Marie send the first thought to Catie or to Josh?))"

((Sorry. Um. To the two people that everyone is hiding from.))

"What are you doing? Come on!"


message 645: by Elliott (last edited Mar 25, 2011 01:23PM) (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Don't you want to hear what they're saying?" Josh watched them walk farther away wistfully.


message 646: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments "Yeah, kinda. But do you really want to get caught?" I don't have enough of a connection to read them unless I'm closer...hmm...


message 647: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"I never get caught," Josh scoffed. "Except on Tuesdays. Is today Tuesday?"


message 648: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Lav [we'll make it after all] wrote: ""I never get caught," Josh scoffed. "Except on Tuesdays. Is today Tuesday?""

"Is this really the moment?" Marie sighed. "Come on. Let's go eavesdrop."


message 649: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Yes!" Josh whisper-shouted and did a mini fistpump and started walking quietly along the wall.


message 650: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"What are you doing here?" the woman suddenly whirled around fixing her gaze on a young blonde girl hiding behind a plant. "And don't think I can't see you."


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