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message 501: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) "Should we be worried?"


message 502: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Probably," Matt said, his hands fidgeting. "We could be sinking or... something bad..."


message 503: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Lav Lalie Fompledump (Lavendarlol) wrote: ""Gross," Josh whispered, but inside he was cheering. He kept doing the chest compressions to help her get the water out."

Marie gurgled and moaned through coughs. She threw up the remains of her lunch too. Her eyes opened a few seconds later. "Gugugu."


message 504: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) Lav Lalie Fompledump (Lavendarlol) wrote: ""Probably," Matt said, his hands fidgeting. "We could be sinking or... something bad...""

"WHAT?!" Holli started to freak out. SINKING! She thought. OMG.


message 505: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Josh winced. "Marie?"
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"This isn't good," Matt said, drumming his fingers on his pocket. "This isn't good. I missed the safety briefing. What are we supposed to do?"


message 506: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) "I have no idea. I never pay attention to this kind of stuff. Maybe its something else. Maybe its all ok."


message 507: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"I guess we could ask," Matt said, turning to the Subway worker who didn't seem overly concerned anyways.


message 508: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments i miss who i was when (Lavendarlol) wrote: "Josh winced. "Marie?"
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"This isn't good," Matt said, drumming his fingers on his pocket. "This isn't good. I missed the safety briefing. What are we supposed to do?""


Marie made a strangled noise trying to speak, but she gave up and thought spoke. What happened? I don't feel good at allll..... She laid on the deck, face pale. She took deep breaths. In. Out. Breath In. Breath Out. Breath Marie. Her breathing eventually steadied.


message 509: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Is the doctor on his way?" Josh directed towards the crowd.


message 510: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Some of the people nodded and made way as a doctor, with two assistants holding a gurney, came through.

((What should they do? I have no idea what to do when someone almost drowned....))


message 511: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) "Alright." Holli listened to Mark ask.


message 512: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Mandy Fompledump wrote: "Some of the people nodded and made way as a doctor, with two assistants holding a gurney, came through.

((What should they do? I have no idea what to do when someone almost drowned....))"


((How about they just check her out and decide she's fine, but needs to rest?))


message 513: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments i miss who i was when (Lavendarlol) wrote: "Mandy Fompledump wrote: "Some of the people nodded and made way as a doctor, with two assistants holding a gurney, came through.

((What should they do? I have no idea what to do when someone almos..."


((Sounds good.))

The doctor made sure she was okay, and concluded that she just need rest for a day or two.

They began to help her up to bring her to her cabin. She still wasn't sure what had just happened.

((I'm so creative.))


message 514: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((Bahaha.))

Josh was a creeper and followed her to her cabin.

((Me too.))


message 515: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((HAHAHAHA.))

Marie was put into bed, and after being fussed over by a pale Mrs. Jack, was handed a cup of peppermint herbal tea. She sipped it slowly. Mrs. Jack fixed her attention on Josh. "Are you the young man who was chasing my daughter all over to fast food restaurants yesterday--"
"MOM." Marie would have blushed, but she didn't seem to have the energy. She breathed heavily. "Josh just saved my life."


message 516: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Josh stood outside her door for a second after she went in. He wasn't sure what he'd say. Hey! I just saved your life. Now you have to be nice to me. or maybe Hey. Your lips are nice. Want to try it again? That just sounded creepy, even if it was something he'd say in a normal circumstance. He sighed.


message 517: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((*cracks up*))

Marie sipped her tea more, thinking about what had just happened. She wondered if things would be awkward now.


message 518: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
He couldn't bring himself to knock. Not before he knew what to say. So he just stood outside, running through all the possible things he could say in his mind. Finally he just gave up and knocked softly. Maybe she wouldn't hear him.


message 519: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Marie hesitated, then said, "Come in."

Mrs. Jack began washing dishes.


message 520: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Hey," Josh said after he opened the door. It was the best he could come up with after all his deliberation.


message 521: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments "Hi." Marie wished she had something more to say. She paused. "Thanks. A lot. A lot lot. That was..." Her voice cracked and trailed off.


message 522: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Josh shrugged. "Not a big deal."


message 523: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Marie shook her head. "You need to stop with the lying. It. Was. Huge. You're a freakin hero. And I need to...apologize."


message 524: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"For what?" Josh tilted his head. "It's not like you were trying to drown or anything."


message 525: by Mandy (last edited Feb 04, 2011 08:15PM) (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments "No. For earlier." Marie wasn't used to making apologies, so this was new to her. It didn't help that when he tilted his head like that, he look undeniable adorable. "I-I'm sorry." She stared at him, as if willing him to understand that she was truly sorry. "I. Was. A. Jerkface."


message 526: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Josh grinned. "Yeah, you kind of were, weren't you?"


message 527: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments "A-huh." She nodded and coughed. She sipped her tea again.


message 528: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((Okay. I'll be going to bed soon, probably. Love you!))

"I'll... probably forgive you."


message 529: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((Okay, love you too!))

"I hope so."


message 530: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) Megan wrote: ""Alright." Holli listened to Mark ask."

"Are you going to ask, Mark?"


message 531: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((A month and a day ago since this was last posted on? Daaang. DEATH. It died.))


message 532: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((I WILL REVIVE IT.))


message 533: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Oh, I know you hope so," Josh grinned and then he walked away.
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"What's going on?" Mark asked in a worried voice.


message 534: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((*le gasp* LAV. LAV. IT'S YOUUUU. In a roleplay, nontheless. O.o))


message 535: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Marie hid a smile and situated herself in her blankets. "Bye." She whispered, even though he was probably out of hearing.


message 536: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((IT IS! IT IS!))

"There is no freaking way I'm crushing on her," Josh muttered to himself as he walked down the narrow hallway. "I don't crush on girls. I hit on them and then leave."


message 537: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((YAY.))

Marie fell asleep. Mrs. Jack cleaned the apartment.


message 538: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((Sorry, my creativity is sorta deadened. =P))


message 539: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((It's okay. I completely understand.))

Josh went and sat on the deck in a folding chair watching the lights on the shore grow farther and farther away.


message 540: by Mandy (last edited Mar 24, 2011 10:46AM) (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((I WILL ALIVEN IT. Somehow. =P))

Marie woke up...a few hours later. She began to sit up.

"Nu-uh!" Mrs. Jack gently pushed her back down. "More rest."

"But--"

"No buts. For another day at least."

Marie moaned. "But I'm so rejuvenated and everything happy. I'm ready to get up!"

"No." Mrs. Jack closed the conversation and left the room.

A few minutes later, Marie softly got up and tiptoed to the window looking out at the sea, but leading down to the deck. She opened it. Squeeeeek! Gritting her teeth, she jumped as quietly as possible down to the deck with a full thunk. Mrs. Jack still didn't hear her.


message 541: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Josh had fallen asleep in the chair and was completely oblivious to the 12 o'clock curfew for anyone on the ship under the age of 18.


message 542: by Maddie (new)

Maddie  | 254 comments ((Is there a way I can jump in??))


message 543: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((Sure! Right now all the people are on a cruise, so just post your character in the character topic and jump right in. It's night time... right now my character Josh is on a deck outside, Marie just snuck out of her room, my character Ryan is in the TV Room and Matt is sleeping.))


message 544: by Maddie (new)

Maddie  | 254 comments ((Okay!! I will use Ophilia from my story about the girl who lives in a perfect world, blind from her abuse... haha))


message 545: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((Awesome!))


message 546: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Marie checked her watch. It was a few minutes to midnight. "Crap." She muttered. She shouldn't have taken such a long nap. She wasn't even tired! She tiptoed down the corridor.


message 547: by Maddie (new)

Maddie  | 254 comments Lia stood silent covered in darkness on the cruise boat. She pulled a black blanket around her arms and walked to the rail of the ship and watched the land drift from sight.


message 548: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Josh started snoring quietly.


message 549: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Marie was almost to the deck. She thought she heard rustling and snoring.


message 550: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Josh muttered, "Go away, Panda. Stop it," in his sleep. He was having an odd dream.


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