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message 451: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Matt took the map from her, without asking and shook his head. "It's this way," he pointed in the opposite direction. "You're flipped around," he said showing her the deck sign a few yards away.


message 452: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Marie noticed Anna's attention had been diverted elsewhere. "It was nice meeting you," She said. She turned to Josh. "I'm going to go get changed, I'll be back in ten. Kay?"


message 453: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) Lav Lalie Fompledump (Lavendarlol) wrote: "Matt took the map from her, without asking and shook his head. "It's this way," he pointed in the opposite direction. "You're flipped around," he said showing her the deck sign a few yards away."

"Haha, oooh!" She laughed and they turned and started walking. They finally got at Subway and stood in line. "What are you gonna get?"


message 454: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Mandy Fompledump wrote: "Marie noticed Anna's attention had been diverted elsewhere. "It was nice meeting you," She said. She turned to Josh. "I'm going to go get changed, I'll be back in ten. Kay?""

"I'll just be here. Waiting. All alone," Josh sighed. With tons of other pretty girls.


message 455: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Megan wrote: "Lav Lalie Fompledump (Lavendarlol) wrote: "Matt took the map from her, without asking and shook his head. "It's this way," he pointed in the opposite direction. "You're flipped around," he said sho..."

"Just a veggie sandwich," Matt told her, a little embarrassed. He was a vegetarian.


message 456: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Lav Lalie Fompledump (Lavendarlol) wrote: "Mandy Fompledump wrote: "Marie noticed Anna's attention had been diverted elsewhere. "It was nice meeting you," She said. She turned to Josh. "I'm going to go get changed, I'll be back in ten. Kay?..."

Ahahahaha. All alone. Riiight. Have fun with the ladies, Joshyboy. She thought to him. Then walked away.


message 457: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"What the..." Josh jerked his head to where Marie had been standing, but Marie was already gone.


message 458: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Marie grinned to herself as she returned to her room and cleaned up. She felt great, playing with his mind.


message 459: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Josh still hadn't moved. He was sort of... creeped out.


message 460: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Marie changed into a swimsuit, because she wanted to go swimming after she got rid of Josh nicely. She pulled jeans and a hoodie on over the top. Then she narrowed her eyes. She didn't do things nicely to people she didn't care about. She didn't even have to go back to Josh. She could just leave and go swimming. She walked into the hall.


message 461: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
He shrugged and started dancing with some random girl. She was cute... but he couldn't stop thinking about Marie.


message 462: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
He shrugged and started dancing with some random girl. She was cute... but he couldn't stop thinking about Marie.


message 463: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Marie pulled out a map that she'd kept with her ever since she'd gotten lost the million times. The pool was on the other side of the ship. Right next to where the dance was. She'd have to avoid Josh. "Stealth Marie. You are stealthy!" She chuckled quietly and began her journey back.


message 464: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Josh smiled at the girl he was dancing with.


message 465: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Marie was back and the dance and spotted Josh dancing with another girl. She shrugged and darted behind a plotted plant and began walking backwards to the pool, along the fence that overlooked the sea.


message 466: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Josh didn't see her.


message 467: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Marie continued along the edge of the fence/wall. The air was suddenly knocked out of her by a someone or something slamming into her and she was thrown up and backward. She toppled over the edge, her head hit a protruding object on the cruise ship, and darkness crowded her vision.


Spazzy Maz Brit [the insane one] (cally215) I think I'm gonna drop out of this one, guys. Can't find a purpose for Briony to be there...><))


Spazzy Maz Brit [the insane one] (cally215) wellz, I've tried to get her involved but I don't feel like going back and reading everything I missed, track a person down, and then have it die off ><))


message 471: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((D'aww! Yeah, it's hard to get in the hang of it... but once you get into it, I'm sure it won't be as hard. If you decide to stay.))


message 472: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Mandy Fompledump wrote: "Marie continued along the edge of the fence/wall. The air was suddenly knocked out of her by a someone or something slamming into her and she was thrown up and backward. She toppled over the edge, ..."

Josh heard a crashing sound. He glanced around.


message 473: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Marie's still body hit the water with a loud splash.


message 474: by Elliott (last edited Jan 26, 2011 03:56PM) (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
He also heard a splashing sound. Did somebody just fall off the boat?


message 475: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) "Veggie Sandwich. Sounds good. I think I'm gonna go with the Pizza Sub. It'll probably get my dress all messed up though." Holli hoped she didn't sound like a slob.


message 476: by Elliott (new)

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"That's what napkins are for," Matt said.


message 477: by Mandy (last edited Jan 26, 2011 03:54PM) (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Someone yelled loudly. "SOMEONE FELL OVERBOARD." And pointed down below.


message 478: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Josh gasped, and ran over to railing.


message 479: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Marie floated in the water, unmoving and face down.


message 480: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Oh my gosh. Marie?" Josh said, gripping the railing.


message 481: by Mandy (last edited Jan 26, 2011 04:02PM) (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments A life tube thing was tossed down, and the DJ dived into the water a few feet away from where she was. Someone yelled that a lifeguard was on his way.


message 482: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((Soap opera, FTW))


message 483: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Josh just stood watching. Trying not to panic.

((Oh yeah. XD))


message 484: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((I love how I decided that a random DJ was going to jump in. XD))

The DJ dude hoisted Marie's still form through the tube, and people began to pull her up.


message 485: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((I must go write! Roleplay more later?))

Josh tried to breathe. She was going to be okay. She was. She had to be.


message 486: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((If I'm on. Yes! See you later.))

"Anyone know CPR?" The DJ shouted to the crowd. He was just a DJ. He never learned that. Marie was lying on the deck and people huddled around her, staring. No one was taking action. "Help is coming!" said the same random bystander that had been yelling everything the last couple minutes.


message 487: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"I know CPR," Josh said sort of quietly. And he did. He had learned in Boy Scouts.


message 488: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments The DJ backed away. "Everyone give the kid some room!"


message 489: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Josh felt sort of... awkward. I mean... it wasn't like he was kissing her. But his mouth would be on her mouth... but he couldn't let her die. He couldn't be responsible for yet another person's death. So he walked towards her.


message 490: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Marie was still unconscious, her body bruised and battered from her hit in the water and on the boat.


message 491: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) Lav Lalie Fompledump (Lavendarlol) wrote: ""That's what napkins are for," Matt said."

"Hahah, yes." She smiled at him and fixed her dress some, waiting in line.


message 492: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Josh kneeled down next to her and pressed down on her stomach and chest, trying not to feel like he was completely violating her. Maybe she would start breathing again without the actual mouth part. Sometimes chest compressions alone worked.
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"Did you hear that?" Matt said, suddenly. "It sounded like an alarm."


message 493: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments Marie's stomach went up and down with the compressions, but she didn't draw breath for several seconds. A small sound of air and gurgling water escaped her lips, but she wasn't breathing. Her airway was blocked with water.


message 494: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"It's not working," Josh muttered to himself. He frowned and bent down even closer, his lips hovering next to hers.


message 495: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((I don't know what to make Marie do...she can't do anything. She's unconscious! XD))

Marie....was still unconscious.


message 496: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
((*laughs*))
He parted her lips and touched them gently with his, making a funnel with his hands so the air wouldn't escape.


message 497: by Mandy (new)

Mandy  Harmon (mandyharmon) | 10724 comments ((Heh heh.))

It was a couple minutes before Marie started breathing, just a little, on her own. Her head jerked to the side and she began coughing and gagging and throwing up water all over the deck.


message 498: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"Gross," Josh whispered, but inside he was cheering. He kept doing the chest compressions to help her get the water out.


message 499: by Megan (new)

Megan (itsmegan) "No, I don't think so." Holli said. The noise went off again. "Waaait, what is that?"


message 500: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
"I think it's... one of the emergency horns," Matt said, scanning his brain for the sounds they had showed during the safety briefing.


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