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Marie noticed Anna's attention had been diverted elsewhere. "It was nice meeting you," She said. She turned to Josh. "I'm going to go get changed, I'll be back in ten. Kay?"
Lav Lalie Fompledump (Lavendarlol) wrote: "Matt took the map from her, without asking and shook his head. "It's this way," he pointed in the opposite direction. "You're flipped around," he said showing her the deck sign a few yards away.""Haha, oooh!" She laughed and they turned and started walking. They finally got at Subway and stood in line. "What are you gonna get?"
Mandy Fompledump wrote: "Marie noticed Anna's attention had been diverted elsewhere. "It was nice meeting you," She said. She turned to Josh. "I'm going to go get changed, I'll be back in ten. Kay?""
"I'll just be here. Waiting. All alone," Josh sighed. With tons of other pretty girls.
"I'll just be here. Waiting. All alone," Josh sighed. With tons of other pretty girls.
Megan wrote: "Lav Lalie Fompledump (Lavendarlol) wrote: "Matt took the map from her, without asking and shook his head. "It's this way," he pointed in the opposite direction. "You're flipped around," he said sho..."
"Just a veggie sandwich," Matt told her, a little embarrassed. He was a vegetarian.
"Just a veggie sandwich," Matt told her, a little embarrassed. He was a vegetarian.
Lav Lalie Fompledump (Lavendarlol) wrote: "Mandy Fompledump wrote: "Marie noticed Anna's attention had been diverted elsewhere. "It was nice meeting you," She said. She turned to Josh. "I'm going to go get changed, I'll be back in ten. Kay?..."Ahahahaha. All alone. Riiight. Have fun with the ladies, Joshyboy. She thought to him. Then walked away.
"What the..." Josh jerked his head to where Marie had been standing, but Marie was already gone.
Marie grinned to herself as she returned to her room and cleaned up. She felt great, playing with his mind.
Marie changed into a swimsuit, because she wanted to go swimming after she got rid of Josh nicely. She pulled jeans and a hoodie on over the top. Then she narrowed her eyes. She didn't do things nicely to people she didn't care about. She didn't even have to go back to Josh. She could just leave and go swimming. She walked into the hall.
He shrugged and started dancing with some random girl. She was cute... but he couldn't stop thinking about Marie.
He shrugged and started dancing with some random girl. She was cute... but he couldn't stop thinking about Marie.
Marie pulled out a map that she'd kept with her ever since she'd gotten lost the million times. The pool was on the other side of the ship. Right next to where the dance was. She'd have to avoid Josh. "Stealth Marie. You are stealthy!" She chuckled quietly and began her journey back.
Marie was back and the dance and spotted Josh dancing with another girl. She shrugged and darted behind a plotted plant and began walking backwards to the pool, along the fence that overlooked the sea.
Marie continued along the edge of the fence/wall. The air was suddenly knocked out of her by a someone or something slamming into her and she was thrown up and backward. She toppled over the edge, her head hit a protruding object on the cruise ship, and darkness crowded her vision.
wellz, I've tried to get her involved but I don't feel like going back and reading everything I missed, track a person down, and then have it die off ><))
((D'aww! Yeah, it's hard to get in the hang of it... but once you get into it, I'm sure it won't be as hard. If you decide to stay.))
Mandy Fompledump wrote: "Marie continued along the edge of the fence/wall. The air was suddenly knocked out of her by a someone or something slamming into her and she was thrown up and backward. She toppled over the edge, ..."
Josh heard a crashing sound. He glanced around.
Josh heard a crashing sound. He glanced around.
"Veggie Sandwich. Sounds good. I think I'm gonna go with the Pizza Sub. It'll probably get my dress all messed up though." Holli hoped she didn't sound like a slob.
A life tube thing was tossed down, and the DJ dived into the water a few feet away from where she was. Someone yelled that a lifeguard was on his way.
((I love how I decided that a random DJ was going to jump in. XD))The DJ dude hoisted Marie's still form through the tube, and people began to pull her up.
((I must go write! Roleplay more later?))
Josh tried to breathe. She was going to be okay. She was. She had to be.
Josh tried to breathe. She was going to be okay. She was. She had to be.
((If I'm on. Yes! See you later.))"Anyone know CPR?" The DJ shouted to the crowd. He was just a DJ. He never learned that. Marie was lying on the deck and people huddled around her, staring. No one was taking action. "Help is coming!" said the same random bystander that had been yelling everything the last couple minutes.
Josh felt sort of... awkward. I mean... it wasn't like he was kissing her. But his mouth would be on her mouth... but he couldn't let her die. He couldn't be responsible for yet another person's death. So he walked towards her.
Marie was still unconscious, her body bruised and battered from her hit in the water and on the boat.
Lav Lalie Fompledump (Lavendarlol) wrote: ""That's what napkins are for," Matt said.""Hahah, yes." She smiled at him and fixed her dress some, waiting in line.
Josh kneeled down next to her and pressed down on her stomach and chest, trying not to feel like he was completely violating her. Maybe she would start breathing again without the actual mouth part. Sometimes chest compressions alone worked.
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"Did you hear that?" Matt said, suddenly. "It sounded like an alarm."
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"Did you hear that?" Matt said, suddenly. "It sounded like an alarm."
Marie's stomach went up and down with the compressions, but she didn't draw breath for several seconds. A small sound of air and gurgling water escaped her lips, but she wasn't breathing. Her airway was blocked with water.
"It's not working," Josh muttered to himself. He frowned and bent down even closer, his lips hovering next to hers.
((I don't know what to make Marie do...she can't do anything. She's unconscious! XD))Marie....was still unconscious.
((*laughs*))
He parted her lips and touched them gently with his, making a funnel with his hands so the air wouldn't escape.
He parted her lips and touched them gently with his, making a funnel with his hands so the air wouldn't escape.
((Heh heh.))It was a couple minutes before Marie started breathing, just a little, on her own. Her head jerked to the side and she began coughing and gagging and throwing up water all over the deck.
"Gross," Josh whispered, but inside he was cheering. He kept doing the chest compressions to help her get the water out.
"I think it's... one of the emergency horns," Matt said, scanning his brain for the sounds they had showed during the safety briefing.
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