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hmph. I don't like Internet Explorer that much, 'cause it's kinda slow. But Chrome has Incognito that my parents can't track me on, so they refuse to install it on the computer I use
I hate Explorer- it actually almost killed the computer I'm on, which is why this computer sucks so much. but I was using Firefox exclusively (except at school- darn computers only have Explorer) until Chrome came out and now i use both. They both have good parts and bad parts- and I actually have never used the incognito on chrome (that I'm using right now), i just haven't felt the need to try it.
Well I also don't need to use incognito. My parents trust me and I'm smart enough to not make any accounts without asking (besides my youtube account, but that's for making playlists and commenting so it doesn't matter much) and I just don't feel the need to. :)
i use only chrome. explorer and firefox are too slow... welcome back!!!!!!!
ya, um, now im gonna be gone for a week.... :D hehe.
dont run ahead of me too much either please!!!!!!
wow, this rp isnt going to move anywhere this summer :D
AAw thanks. :D I'll be gone a couple more days this week, but will be on as often as I can!
It's Summer Sia. Once it's August I'll be back for good. :D
It's Summer Sia. Once it's August I'll be back for good. :D
ok, can we please organaize somehow what about happens now? everyone is kinda just wandering aimlessly around...
ok, what needs to be done?-they need to free Brynn and Lyra.
-finn has to somehow become king
-dee has to get a new speech
-all the rebels have to find each other
-the rest of Bayern needs to know what happened
thats all i can think of for now. anything else?
Um and when things settle down in Bayern and Kel, Farren and Lei will take Revenge. Oh Sweet Sweet revenge. :D
Um, FYI. Lei Hates Brynn. So.... Yeah, expect danger Hannah.OH! Finn teaches Dee the speech, everyone watches, afterwards Brynn's all like "oh, be happy with Dee" and then he goes, "But I loved you all along!!!!!!!!!!" EEEP!! good?
Yeah, and umm......where's Elsa? At camp or what? I have no idea what all you guys did with camp.
Thank you for the warning Klymy. Lei vs. Brynn. EPIC.
KLYMY YOU ARE A GENIUS! Oooh, so maybe the others(not Finn) find Brynn and Lyra and get them out, and then they find Finn with Dee and then yeah, what you said. EEEP!
Um well Elsa would still be back at camp. Tal,Ner,Teva,and Nyree all are at the castle now cuz they left the camp to help. But maybe Elsa was somewhere else and didn't know they had gone?That's a way to fill in for her absence.
KLYMY YOU ARE A GENIUS! Oooh, so maybe the others(not Finn) find Brynn and Lyra and get them out, and then they find Finn with Dee and then yeah, what you said. EEEP!
Um well Elsa would still be back at camp. Tal,Ner,Teva,and Nyree all are at the castle now cuz they left the camp to help. But maybe Elsa was somewhere else and didn't know they had gone?That's a way to fill in for her absence.
Well, in Enna Burning, Isi explained to Enna how she'd started hearing the wind, and what it felt like.
yes, please do, if you can! my copy of enna burning is currently lent out to someone and i dont remember what happened!
At first, Isi tries to blow the fire out of enna, but then Fahil, that tatarook guy, decides that they can teach each other. So Enna explains how the fire feels and Isi explains how the wind feels and they hold each other's hands and talk about it, heads close together. Then finally they do their speeches at the same time and then its learned! The wind is silenced, and the fire is softened.
but finn doesnt need to learn a speech. how does that work? they can hardly do it at the same time. and is he even supposed to know how to do it?
isnt it a lost secret?
or maybe Finn learns fire too. but that would make him too powerful, wouldnt it?
Mmkay here is the stuff. :
Enna and Isi stood facing each other, alone on the paved center of the hilltop. The wind started. At first it was like an army of breezes Isi used to cool the fever, but it swelled so that it tore at Enna's own life heat around her body, pulling it loose and releasing it into the air.
(remember that Isi is giving into the wind)
Then it grew stronger. Her(enna) headscarf came loos and her hair whipped around her face. She began to feel a tearing pain. She opened her mouth to scream, but she could not breath, and the wind rushed into her throat and poured inside her, ripping through her cracked place, gushing through her body.
It was taking something away. She felt fear with the pain, afraid that she was losing all of herself. She could not open her eyes but she reached out and stumbled forwards, her hands fining Isi's. She gripped on to her friend, truing to anchor part of herself before the wind took it all.
Surrender.
She tried. But each time she began to release her carefully fuarded contro of the fired, pain burst from her chest. "If it leaves me, I will die." she thougt, and heald on tighter. Her musceles acjed and trembled, her chest gushed with heat. She fought and struggled, terrified of losing everything.
Enna became concsciou of Isi's hand trembling in hers. She let go and stumbled away and the wind stopped short like a head breath. Enna gasped to fill her lungs and sat on the ground.
(So basically Enna didni't surrender it didn't work. As Klymy says they decide to teach each other the opposite speech since they both already have one, so it wouldn't be to much to do.)
The began by talking low. Enna wanted Isi to know what ashe had learned from the vellum. She ecplained how heat was in the air, where i came from, how she felt it, plucked in, pulled it inside, and the now subconscious ggesture of turning the heat into flame inside her chest. Isi tried to explain how the wind felt when it touched her, what it felt like inside when she understood it's subtle speech, how she saw and heard and felt the images it carried and yet with a sense that was neither her eyes nor ears nor skin. It was difficult to explain and after a time Enna realized bot that stopped speaking. They head hands as they had then they faced the soldiers and Enna became more aware of Isi.
(K, I need to condense a bit.)
Enna urges isi to feel the heat. Tendrils of heat connected them, as well as breezes. Enna tries to listen and the wind grows. Cold air made her cry.She realizes that she has been clinging to Leifer because the fire was like the last tie between them. She determinds to give it up. Starts to slip. Starts to help Isi, connects skin and spreads heat. Heat lessens a bit but slid over everything so she can't tell her hands from Isi's skin. Isi does the same with Enna. Enna tries to listen again. Wind thrashes and she pushing towards it. Heat flowed between then and wind battered, pushing then together.
Then she hears the wind. It speaks her name and the wind slips away. Enna feels different... and therefore the speech is learned!
That was crazy long. But hopefully this will give you Sia and Dee how to do this. Of course you can always do it your own way, but still copying this rough idea. Espescially since Dee is like knocked out.
Enna and Isi stood facing each other, alone on the paved center of the hilltop. The wind started. At first it was like an army of breezes Isi used to cool the fever, but it swelled so that it tore at Enna's own life heat around her body, pulling it loose and releasing it into the air.
(remember that Isi is giving into the wind)
Then it grew stronger. Her(enna) headscarf came loos and her hair whipped around her face. She began to feel a tearing pain. She opened her mouth to scream, but she could not breath, and the wind rushed into her throat and poured inside her, ripping through her cracked place, gushing through her body.
It was taking something away. She felt fear with the pain, afraid that she was losing all of herself. She could not open her eyes but she reached out and stumbled forwards, her hands fining Isi's. She gripped on to her friend, truing to anchor part of herself before the wind took it all.
Surrender.
She tried. But each time she began to release her carefully fuarded contro of the fired, pain burst from her chest. "If it leaves me, I will die." she thougt, and heald on tighter. Her musceles acjed and trembled, her chest gushed with heat. She fought and struggled, terrified of losing everything.
Enna became concsciou of Isi's hand trembling in hers. She let go and stumbled away and the wind stopped short like a head breath. Enna gasped to fill her lungs and sat on the ground.
(So basically Enna didni't surrender it didn't work. As Klymy says they decide to teach each other the opposite speech since they both already have one, so it wouldn't be to much to do.)
The began by talking low. Enna wanted Isi to know what ashe had learned from the vellum. She ecplained how heat was in the air, where i came from, how she felt it, plucked in, pulled it inside, and the now subconscious ggesture of turning the heat into flame inside her chest. Isi tried to explain how the wind felt when it touched her, what it felt like inside when she understood it's subtle speech, how she saw and heard and felt the images it carried and yet with a sense that was neither her eyes nor ears nor skin. It was difficult to explain and after a time Enna realized bot that stopped speaking. They head hands as they had then they faced the soldiers and Enna became more aware of Isi.
(K, I need to condense a bit.)
Enna urges isi to feel the heat. Tendrils of heat connected them, as well as breezes. Enna tries to listen and the wind grows. Cold air made her cry.She realizes that she has been clinging to Leifer because the fire was like the last tie between them. She determinds to give it up. Starts to slip. Starts to help Isi, connects skin and spreads heat. Heat lessens a bit but slid over everything so she can't tell her hands from Isi's skin. Isi does the same with Enna. Enna tries to listen again. Wind thrashes and she pushing towards it. Heat flowed between then and wind battered, pushing then together.
Then she hears the wind. It speaks her name and the wind slips away. Enna feels different... and therefore the speech is learned!
That was crazy long. But hopefully this will give you Sia and Dee how to do this. Of course you can always do it your own way, but still copying this rough idea. Espescially since Dee is like knocked out.
thanks hannah!do the rebels know how to do that though?
maybe theres one person who does- its not a very well known thing, how to teach a speech, is it?- and they can tell Finn about it.
Hehe.
Welcome Sia. Hehe that's true. :D Or it was changed as it was passed, but it's still basically the same, se knows basically how to.
Welcome Sia. Hehe that's true. :D Or it was changed as it was passed, but it's still basically the same, se knows basically how to.
Oh, Siareen, I'm sorry. I sound terrible in that post. I wasn't trying to be mean or anything. I am so sorry.
its fine. you didnt sound mean. seriously :)i probably should have thought of that myself :)
well, this is me trying to push off a hard scene... silly me
Okay Okay Sia. You'll be great. If you really don't want to do it, I'm willing to for you. But I think you'll be fine just as well. :D Your Dahlia scene was great.







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