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Sarah here is the reply from my male friend:Sorry for the delay, I didn’t make it back into the office yesterday! I’ve just read both parts! Wow, really great! Very well written and thought out and really sexy!! More please! ;)
Darkangel wrote: "Sarah here is the reply from my male friend:Sorry for the delay, I didn’t make it back into the office yesterday! I’ve just read both parts! Wow, really great! Very well written and thought out a..."
Looks like we have ourselves a male beta reader for Growing Old Disgracefully then! Send him chapter 3 and the synopsis.
The hat is half the price likewise the rest of the stuff some a quarter of the price. Sport 2000 are robbing B******s!
Oh I loved it. The dirty little devils!
Oh if I was Marlene and married to the lovely Driscoll, the calendar would be completely full ;o)
Darkangel wrote: "Oh I loved it. The dirty little devils!"Where do I get my ideas from? Please don't ask! No not into bondage, that's from an over stuffed imagination and a little light reading!
Yes because that's because you have the mental picture of Josh Lucas in your head! I have a twist coming up for Marlene later! Pottery Classes indeed!
She's being naughty with her pottery teacher ;o)
Or is she one of the new strippers at the club ;o)
Darkangel wrote: "Or is she one of the new strippers at the club ;o)"Not telling! You will just have to wait and see. I' am going to have one final look at it this afternoon and then I'm going to write a query letter to beat all letters, I will be rep'd for this book! Through sheer bloody mindedness if nothing else!
So not fair - hee hee. I know, I am cheeky, can't help it ;o)
Darkangel wrote: "So not fair - hee hee. I know, I am cheeky, can't help it ;o)"If I tell you everything before I write it you won't be able to give me an unbiased opinion! When I start sending this out I will have to knuckle down and finish HOD! Would you look at that HOD and GOD!
And I will gladly proof read both for you.Works perfectly ;o)
Darkangel wrote: "And I will gladly proof read both for you.Works perfectly ;o)"
Sure does, Sophie is a bit better this lunchtime but she still isn't going swimming!
I don't blame her. Swimming would only make it worse.
I am ok just got back from getting kids to school
8:44 a.m.
Like I was saying yesterday you all are a bit ahead of me
Which is not a huge deal I like talking to people from other places
Trisha wrote: "Morning"Darkangel wrote: "I don't blame her. Swimming would only make it worse."
Morning Trisha!
I had to take her back to school but without her swimming kit!
Sarah wrote: "Trisha wrote: "Morning"Darkangel wrote: "I don't blame her. Swimming would only make it worse."
Morning Trisha!
I had to take her back to school but without her swimming kit!"
Is she sick?
She is pretty quite.It's the easiest form of time travel Trisha ;o)
Darkangel wrote: "She is pretty quite.It's the easiest form of time travel Trisha ;o)"
Lol very true
Trisha wrote: "Sarah wrote: "Trisha wrote: "Morning"Darkangel wrote: "I don't blame her. Swimming would only make it worse."
Morning Trisha!
I had to take her back to school but without her swimming kit!"
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Yes, she has a cold, runny eyes, bunged up nose, chest covered in a thick smearing of Vick's she smells wonderful!
Poor thing I hope she gets feeling better soon
But how comes she went back to school?
Darkangel wrote: "She is pretty quite.It's the easiest form of time travel Trisha ;o)"
No tardis required.
Eva's probably curled up on the sofa with a coffee and chapter three!
I wish i could be curled up on a sofa with a coffee, or maybe just the duvet.
Sarah wrote: "Darkangel wrote: "She is pretty quite.It's the easiest form of time travel Trisha ;o)"
No tardis required.
Eva's probably curled up on the sofa with a coffee and chapter three!"
Yes but a tardis would be nice as long as the dr comes with it
Ahhh - but which dr would you like to visit?
Darkangel wrote: "But how comes she went back to school?"Trisha wrote: "Poor thing I hope she gets feeling better soon"
@Trisha Thanks she was better this lunchtime than this morning. She has the day off tomorrow and I'm sure a little retail therapy in the form of horse riding kit followed by a walk across the beach, and then on to pick up a couple of kilos of mussels for moules mariniere for supper!
@ Darkangel
Sophie stupidly told him I didn't want her going swimming today because of her cold instead of just coming home and me ringing her in sick!
Darkangel wrote: "Ahhh - but which dr would you like to visit?"David of course
Sarah wrote: "Darkangel wrote: "But how comes she went back to school?"Trisha wrote: "Poor thing I hope she gets feeling better soon"
@Trisha Thanks she was better this lunchtime than this morning. She has t..."
I bet it will help
It's sounds like a good day to me too
Darkangel wrote: "Ahhh - but which dr would you like to visit?"I don't remember any except the originals oh and Peter Davidson
Trisha wrote: "Sarah wrote: "Darkangel wrote: "But how comes she went back to school?"this morni..."
Darkangel wrote: "Kids, they never learn - lol"
Nope! Though if she told fibs she would get in trouble and she knows that. So I explained that my fib would have been a white lie because it wasn't really a lie as she was ill!
You try digging your way out of that in French!
Trisha wrote: "Sarah wrote: "Darkangel wrote: "But how comes she went back to school?"Trisha wrote: "Poor thing I hope she gets feeling better soon"
@Trisha Thanks she was better this lunchtime than this morni..."
Oh she'll lap it up, she's a proper girly girl - blonde on the inside! Loves shopping, wearing my high heals which she can almost get away with even if she does wobbles like Aveline from Bread.
Trisha wrote: "I only know the newer ones"Darkangel wrote: "I would have to say David Tennant."
I would have to say, who's he! But then Darkangel is used to me saying that. I am telly deprived I live in France!
Here you go, he could probably be a good Constable Bates in that photo!http://uk.imdb.com/name/nm0855039/
Aww well my hubby is a huge dr who fan
So I get to sit with him and watch with him
Right I am now going to go through the three chapters with a fine toothed comb lokking for pelling errors and floaty commas and stuff!I'm sending you the three together Darkangel have you got time to go through it with me?
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At the moment, I have the sun glaring at me, so squinting to see the screen, shuld only last about 20-30 mins (hopefully)."
I flipping hope so right Ms A chapter three is in your in box!