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Eva wrote: "I think you need soe Barry White"Mmm yes it's possible, but definitely Marvin Gaye's sexual healing! No, the power of love will be good in the pleasure dome when Helen and Cassie take constable Bates into the dome and have their wicked way with him! A menage a trois!
The poor policeman he'll end up dying of a heart attack in the pleasure dome!
Darkangel wrote: "That is the opening line to Relax!"What is? It's a long time since I listened to relax, I know it has homosexual connotations but it will work just as well with BDSM its all Kinky sex!
Eva wrote: "I can't wait to read the next one!"Okay so I take it you're on board for the duration now! Welcome to the Pleasure Dome!
I love it. Waiting in anticpation for the next instalment ;o) I can wait, you know what I am like.
Eva wrote: "The poor policeman he'll end up dying of a heart attack in the pleasure dome!"No that treats reserved for the member of parliament later on in the book!
See with the right music you can make your mind do exactly what you want it to! Even type in time with relax!
Hmmm 1000 words in already. I must ahve the bug this morning.
How can you concetrate in writing with goodreads? I keep on writing a sentence and then stopping to check the messages....
Darkangel wrote: "Has Jo read the first chapter yet?"Not the new version, no, she won't read from the computer my sister will read for me too. Jo likes to wait until she can hold the book in her hot little hands and curl up in a chair with a large glass of rose with the kids in bed and Herve out of the way!
The power of love will be used when Cassie falls in love with one of her partners and things start to change near the end of the book!
That's where I will have the hot and steamy sex scenes, so hot you can almost feel the flames licking at the pages as you turn them!
Easy. I might have to put my earphones on so it looks like I have a tape to type up - hee hee.
you should use "girls just want to have fun"! and "men i feel like a woman"
There is always the song - I touch myself by the Divinyls
Darkangel wrote: "Hmmm 1000 words in already. I must ahve the bug this morning."yay good for you, I am going to defrost the fish for lunch and then get back to poor sergeant
Driscoll who is all tied up at the moment, dick to attention and is just about to get its obligatory top coat on!
Eva wrote: "How can you concetrate in writing with goodreads? I keep on writing a sentence and then stopping to check the messages...."When I write I disappear for a while and then come back and catch up! Helps me formulate the next paragraphs, get them straight in my head before putting them onto paper!
Eva wrote: "you should use "girls just want to have fun"! and "men i feel like a woman""Good choices, hey this film will be a musical extravaganza and films like that are always well received if only to begin with for its music they become cult films. Bring it on I can feel a move to sunnier parts coming with this book, a chateau in Bordeaux preferably chateau neuf du pape!
Darkangel wrote: "There is always the song - I touch myself by the Divinyls"I don't know that one!
Darkangel wrote: "LMAO!"Casie just delared the cream she's massaged his dick with would raise the titanic with a single application!
The lyrics are filthy and would work perfectly, here are some:I love myself
I want you to love me
When I'm feelin' down
I want you above me
I search myself
I want you to find me
I forget myself
I want you to remind me
Chorus:
I don't want anybody else
When I think about you
I touch myself
I don't want anybody else
Oh no, oh no, oh no
You're the one who makes me happy honey
You're the sun who makes me shine
When you're around I'm always laughing
I want to make you mine
and the best one for a striptease is you can leva your hat on, joe cocker!
LMAO - how perfect, not forgetting Hot Stuff!
lol, sarah I think you got yourself a soundtrack!
Eva wrote: "and the best one for a striptease is you can leva your hat on, joe cocker!"No that's been done in the full monty by men, I have Cassie and the truncheon at the point of no return, with play o and Driscoll watching he can't do much else he's a bit tied up at the moment! She is about to welcome him into the pleasure dome! and that will be remixed with relax coming straight in. No pun intended!
Darkangel wrote: "LMAO - how perfect, not forgetting Hot Stuff!"Lol Alain has a singing dog that sings hot stuff, I bought it for him the first christmas we were together! You'll see it when you're over he just loves his cuddly's and the full monty!
How sweet, I am a sucker for cuddly's - no pun intended - LOL
Darkangel wrote: "How sweet, I am a sucker for cuddly's - no pun intended - LOL"I think we steamed the notifications computer up not getting yours now!
Oh boy you are going to love this! We need to try and get a picture of Driscoll, 35ish married wife a bit of a prude, sex is marked on the calendar for the month ahead! He's a player! Lol he's definitely playing away from home overleaf!
He is not too bad looking, if I do say so myself ;o)
Darkangel wrote: "He is not too bad looking, if I do say so myself ;o)"Oh god yes, he works for me, Josh Lucas it is
Think I will have great visions picturing him ;o)
Darkangel wrote: "Think I will have great visions picturing him ;o)"Poor sergeant driscoll he really is being tortured with pleasure! I've even steamed my computer up!
God Damn - you are really teasing me.....
Morning I will be in and out all morning I need to get the kids ready for school and all that jazz
Darkangel wrote: "God Damn - you are really teasing me....."Hey imagine what it's doing to me as I write it! something EL James never achieved with all three books. Alain is so going to get a surprise tonight!
Morning Trisha@ Sarah - you go girl!
Darkangel wrote: "OK look up Josh Lucas on google. http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0524197/"yes, yes yes!!!!
I do have the knack for picking the right guy ;o)
Trisha wrote: "Morning I will be in and out all morning I need to get the kids ready for school and all that jazz"Morning Trisha we're all in Friday mode, its my fault I'm afraid, the new book's got us all steamed up, me especially pity my poor man when he comes in!
Eva wrote: "Darkangel wrote: "OK look up Josh Lucas on google. http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0524197/"yes, yes yes!!!!"
Darkangel wrote: "Morning Trisha
@ Sarah - you go girl!"
Steady there girl, you sound just like Cassie a few moments ago! God it's hot in here, poor Alain won't know what's hit him, I may have to drag him upstairs before lunch! Kidding of course......There is smoke coming out of my printer the pages are that hot!
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She's a stripping granny, her husband dumped her for a newer model and she decided she would fight back she liquidated her assets and joined forces with Helen and opened a nightclub and the two of them are the opening act of the evening - and the policeman are invited next Friday - GILF GILF GILF GILF the new chant!
Oh and I forgot Welcome to the pleasure dome too I am listening to it now!