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Sep 13, 2012 10:10AM
The horse on there is more like a dog or at least I think so
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well she is older...have you got any kids trisha?
Yes I have 2 my son is 10 my daughter is 8
Eva wrote: "better on your own than in bad company.trisha, i sent you a friend request.."
Yes, my philosophy entirely we are just find as we are. When Alain and I marry he will adopt Sophie thereby cutting all links I will then use my new married name too, mind its a bit of a mouthful- Gueveneu! Pronounced gevenur!
Trisha wrote: "Yes I have 2 my son is 10 my daughter is 8"I have three,my son Chris 35, daughter Jo 32 and Sophie 10!
Trisha wrote: "The horse on there is more like a dog or at least I think so"Sophie is starting riding lessons on Saturday!
Right well I'll say goodnight to you both for a while, I will be back on later maybe or if not I'll speak to you both tomorrow!Night
Sarah wrote: "Trisha wrote: "The horse on there is more like a dog or at least I think so"Sophie is starting riding lessons on Saturday!"
How cool I bet she can't wait
I guess I will get some writing done
Pam wrote: "Sarah wrote: "Pam wrote: "Hey everyone, I have a question. If I have posted my poetry on GR is it considered "published on-line"?There is a women's magazine that is opened for submissions and I ..."
No problem. Bedtime now. Night Pam
Trisha wrote: "Sarah wrote: "Trisha wrote: "The horse on there is more like a dog or at least I think so"Sophie is starting riding lessons on Saturday!"
How cool I bet she can't wait"
No she can't Trisha, sorry I have been watching master chef, and now I'm watching the last few minutes of Bones and then I'm off to bed. Talk to you tomorrow.
Night.
Darkangel wrote: "I'm off home, speak to you all later."Good Morning I'm just about to start chapter two.
Morning, Looks like we are both bright and early ;o)
Darkangel wrote: "Morning, Looks like we are both bright and early ;o)"
Sorry I was just spanking Sgnt Driscoll!
Morning, yes I thought about going back to bed but I wanted to get Driscoll into the Pleasure Dome! My equivalent of the red room! If anyone comes in now and starts reading this they'll wonder what we're up to!
Spanking, so early in the day. What a way to start ;o) I am working on a short for the anthology. Was going to change one of my old ones and make it christmassy but started from scratch, had this idea pop in to my head (that doesn't happen often as you well know), only got about 400 words so fat but that is not too bad for starting at 07.30 this morning.
Darkangel wrote: "Spanking, so early in the day. What a way to start ;o) I am working on a short for the anthology. Was going to change one of my old ones and make it christmassy but started from scratch, had thi..."A spanking good Christmas tale I hope! Mind it is for Barnardos and spanking is not something they'd want to associate their charity with I wouldn't wonder. Which is probably a pity because mummy porn is what's selling well at the moment!
I need a cup of coffee I think, with the caffeine!
This is very true. No I'w writing a romantic ghost story, hopefully if I have no work to do I may get a lot more of done too.
I only have to take the clinic over at lunch time and I have already got all the patient notes ;o) So it looks like it is naughty Friday for both of us - hee hee!
Morning!!! Dropped the kids of at school came home and my husband made made more of a mess than the kids did, I'm going to kill him!
That is typical of men Eva - morning by the way.
That story sounds quite good! I wow, you won't believe how exited I am!!!It's getting closer everyday!
I know, so I had better pull my finger out and get going. Well 500 words is not a bad start ;o)
Darkangel wrote: "I only have to take the clinic over at lunch time and I have already got all the patient notes ;o) So it looks like it is naughty Friday for both of us - hee hee!"Oh yes, yes, yeeeees! Well not for me for Cassie and the sergeant, she's just giving him a massage! Oh I am going to have so much fun with this book! Writing tongue in cheek sex is easier than a love/sex/durex scene!
Not bad at all, knowing that it's only cowboy time! By 5 you might have the first draft! It's funny how you do it at work,will you not get into trouble?
No, I have done all my work. I have a clinic later but have already pulled the notes for that and I wont get that typing until Monday morning. So it looks like I am free to be naughty for a change, but not as naughty as dear Sarah there by the sounds of it - lol
Eva wrote: "That story sounds quite good! I wow, you won't believe how exited I am!!!It's getting closer everyday!"Morning Eva, careful there you'll have people wondering what's getting you all excited, with all this talk of spanking and sex this morning! Did you get a few minutes to read chapter one?
Darkangel wrote: "No, I have done all my work. I have a clinic later but have already pulled the notes for that and I wont get that typing until Monday morning. So it looks like I am free to be naughty for a chang..."Not I said the fly it's that little minx Cassie that's getting all the action and if I run short of ideas I can always watch one of Alain's films! A legacy from his single days, if you catch my drift and if I get really stuck I can always email Mrs Robinson and see what she's been up to recently.
Oh I forgot to tell you last Friday she phoned to say she is coming over to her place next Wednesday and then going back to England and after that she's off to America (Again) Pigs will fly and then maybe bacon will be less salty!
Sarah wrote: "Eva wrote: "That story sounds quite good! I wow, you won't believe how exited I am!!!It's getting closer everyday!"Morning Eva, careful there you'll have people wondering what's getting you all e..."
I'll do it right now, I forgot sorry!
Or the price would go up! I am sure I can come up with some true tales that you can adapt for the ever adventures Cassie!
Sarah wrote: "Darkangel wrote: "No, I have done all my work. I have a clinic later but have already pulled the notes for that and I wont get that typing until Monday morning. So it looks like I am free to be n..."Fun way of doing "research" for your book!
Darkangel wrote: "Or the price would go up! I am sure I can come up with some true tales that you can adapt for the ever adventures Cassie!"Eva wrote: "Sarah wrote: "Eva wrote: "That story sounds quite good! I wow, you won't believe how exited I am!!!It's getting closer everyday!"
Morning Eva, careful there you'll have people wondering what's get..."
It's okay Eva, when you get a minute!
Hey Eva, I hope my comments were ok for your Chapter.
still reading but just to let you know I love the word gilf!
Eva wrote: "Sarah wrote: "Darkangel wrote: "No, I have done all my work. I have a clinic later but have already pulled the notes for that and I wont get that typing until Monday morning. So it looks like I a..."Darkangel wrote: "Or the price would go up! I am sure I can come up with some true tales that you can adapt for the ever adventures Cassie!"
Yep, I think between, you, me and Mrs Robinson we can have people in stiches!
Mmm. I'll run that one by Alain this evening I'm sure he'll only be too pleased to help with 'research'!
Eva wrote: "still reading but just to let you know I love the word gilf!"Yes so do we! lol I just thought of something I'm Alains gilf! Now I wonder how I explain gilf in French to Alain no I think that he will understand in English
Hee hee, i can see it will be one of those Friday's - how exciting, just what the doctor ordered to take you in to the weekend.
I love it!!!!But who is cassie? I mean, is she famous or something?
Darkangel wrote: "Hee hee, i can see it will be one of those Friday's - how exciting, just what the doctor ordered to take you in to the weekend."I was just going to say this reminds me of a blonde Friday we had last year you laughed so much I thought you'd have to go shopping for clean undies! It started with me telling Irish that one of us was perfect instead on no ones perfect!
And I just had a cup of full fat coffee so watch out!
Darkangel wrote: "Hey Eva, I hope my comments were ok for your Chapter."Very helpful, I can't believe i missed those typos,and when you mentioned about this - I noticed in the book im reading that there isn't any!
I'm still wondering what is she going to do with the truncheon!
Glad I can help, feel free to send me over the next chapters when you are ready.I have just had my full fat coffee too. The blondes are alive again - hee hee
Those one liners Eva, is what is going to keep me crying all day with laughter.
Eva wrote: "I love it!!!!But who is cassie? I mean, is she famous or something?"No Cassie and Helen are figments of my imagination but I hope it will make me as famous or more so than E L James - because mine has a story behind it and it has comedy, that coupled with the kinky sex should make it a number one bestseller! Film premiere anyone?
You can count me in - it will give me a chance to lose some weight!
No, i know she is product of your imagination, what I mean is that she must be famous to have had a paparazzi making pictures...I think it will be a best seller, it reminds me (kind of) of calendar girls.By the way shazzyloulou in online!
Darkangel wrote: "Those one liners Eva, is what is going to keep me crying all day with laughter."Eva wrote: "I'm still wondering what is she going to do with the truncheon!"
Use your imagination Eva, I'm going too, and see what I come up with!
Wait until you read chapter 2! Hey good music for the Pleasure Dome - Frankie Goes to Hollywood - The Power of Love and Relax when they're bonking! Have them bonking in time to the music!
I can already imagine Kim Cattral playing Cassie!
Hmmm, maybe not the Power of Love - that is just a tad too slow!
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