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Sarah wrote: "Eva wrote: "Sarah wrote: "Darkangel wrote: "excellent, i like your style ;o)"I've changed it somewhat, I'm plumping it out with a little description, not to much or Eva's husband won't read it!"
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Unless your name it's Charles or similiar he will not pick it up!
Darkangel wrote: "hee hee"Eva wrote: "Sarah wrote: "Eva wrote: "Sarah wrote: "Darkangel wrote: "excellent, i like your style ;o)"
I've changed it somewhat, I'm plumping it out with a little description, not to much or Eva's husband wo..."
That's easily sorted my other pseudonym is Leonard R Shaw - we can hoodwink him with that!
Would Madame like to have a read of chapter one, I promise not to change it again today!
Yes Please.Eva - check your in box ;o)
Darkangel wrote: "Yes Please.Eva - check your in box ;o)"
Okay I'll get to it right away, hold on to your sides!
Excellent, you know my thirst for reading ;o)
Sarah wrote: "Darkangel wrote: "Yes Please.Eva - check your in box ;o)"
Okay I'll get to it right away, hold on to your sides!"
yes please! here is my email
egk1uk@yahoo.co.uk
Eva wrote: "Sarah wrote: "Darkangel wrote: "Yes Please.Eva - check your in box ;o)"
Okay I'll get to it right away, hold on to your sides!"
yes please! here is my email
egk1uk@yahoo.co.uk"
Okay I'll send it right away, and Darkangel it should be in your box as I type.
I feel a little out of place hereI am still kinda new here
Trisha wrote: "I feel a little out of place hereI am still kinda new here"
No need to feel out of place just dive in and join in the conversation, we won't bite, promise! Not my genre, biting, I'm romantic comedy, murder thrillers, and mammie porn! You'll get used to us!
She's right Trisha, we are all equal here. Where are you anyway Trisha?@Sarah - OMG - that is hilarious - I love it. My laugh is a little more then normal, on the dirty husky side today as still not feeling great and now the asthma has kicked in, so you can imagine the looks I just got reading that.
My genre is supernatural, paranormal,thriller,romance,mystery, eroticaBasicly I write adult books lol
Darkangel wrote: "She's right Trisha, we are all equal here. Where are you anyway Trisha?@Sarah - OMG - that is hilarious - I love it. My laugh is a little more then normal, on the dirty husky side today as stil..."
I am an Illinois girl
I am born a cockney - eastender. Come from East London but now live in Essex with my partner.
Trisha wrote: "Darkangel wrote: "She's right Trisha, we are all equal here. Where are you anyway Trisha?@Sarah - OMG - that is hilarious - I love it. My laugh is a little more then normal, on the dirty husky ..."
Yep mine too, and just to prove we are friendly I sent you a friends request Trisha.
I guess I am one of few in here from the USA lol
Darkangel wrote: "She's right Trisha, we are all equal here. Where are you anyway Trisha?@Sarah - OMG - that is hilarious - I love it. My laugh is a little more then normal, on the dirty husky side today as stil..."
Good the changes worked then, just wait and see what I have in line for chapter 2 - the opening line will have you in hysterics!
Sarah wrote: "Darkangel wrote: "She's right Trisha, we are all equal here. Where are you anyway Trisha?@Sarah - OMG - that is hilarious - I love it. My laugh is a little more then normal, on the dirty husky ..."
I promise to tell you what I think tomorrow, the kids have came back well hyper from school!
Trisha, welcome that's my kind of books as well.
In here, we are from all over Trisha, and you are not the only American.Sarah, what is the opening line????
Trisha, would you be interested in our Christmas Anthology?
Trisha wrote: "I guess I am one of few in here from the USA lol"Darkangel wrote: "I am born a cockney - eastender. Come from East London but now live in Essex with my partner."
I'm originally from Nottinghamshire but now live in Brittany, France and have done for 9 years. We get one or two Americans in from time to time, Canadians too, but during our daylight hours there are usually just two or three of us. Eva, Darkangel and myself oh and ShazzyLouLou when she comes back from exile she's not been heard of now for over 3 weeks!
Darkangel wrote: "Trisha, would you be interested in our Christmas Anthology?"way to sell it Darkangel! ;)
Sarah wrote: "Trisha wrote: "I guess I am one of few in here from the USA lol"Darkangel wrote: "I am born a cockney - eastender. Come from East London but now live in Essex with my partner."
I'm originally f..."
I seen a message from Shazzyloulou in the tab of show vs tell, i think only wrote 2 words and that's it.
Eva wrote: "Sarah wrote: "Darkangel wrote: "She's right Trisha, we are all equal here. Where are you anyway Trisha?@Sarah - OMG - that is hilarious - I love it. My laugh is a little more then normal, on th..."
Not a problem show your husband tell him my real names Leonard R Shaw and I'm just using a womans name to write due to the nature of the book!
Trisha I'm a spaniard that after living in the uk for so long I speak English better than Spanish, go figure! Oh, living in Barcelona at the moment with my scottish souvenier...:)
I'm off home, speak to you all later.
Darkangel wrote: "In here, we are from all over Trisha, and you are not the only American.Sarah, what is the opening line????"
That would be telling! All I'll say is it carries on with sgnt Driscoll in a very compromising position with Cassie in full leather gear, whip and all! Miss Whiplash!
Darkangel wrote: "I'm off home, speak to you all later."Eva wrote: "Sarah wrote: "Trisha wrote: "I guess I am one of few in here from the USA lol"
Darkangel wrote: "I am born a cockney - eastender. Come from East London but now live in Essex with my partner."
I'..."
Night night! Eva, You know you just liked men in skirts and we all know what Scottsmen keep under their sporran's! Sorry, Growing Old Disgracefully is compulsive! I can't get out of minx mode, woe betide Alain tonight!
Sarah wrote: "Darkangel wrote: "In here, we are from all over Trisha, and you are not the only American.Sarah, what is the opening line????"
That would be telling! All I'll say is it carries on with sgnt Dris..."
Hm! I don't know if that sounds sexy or funny??? can't wait to read it
Sarah wrote: "Darkangel wrote: "I'm off home, speak to you all later."Eva wrote: "Sarah wrote: "Trisha wrote: "I guess I am one of few in here from the USA lol"
Darkangel wrote: "I am born a cockney - eastend..."
lol!
Has anyone seen the new disney film? Brave, I really want to watch it!
Eva wrote: "Sarah wrote: "Darkangel wrote: "I'm off home, speak to you all later."Eva wrote: "Sarah wrote: "Trisha wrote: "I guess I am one of few in here from the USA lol"
Darkangel wrote: "I am born a coc..."
It's a bit of both, naughty, sexy, and downright rude, and I sincerely hope extremely amusing, my kind of humour is dry and sometimes near to the knuckle! Suggestive, playing on words you'll get the gist of it when you reach the end of chapter one.
Eva wrote: "Has anyone seen the new disney film? Brave, I really want to watch it!"No, I'm trying to give them up for lent! See I can't help myself now where did I put the basque and black hold ups? Oh I remember, with the feather boa and the pink cowgirl hat!
Eva wrote: "why do you call yourself sarah?"Because I don't want my late husbands family hanging round when I become rich and famous. They didn't want to know us after he died, and I'm happy to keep it that way. We don't need them,Sophie doesn't know of her other half brother and sisters existence, nor her other aunt and cousins!
Sarah R Weldon is an anagram of my maiden name, likewise Leonard R Shaw! And it got very confusing with three Sharon's!
Sarah wrote: "Eva wrote: "why do you call yourself sarah?"Because I don't want my late husbands family hanging round when I become rich and famous. They didn't want to know us after he died, and I'm happy to ..."
sorry I asked, that sounds like a massive family conflict.
Eva wrote: "Sarah wrote: "Eva wrote: "why do you call yourself sarah?"Because I don't want my late husbands family hanging round when I become rich and famous. They didn't want to know us after he died, and..."
Trisha wrote: "I joined"
Great, sorry we got a little carried away there Trisha.
@ Eva No, no conflict, no contact, no problem. We're happy and I presume they are. The only member of my late husband's family at his funeral was his eldest daughter and her husband the rest of the family didn't even give enough of a damn to say their goodbye's. Not his son, nor his sister or any of his cousins. I made the journey from France, with Sophie and nearly died in the attempt, my brakes failed on the motorway at Thurrock, I managed to get off the motorway using the handbrake.
Wow I guess I was kinda late answering about brave
Trisha wrote: "I have it was neat"Now you have to get your skates on unless like me you have a story you can use in stock!
better on your own than in bad company.trisha, i sent you a friend request..
Trisha wrote: "Wow I guess I was kinda late answering about brave"No problem I realised what you meant, It will be here in France too, but Sophie, my daughter is more into horses than Disney!
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Sarah wrote: "Eva wrote: "How can you write two things at the same time? I'm waiting for feedback from Emme and Darkangel. I'm so scared!!! I've never allowed anyone to read (appart from my mum)much of my writin..."
I am sorry to hear that Eva. How rubbish. Some people are just not worth the time. Good for you to have written a book and had it published. It is not easy. your family should be very proud of you.