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Jun 22, 2012 04:21AM
Might have my sandwich, getting hungry. May have to have some chocolate later.
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Please don't mention chocolate when I am working. It makes me hungry.
LOL - sorry, I need it to keep me working!
Kerry wrote: "Did you receive the email re this post? http://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/9...I'm not sure if he wants comments on his work or help with his grammar."
Yes yesterday and yes he definitely needs help with grammar, probably spelling too, I think he's expecting us to read it Lol.
Kerry wrote: "Please don't mention chocolate when I am working. It makes me hungry."Then if you're body is telling you you're hungry it might be time to listen Lol I have no chocolate, I am waiting for Alain, do you have a feeling of deja vu? I do every day,I wait for my lunch never knowing what time he will roll up!
Sharon wrote: "LOL - sorry, I need it to keep me working!"What happened to the diet for Turkey? Chocolate Ms Atkinson,lol about like the choccie bickies I ate last night! I can make words up too it would seem! Oh sod it I'm going to have another glass of white! Take my mind of the salmon in the oven!
I will be back on my diet next week, it has been one of those days so far. I think back tot he slimfast next week.
Sharon wrote: "I will be back on my diet next week, it has been one of those days so far. I think back tot he slimfast next week."Told you does you no harm to relax the regime, what does you harm is the slimfast, eat low fat proper food!
I do, but where I am stuck at a desk all day, I get no exercise etc.
Sharon wrote: "I do, but where I am stuck at a desk all day, I get no exercise etc."Lol the most exercise I get is walking to and from the washing line!
Sarah R wrote: "Kerry wrote: "Please don't mention chocolate when I am working. It makes me hungry."
Then if you're body is telling you you're hungry it might be time to listen Lol I have no chocolate, I am waiti..."
There is no corolation between choclate and food hunger. Hunger for chocolate is not food hunger like hunger for sex isn't. You can only be satisfied by that one thing. So I have chocolate hunger not food hunger.
Then if you're body is telling you you're hungry it might be time to listen Lol I have no chocolate, I am waiti..."
There is no corolation between choclate and food hunger. Hunger for chocolate is not food hunger like hunger for sex isn't. You can only be satisfied by that one thing. So I have chocolate hunger not food hunger.
So I need to listen and go get some. Can I get it on prescription?
Kerry wrote: "So I need to listen and go get some. Can I get it on prescription?"We wish, mind that would mean paying the doctor 23 Euros for nothing, lol which is absolutely nothing new last time I visited mine he tried to kill me. I am understandably loathed to visit him again, so I think I will bypass the middle man and go straight to the supermarket, how about you?
I just got through writing a scathing email to my publishers demanding he prints my book within the month or he returns all my money, I bluffed him that I have spoken to a solicitor, my wording is curt to say the least. Lots of practise at writing letters of this kind I was a legal secretary in a former life.
Whose boss used to give me a name, an address and start with Dear sir or madam and then say standard letter you've written enough you know the script!
Sharon wrote: "Did you not call him like you said?"Yes but they put the phone down I rang twenty times and each time they did the same thing!
I tried to find a telephone number direct dialling not a freephone to because I will pay for ringing a free phone but not a direct! Stupid isn't it!
He has my telephone number.
How rude of them. That just proves what kind of rip off merchants they really are.
They have opened a new company reporting to raider doing the same thing, they are about to bail out I think and if that happens I will lose my money.Do no touch Purehaven Press it's them disguised!
Sharon wrote: "OMG - what a bunch of W*****S!"Yep I am now going to warn fellow writers through twitter about Purehaven!
That'll teach him to Fcuk with me!
I just asked them a question on Purehaven. Why are you a bunch of lying, thieving b******s? Heeh hee, how naughty of me.
Sharon wrote: "I just asked them a question on Purehaven. Why are you a bunch of lying, thieving b******s? Heeh hee, how naughty of me."
I love it, my letter left him in no doubt I mean business!
I did it its on twitter if you would be so kind ladies every so often retweet it and the others too! Thanking you kindly right and now to sort out Cally's secret and publish with Amazon in ebook first the paperback I'll look into, Oh and I will put copyright on it too as soon as it is in the public domain. under both titles!
I think I'm going with Amazon its free!
Sharon wrote: "Cool"Yep I might put seven candles on there too!
Good for you. what happens after about turning it to print?
Morning All, Woohoo, the sun is finally out, for how long, we don't know! How is everyone today?
Sharon wrote: "Morning All, Woohoo, the sun is finally out, for how long, we don't know! How is everyone today?"
Sharon wrote: "Good for you. what happens after about turning it to print?"
I'll see what the response is on Amazon for the e book and then decide.
We have more of the usual it has rained all yesterday and looks like it is set to continue today and tomorrow morning if the weather people are to be believed!
I have webbed feet, now down to 4 chickens Kentucky fried keeled over in shock at being threatened with expulsion from the house, 'her secret's out'!
She was getting down and dirty with the cockerel when she clutched her breast and keeled over, heart attack, I'm afraid eated her weight in wheat!
Oh dear, poor Kentucky fried!It is quite humid here today, well it is certainly uncomfortable in this shed I call an office.
I am not feeling book 3, finding it quite boring!
Morning - raining here. I am working so quick visit.
Sarah - try Smashwords as well for e books and espresso for print.
Sarah - try Smashwords as well for e books and espresso for print.
Sarah R wrote: "Kerry wrote: "So I need to listen and go get some. Can I get it on prescription?"
We wish, mind that would mean paying the doctor 23 Euros for nothing, lol which is absolutely nothing new last tim..."
Do you not have a carte Vital? - I get doctor's fees reimbursed.
We wish, mind that would mean paying the doctor 23 Euros for nothing, lol which is absolutely nothing new last tim..."
Do you not have a carte Vital? - I get doctor's fees reimbursed.
Sharon wrote: "Oh dear, poor Kentucky fried!It is quite humid here today, well it is certainly uncomfortable in this shed I call an office.
I am not feeling book 3, finding it quite boring!"
Lol I finished it I thought it was better than the second having skirted over their close encounters of the naughty kind, a type of skim reading I did feel she could have missed most of the sex and told the story.
Kerry wrote: "Sarah R wrote: "Kerry wrote: "So I need to listen and go get some. Can I get it on prescription?"We wish, mind that would mean paying the doctor 23 Euros for nothing, lol which is absolutely noth..."
Yes I just prefer life to his alternatives! How are you this morning, I have just come off the telephone with my daughter Jo in Normandy the baby is poorly he has hand, foot and mouth! Not related to foot and mouth though whch is what we both thought.
Bum 11.30 and no lunch prepared for the girls must dash talk to you gals later!
I will persevere with it, I just get the point that this one is dragging a bit and avoiding the actual story!
Sharon wrote: "I will persevere with it, I just get the point that this one is dragging a bit and avoiding the actual story!"The story is there somewhere just waiting to be told without all the heavy breathing!
I made a start on chapter 23 a couple of pages, I'm working out my next move with regard to who knocked Amelia up and how she will come to realise what happened after her mother had killed her and the baby!
Oh goodie, I look forward to it, sounds very intriguing ;o)
Sharon wrote: "Oh goodie, I look forward to it, sounds very intriguing ;o)"Well it's bugging me at the moment, but no doubt within the next two chapters I will have my answer, I think 15 yr old Antonio the Italian stallion may have delivered a pizza to the house,Amelia would have been 3 at the time maybe she will remember the time, I think she may have caught her mother in the act of seducing him. And she had an 'I want what she's having' moment later in life.
I changed some of the prologue too took some stuff out and elaborated on the actions of her mother, cold, calculating.
Very interesting. I was naughty, I did not even touch the boring book this weekend. May have to bring it to work this week and start it.
Sharon wrote: "Very interesting. I was naughty, I did not even touch the boring book this weekend. May have to bring it to work this week and start it."Might help you fall asleep! Why not look on line and see what reviews are available for it and write your essay based on one of those, would save you having to actually read it!
Bad aren't I I am the person that picked up animal farm read the first page and threw it down in disgust, what a load of drivel - I wrote as much in two lines for the essay, my lit teacher was bemused at my response.
Well saying that, I have found a study notes that I have downloaded - very naughty - hee hee
Sharon wrote: "Well saying that, I have found a study notes that I have downloaded - very naughty - hee hee"No life saving, otherwise it would have bored you to death! Pity google wasn't around for Animal Farm!
LOL - Watched the cartoon film and quite enjoyed it but don't think I could read it.
Sharon wrote: "LOL - Watched the cartoon film and quite enjoyed it but don't think I could read it."Trust me nearly as boring as the great gatsby but then again I'm stubborn and having decided it was meant for children I dug my heels in and refused to read it!
Sharon wrote: "Today seems to be dragging!"You're kidding I sat down with a cup of coffee at 2.30 and just woke up and looked at the clock to find it's gone 4! Where did that hour and a half go?
Damn, it has only just gone 3 here, wish it was gone 4.
I didn't sleep at all well last night hence nodding off this afto now I need a cp of proper coffee to wake me up! I should hit 1000 followers today! Amazing!
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