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message 201: by Ji Mei (new)

Ji Mei  (jimei) | 184 comments Evee wrote: "When Nadira passed a woman she heard her talking. Abdel was second in command to the raiders."
((I edited posts 220 and 223. I was confused, 'cause you said that Abdel could lead Nadira to Jaelyn, so I thought that he was a good guy... Is that why you post this? ))


message 202: by Evee (new)

Evee | 522 comments Mod
((Yep. I said Abdel could lead her to Jaelyn, but it's precisely because he is with the raiders that he can do this.))


message 203: by Poet in the Dark (new)

Poet in the Dark (poetinthedark) Akila grit her teeth, cursing slightly. She continued to move away from the spider slowly, squeezing the boy's hand.


message 204: by Poet in the Dark (new)

Poet in the Dark (poetinthedark) Akila scrambled back, dragging the boy with her.


message 205: by Ji Mei (last edited May 23, 2011 03:50PM) (new)

Ji Mei  (jimei) | 184 comments Nadira stopped her running. She looked around and hid herself down an alley to think. If this Abdel is second in command, maybe he would know where my sister is, or maybe Jaelyn. But then how could I know I can trust this man. He wants me to hand over the city after all, as if I had the power to do that. Maybe I could deceive him into taking me to Jaelyn. She was still deciding when she heard a racket around the corner. She slowly inched forward and peered into the street. There was that Abdel, apparently following her. Nadira sighed. Then stepped back into the street, out of hiding.


message 206: by Evee (new)

Evee | 522 comments Mod
((Um, Ji Mei, Abdel wouldn't do that. He may be a part of the raiders but he isn't evil. In that section before he protected Nadira from the raiders. He doesn't know who she is. What possible reason would he follow her? Especially with guys he just got to leave her alone.))


message 207: by Ji Mei (last edited May 23, 2011 03:51PM) (new)

Ji Mei  (jimei) | 184 comments ((Well he was talking to her and she ran away. Plus I edited it))


message 208: by Evee (new)

Evee | 522 comments Mod
The boy gasped and hid his face in Akila's arms.


message 209: by Evee (new)

Evee | 522 comments Mod
Jaelyn stood up unsteadily and turned a 360. It was completely dark, just like every other time she'd woken up. Her hands searched the floor and she touched something still warm, food.

She put her hand to her mouth, thoughtful. Her head was light and suddenly she was angry. Taken here, she'd been in the dark for more than a day. She hadn't been able to do any dancing, which in and of itself made her restless. It was enough, she had to do something. She had to move around.

She pushed the food to the side, leaving the smell by her face. She stretched out one leg and touched it with both of her hand, slowly she rested her forehead on her knee. She'd dance, for that was all she could do for now.


message 210: by Poet in the Dark (new)

Poet in the Dark (poetinthedark) Akila held him tightly, protectively, continuing to back away.


message 211: by Evee (new)

Evee | 522 comments Mod
((He walked away.))


message 212: by Evee (new)

Evee | 522 comments Mod
The boy stared.


message 213: by Poet in the Dark (new)

Poet in the Dark (poetinthedark) Akila took a shaky breath, then stepped forward, "I'm Akila. Thank you, but... never mind."


message 214: by Evee (new)

Evee | 522 comments Mod
The boy looked curiously at her, his eyes wide.


message 215: by Poet in the Dark (new)

Poet in the Dark (poetinthedark) She shook her head, "Nothing."


message 216: by Poet in the Dark (new)

Poet in the Dark (poetinthedark) Akila took the boy's hand and followed Theras. "Where are we going?"


message 217: by Poet in the Dark (new)

Poet in the Dark (poetinthedark) Akila nodded, "Where are you from?"


message 218: by Poet in the Dark (new)

Poet in the Dark (poetinthedark) "Right."


message 219: by Poet in the Dark (new)

Poet in the Dark (poetinthedark) She nodded, "Yes."


message 220: by Poet in the Dark (new)

Poet in the Dark (poetinthedark) Akila blinked and waited, figuring Theras had something in mind.


message 221: by Poet in the Dark (new)

Poet in the Dark (poetinthedark) Figures, Akila thought to herself. "Where are we going?"


message 222: by Poet in the Dark (new)

Poet in the Dark (poetinthedark) Akila nodded, then frowned. "I'm trying to get to the raiders. They captured a friend of mine."


message 223: by Poet in the Dark (new)

Poet in the Dark (poetinthedark) Akila smiled, "Glad to finally meet someone who's a friend, not an enemy."


message 224: by Poet in the Dark (new)

Poet in the Dark (poetinthedark) "I know how that is," Akila said, remembering how she used to be.


message 225: by Evee (new)

Evee | 522 comments Mod
((oops sorry.))


message 226: by Evee (new)

Evee | 522 comments Mod
((All the way back to the comment where I said her and was supposed to say him.))

The boy walked behind them, listening.


message 227: by Evee (new)

Evee | 522 comments Mod
(( :) ))

He smiled, not saying a word. Then he gave him/her a hug, nestling against Theras.


message 228: by Evee (new)

Evee | 522 comments Mod
"Life is Beautiful." said the little boy as he stepped back and grinned.


message 229: by Poet in the Dark (new)

Poet in the Dark (poetinthedark) Akila smiled as the boy finally spoke, "What's your name?"


message 230: by Evee (new)

Evee | 522 comments Mod
The little boy shrugged and giggled, pointing at a small cactus on the side of the path. It had a flower on top, a Cholla cactus.


message 231: by Evee (new)

Evee | 522 comments Mod
He nodded, and kneeling beside the cactus he picked a flower and smelt it. He offered it to them.


message 232: by Evee (new)

Evee | 522 comments Mod
Cholla raised a brow and tucked the flower in his shirt, resolutely walking down one of the dustier paths.


message 233: by Poet in the Dark (new)

Poet in the Dark (poetinthedark) ((Soo... um, now what?))

Akila followed them quietly, thinking.


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