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message 651: by Madeline (new)

Madeline (maddiekins) | 691 comments ((Does he look human? He sounds cool... for a bad guy.))

Owen's skin prickled and he shuddered, he frowned and glanced out the window. "I hope we get there soon." He mumbled, deciding to ignore the foreboding feeling he had suddenly got.


βεℓℓα のαωη  | 1566 comments ((he looks totally human. I called him an "it" and "creature" cuz...... Just look at profile....))


message 653: by Madeline (new)

Madeline (maddiekins) | 691 comments ((Yeah I saw :D))


βεℓℓα のαωη  | 1566 comments Calin went through the halls of the lab. His old domain, all ruined. He was actually relieved, and satisfied. These people had destroyed his life. Calin moved out, walked along in the sun. He wanted to burn the lab, but at the same time, he couldn't. Calin walked along the road, he found some fresh tire tracks. He ran at a steady pace, following it. After two hours, he wasn't even breathing heavily. He stopped. He closed his eyes to focus and soon something rose from the ground. The spirit of a horse. It became solid and Calin mounted. The horse was dead, and so felt no pain or anything, and went the distance that normally wouldve taken a few hours only took twenty minutes. Calin saw a bus, and he became invisible, as did the horse, and as he passed it he saw the tip of a golden wing. An experiment. Calin stayed close to the bus. They had come from the same place he had. None of the experiments he recognized though, they had been made after him. As the bus moved for another hour, a sudden death hit Calin. He winced. Then another. What was happening to cause so many deaths? And so close? Maybe thirty or fifty at once. It made Calin tremble, he had to materialize and he cried out. He lost control of his connection to the dead and suddenly spirits came up out of the earth, screaming, animals and humans both. They needed something to direct their pain, and the bus was the perfect thing. They struck it and knocked it to it's side. Calin stared at them, and suddenly the horse under him went wild, he fell to the ground, and the horse ran to the bus. Calin cursed himself, he had lost control. He still felt the pain from the fifty or so deaths, and he was too raw to the world as of yet, having being locked away for years.


βεℓℓα のαωη  | 1566 comments Aiden cried out as the bus suddenly jerked and tipped to it's side. He knocked his head on the benches and moaned, the glass was being broken and flew everywhere.

((time to see how u guys can type a battle scene :D))


message 656: by Catherine (new)

Catherine Lee soon wakes up, not knowing she was on Owen's lap. "are we there yet?"


βεℓℓα のαωη  | 1566 comments ((Ah! U do kno spirits are attacking u guys right? Lol))


βεℓℓα のαωη  | 1566 comments ((lol, it is fri night tho, most are probably at movies or sleep over. I'm babysitting my 4 younger bros while my parents are out :D))


message 659: by Catherine (new)

Catherine ((i did not know that...))


βεℓℓα のαωη  | 1566 comments ((ah. I used to do soccer, English horse riding, basketball, volleyball, and now I am doing video games :D lol))


βεℓℓα のαωη  | 1566 comments ((what do u do?))


βεℓℓα のαωη  | 1566 comments ((haha *high five* I like metriod and some PSP games and computer games like online games, I'm trying to do GuildWars, but my dad says I have to wait till summer... My mom wants me to go into ballet..... I hate ballet.... :P))


βεℓℓα のαωη  | 1566 comments ((I am a girl fyi... Lol :D yeah I took it when I was four... Then I got older , six. And decided I hated it))


βεℓℓα のαωη  | 1566 comments ((I'm the only girl w/ four younger bros .... Not much of a doll lover either.... I played with animals when I was young or my bros' army men or dragons or legos or cars))


message 665: by Maddie (new)

Maddie  | 640 comments Mod
((Um whats going on in the RP??))


βεℓℓα のαωη  | 1566 comments ((ah, yes. Lol I wasn't too good at soccer tho, stopped after three years when I was eleven or twelve.... What do u mean by the way I talk?????))


βεℓℓα のαωη  | 1566 comments ((just read post 672..... But read Calin's profile first :D))


βεℓℓα のαωη  | 1566 comments ((oh and post 667.....))


message 669: by Madeline (new)

Madeline (maddiekins) | 691 comments ((Well I don't have a life so I'm always home friday night lol))

Owen's eyes widened in shock as the buss tipped over, he grabbed Lee before they fell so he could break her fall. He winced as he hit the ground and slowly sat up. He looked around to make sure no one was badly injured.


βεℓℓα のαωη  | 1566 comments ((I usually would have gone to a sleepover.... Just that my best friend in the whole wide world moved T.T but she ain't too far, just a few miles, but still! I'm sick right now anyway :P))

((lol I can't wait to see how Troy will react to all this ;D))


βεℓℓα のαωη  | 1566 comments ((kk, so I added something to Aiden's Apperance.......))

Aiden's eyes became red instead of golden. He burst through the wall of the bus, making a large hole in it. He jumped onto a spirit of a distorted animal and tore into it with his hands, the spirit howled and dropped to the ground, melting into it. Aiden instantly flashed over to a human spirit, took it's head in his hands and snapped it's neck, and it also faded into the ground. Aiden snarled, kicked, bit, tossed and killed as many creatures he could get his hands, or teeth, on.


message 672: by Madeline (new)

Madeline (maddiekins) | 691 comments ((Probably with a battle cry lol))

Owen frowned and searched for someone he trusted to take charge. Troy? No he'd probably want to fight. Roan? She'd probably want to fight as well. Neves maybe? "Hey Neves, do you mind making sure everyone's alright and getting them to safety? I feel like smashing heads together."


βεℓℓα のαωη  | 1566 comments Aiden took down two more, then ripped the arm off a man's body with his teeth, punched him in the gut hard enough to kill anything living and it faded. Then Aiden saw Calin. He didn't think, the last time Aiden had thought was before the bus had tipped. All he knew was that this person was responsible for maybe seriously hurting the people who had helped him. He screeched the cry of an eagle, leapt over the spirits and almost landed on Calin, but he had jumped back, out of the way. Calin narrowed his eyes and Aiden went forward. He didn't know how to use his wing yet so he ran towards Calin. Calin sidestepped to the left, grabbed Aiden's arm as he passed, turned him around to face him and jabbed him painfully hard in the chest. Aiden flew back and hit the bus, moaning and breathing heavily. His eyes were slowly returning back to golden, and when they were, he slouched down and closed his eyes. Calin muttered under his breath, looking at the spirits. This was getting out of hand. He needed to learn to take control again. And he could do nothing here. So he left the spirits and disappeared.


message 674: by Maddie (new)

Maddie  | 640 comments Mod
((Will you just tell me I don't have very much time..))


βεℓℓα のαωη  | 1566 comments ((gtg nite! Ttfn! :D))

((..... Ta Ta for now!!))


message 676: by βεℓℓα のαωη (last edited Feb 11, 2011 11:04PM) (new)

βεℓℓα のαωη  | 1566 comments ((Calin woke.... Lost control of spirits... They now attacking the bus...))


message 677: by Maddie (new)

Maddie  | 640 comments Mod
Troy was already out side the bus hoping everyone was okay, but what ever this was that put his friends in danger deserved a part of him.


βεℓℓα のαωη  | 1566 comments Aiden woke a little. He felt dizzy and light headed. He opened his eyes and stared at the spirits. How.... what were they? Azer tried to stand, but once he attempted to lift his head pain shot through him, he felt something warm go down the back of his neck. He knew it was blood. He moved his head so he wasn't laying on the wound and took some deep, slow breaths. How had he been hurt? The bus was tipped over. Had he fallen out? No, he wouldve went the other way.... Aiden lost control of his thoughts and everything went black.


hypocrite clams... | 402 comments Neves regained consciousness, and her mechanical limbs kicked in, sensing that she was half awake. Her arm changed into a gun, and her leg forced her to her feet. She allowed them to act, her head throbbing, and the sticky, warm liquid--blood, she assumed--seeped through her tank-top. Something had pierced her shoulder. Great.


βεℓℓα のαωη  | 1566 comments ((kk, I bored, Aiden unconscious, so this is mainly just something for me to write and u guys to read if you want.... ;D))

Calin saw the town. There were bodies laid everywhere. There had been a gang shoot out. That's why. Usually people felt tense when they walked where people had just died, uncomfortable. Calin just felt empty. He knew the spirits had moved on, the bodies were just shells. Empty, and useless. He stepped over them and walked through the streets. All the people were hiding somewhere further into the town, waiting until the shooting stopped. Calin shook his yellow hair out of his face and looked at the empty place around him with light purple/blue eyes. He sighed and went into one of the stores. He grabbed a black back pack and started to stuff it with things that he really needed. Then he walked out and saw the police starting to come, too late to stop the shooting. Calin went into an alley,went through a fence and kept on going. He needed to find a place to hide, a building, a cave, never, though, never underground. Not if he could help it.

((btw, I'm thinking they're inArizona......))


βεℓℓα のαωη  | 1566 comments Calin peered around. Dusty, lots of boxes, wires, pipes. This attic of one of the tall, buisness buildings was quiet, though. Dark, granted, but there was a small window with horizontal bars that allowed a little light. Calin sat down in the corner, and closed his eyes. It was time to exercise and strengthen his power, starting with wandering around the place many called the veil. The place where spirits crossed when they were born, and when they died.


message 682: by Madeline (new)

Madeline (maddiekins) | 691 comments ((Well Owen asked Neves a question but I guess she didn't hear since she was unconscious. I was asleep until 2!))

"Neves?" Owen made his way over to her. "You alright?"


message 683: by Maddie (new)

Maddie  | 640 comments Mod
Troy turned and saw Neves, "Neves? Neves. You okay? What happened?"


message 684: by Madeline (new)

Madeline (maddiekins) | 691 comments ((4... I think.))

"Bus tipped over, remember?" Owen reminded Troy. "Do you think you could get everyone to safety?" He asked the minotaur. He wanted to kick some spirit ass even more now.


message 685: by Maddie (new)

Maddie  | 640 comments Mod
"Yeah no problem. And sorry I was putting a tracker spell I took from a book on the thing that tipped us." Troy huffed and helped Neves away from the crash to sit in the grass.


message 686: by Madeline (new)

Madeline (maddiekins) | 691 comments ((Oh, so you did. I'll skype until I have to go, which I'm guessing is soon... If you're still on.))

"Thanks!" Owen called after him then he left Daemona in Lee's care and climbed his way out of the bus. As soon as he landed on the ground he was engaged in a fight with a spirit. The fight was soon over and moved on to another spirit, which he incidentally set on fire. Damn, gotta be careful...


message 687: by Madeline (new)

Madeline (maddiekins) | 691 comments ((*sigh* Ttyl!))

Owen was caught off guard by that statement and narrowly missed getting sliced. "Uh, thanks. I don't have much experience." He felt his blood heating up and vainly tried to cool it off my blowing on his skin. The spirit was set aflame in seconds. "Shit." Maybe he could pass it off as a lighter he kept hidden in his sleeve?

((He may be a bit different but he's still Owen...))


message 688: by Madeline (new)

Madeline (maddiekins) | 691 comments ((Lol, I'd rather use ttyl))

"A-ability? Whatever do you mean?" Owen's eyes were wide. Damn, he found out! Just play it cool... you're just a normal human being and in no way is your dna mixed with a phoenix. Another spirit was set on fire and his eyes turned red. Not good.


message 689: by Madeline (new)

Madeline (maddiekins) | 691 comments "Oh, I have a lighter. I figured since they're spirits they'd catch on fire pretty easily." Owen shrugged and kept on fighting, turning his back on the guy. Bad phoenix blood, bad. Now is not a good time to be acting up. His blood, of course, ignored him and kept lighting the spirits on fire. It was getting to the point where his skin was starting to burn. "It would be nice if this was controllable." He grumbled.


message 690: by Maddie (new)

Maddie  | 640 comments Mod
Troy had gotten the people to safety and smiled. He ran over to Owen "Hey phoenix go take a brake and figure out your skin!" he kicked a shadow and it fell apart.


message 691: by Madeline (new)

Madeline (maddiekins) | 691 comments ((I gotta go be a camera man... be back later!))

"Red?" Owen laughed. "Must be a trick of the light." He gritted his teeth. He was gonna sprout flaming wings soon and there wasn't much he could do to cover that up. "Anyways this conversation was lovely and I wish I could stay and chat some more but I should go." He grinned and waved then dashed off in the direction Troy was taking people to safety.


message 692: by Madeline (last edited Feb 12, 2011 09:54PM) (new)

Madeline (maddiekins) | 691 comments ((Yes for a valentines day video for my mom's website. Don't worry, it's nothing graphic. :D))

Owen fell flat on his face, he sat up fast spitting dirt out of his mouth. At least the dirt distracted him from the pain of his wings growing out of his shoulder blades. But not for long. He hissed out a cry of anguish and bit his lip until his wings were done growing.
"Damn it, it never used to hurt this bad. You'd think it'd hurt less and less the more it happened." He glanced over his shoulder at the person who knocked him over. It wasn't anybody he knew. "Excuse me sir." He nodded politely to him and took off into the air. He'd get to the other's faster and it wasn't like he had to hide his abnormality anymore.


message 693: by Madeline (new)

Madeline (maddiekins) | 691 comments ((Chicken nuggets! Brb, I'm on skype btw.))

"What the hell? Now is not a good time." Owen growled and landed a few feet away from the group of people that Troy had brought to safety. "Okay gotta get rid of these, and fast." He glanced between each wing, thinking fast.


βεℓℓα のαωη  | 1566 comments Aiden gave a soft moan. His head still hurt, he was slowly coming to. He still lay against the bus where he had been thrown. By who? Aiden didn't remember being thrown at all. He opened his eyes a little. The bus was tipped over? Why was it tipped over? He tried to lift himself up, but the pain and heavy darkness in the back of his head stopped him.


βεℓℓα のαωη  | 1566 comments ((lol. :D))

Aiden heard a faint vibration in the ground, and a humming that grew to a roaring, as something got closer. He turned his head slowly and saw something like the bus, but smaller. "Roan?" He didn't remember what had happened. He didn't remember the bus tipping or flying out and fighting. He did know that he was worried that Roan was hurt, or worse. The first person that had actually helped him. He wanted to help her in return, he wanted to protect, but if she was hurt.. Then he had failed again. He tried to look around, but found no sign of Roan.


message 696: by Maddie (new)

Maddie  | 640 comments Mod
Troy sighed, "Aiden move quickly!" He snapped his patience were running out for the new experimental.


βεℓℓα のαωη  | 1566 comments ((did u read what aiden did? When the spirits attacked? How he went into frenzy and then Calin threw him and he hit the bus, and now is bleeding on the back of his head... ))

Aiden heard Troy and his focus snapped into place. He pulled himself to his feet, stumbled over to Troy and fell to his knees behind him, clutching the back of his head with one hand and keeping himself from eating dirt with the other. "I'm sorry I couldn't be more help..." Aiden said quietly. He didn't recognize the feeling of wet, warm sticky liquid between his fingers on the back of his head. He knew it was to blame if he passed out again.


message 698: by Madeline (new)

Madeline (maddiekins) | 691 comments Owen made a quick decision and jumped into the air flying towards Aiden and grabbing him off the ground. "Be careful not to touch my skin." He warned and flew back to the group.


βεℓℓα のαωη  | 1566 comments Aiden looked up at Owen, but the movement made him dizzy. "Huh...?" He went slightly limp, but he wasn't unconscious this time. "What's wrong?"


message 700: by Maddie (new)

Maddie  | 640 comments Mod
"We need to get cover from the humans." Troy said gruffly with a painful smile.

Rohak stood in the bushes he had luckily not been seen making a dash for it.

Kristen was already in the forest by the safe spot she was bringing the plants to life and curing the water.


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